骄傲的。作文

showgood07UID: 2605959

Topic: Government should pay more attention to health care issues than on environment issues.

If you are a serious oberver of life, perhaps you have found the fact that a large number of governments has already regarded health care as the focal point of the work, health care is a propellant which is the assurance of a national long-term stability. However, environment is a more urgent problem which has already jeopardized to human's life and descendants' existence, such as atmospheric pollution, water pollution, light pollution and so on so forth. For my part, government should pay more attention to envirnment issues than health care isses.

First of all, increasing pollution not only would cause serious problem such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet, this is a matter of life and death-a matter no country can afford to overlook and any government which is blind to this point may pay heavy price. For instance, there is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem, the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it, effectual policy of prevent the air pollution will contribute directly to ameliorate the currently disagreeable air quality. As we know, the carbon dioxide is the murderer who is warm of the climate, this is a mainly reason of the green-house effect and the sea level rises which cause a mass of people's existence to be threatened. Thus, government have responsibility to improve environment issues, in view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

Moreover, centring on the environmental problem, more and more expansion of international cooperation between each country, each government is devoted to dealing with environmental problem, and other relevant problems that the environmental problem initiate. The Copenhagen conference set a good example. It is a response that should be made to environmental problem as the United Nations which opened in Copenhagen, more than 15,000 delegates and observers from nearly 200 countries attending what is being billed the last best chance for an agreement to combat global warming. Their task is to find common ground, including on reduction of greenhouse gas emissions, promotion and transfer of new more eco-friendly technology and the necessary funding to make this possible, especially for the less developed and poorer nations. It also means coming up with long term vision and cooperation for the future.

Admittly, health care can improve people's environmental protection consciousness too, but it is not as severe and urgent as environmental problem, I have to acknowledge the necessity of health care, they less hazards consuming, less illness consuming, easier to manipulate condition of one’s own and so on. But all of these benefits have a prerequisite: the environment determines health care. Without good environment, health care will loses all its functions.

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that government should pay more attention to environment issues than on health care issues. No matter which kind of reason, environment issues is problems that should be solved at first

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If you are a serious oberver of life, perhaps you have found the fact that a large number of governments has already regarded health care as the focal point of the work, health care is a propellant which is the assurance of a national long-term stability. However, environment is a more urgent problem which has already jeopardized to human's life and descendants' existence, such as atmospheric pollution, water pollution, light pollution and so on so forth. For my part, government should pay more attention to envirnment issues than health care isses.& I$ ^/ i7 f2 y( ]: n

First of all, increasing pollution not only would cause serious problem such as global warming（TS里面不要有细节化的东西） but also could threaten to end human life on our planet, this is a matter of life and death-a matter（没看懂求教） no country can afford to overlook and any government which is blind to this point may pay heavy price. For instance, there is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem, the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it, effectual policy of prevent the air pollution will contribute directly to ameliorate the currently disagreeable air quality. As we know, the carbon dioxide is the murderer who is warm of the climate, this is a mainly reason of the green-house effect and the sea level rises which cause a mass of people's existence to be threatened. Thus, government have responsibility to improve environment issues, in view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. 0
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Moreover, centring on the environmental problem, more and more expansion of international cooperation between each country, each government is devoted to dealing with environmental problem, and other relevant problems that the environmental problem initiate（这句话你只是在陈述环境问题印发后的做法但没有陈述为什么环境值得政府花大力去处理。简而言之，就是和主题无关）. The Copenhagen conference set a good example. It is a response that should be made to environmental problem as the United Nations which opened in Copenhagen, more than 15,000 delegates and observers from nearly 200 countries attending what is being billed the last best chance for an agreement to combat global warming. Their task is to find common ground, including on reduction of greenhouse gas emissions, promotion and transfer of new more eco-friendly technology and the necessary funding to make this possible, especially for the less developed and poorer nations. It also means coming up with long term vision and cooperation for the future（哥本哈根的例子很好，如果放在GRE或者GMAT是好例子，但是你缺乏去陈述为什么政府要去做环境，难道就是因为环境能促进合作么？）." a& （）J4 @8 D  e( [

Admittly, health care can improve people's environmental protection consciousness too, but it is not as severe and urgent as environmental problem, I have to acknowledge the necessity of health care, they less hazards consuming, less illness consuming, easier to manipulate condition of one’s own and so on. But all of these benefits have a prerequisite: the environment determines health care. （这里可以举个例子说说为什么determine）Without good environment, health care will loses all its functions.

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句子很多不错学习了，总的来说还是蛮好的，body2有待完善

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If you are a serious observer of life, perhaps you have found the fact that governments have already regarded health care as the focal point of the work, and health care is a propellant to assure nation’s long-term stability. However, environment is a more urgent problem which has already jeopardized to human's life and descendants' existence, such as atmospheric pollution, water pollution, light pollution and so on so forth. For my part, government should pay more attention to envirnment issues than health care isses.

First of all, increasing pollution not only would cause serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to human life on our planet, this is a matter of life and death-a matter no country can afford to overlook and any government blind to this point may pay heavy price. For instance, there is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem…The authorities should take strong measures to deal with it. Effectual policy of preventing the air pollution will contribute directly to ameliorate current disagreeable air quality. As we know, the carbon dioxide is the murderer of global warming. This is a main reason of the green-house effect and the sea level rises which lead a mass of people's dwelling places to be threatened. Thus, government have responsibility to improve environment issues, in view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

Moreover, centering on the environmental problem, more and more expansion of international cooperation between each country, each government is devoted to dealing with environmental problem, and other relevant problems that the environmental problem initiate. The Copenhagen conference set a good example. It is a response that should be made to environmental problem as the United Nations which opened in Copenhagen, more than 15,000 delegates and observers from nearly 200 countries attending what is being billed the last best chance for an agreement to combat global warming. Their task is to find common ground, including on reduction of greenhouse gas emissions, promotion and transfer of new more eco-friendly technology and the necessary funding to make this possible, especially for the less developed and poorer nations. It also means coming up with long term vision and cooperation for the future.


Admittedly, health care can improve people's awareness of environmental protection, but it is not as severe and urgent as environmental problem is, health care takes less hazard, less illness consuming, easier to manipulate condition of one’s own and so on. But all of these benefits have a prerequisite: the environment determines health care. Without good environment, health care will loses all its functions.(这段话缺乏论证)

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that government should pay more attention to environment issues than on health care issues. No matter which kind of reason, environment issues is problems that should be solved at first!

rjyuuUID: 2591508

If you are aserious oberver of life, perhaps you have found the fact that a large number ofgovernments has already regarded health care as the focal point of the work,（好开头
学习了）
health care is a propellant（somethingthat propels: as a : an explosive for propelling projectiles b : fuel plusoxidizer used by a rocket engine c : a gas kept under pressure in a bottle orcan for expelling the contents when the pressure is released）which is the assurance of a national long-term stability. However, environmentis a more urgent problem which has already jeopardized to human's life and descendants'existence, such as atmospheric pollution, water pollution, light pollution and so on so forth. For my part, governmentshould pay more attention to envirnment issues than health care isses.
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)c0 f! I6 a& Y3 A* UFirst of all, increasingpollution not only would cause serious problem such as global warming but alsocould threaten to end human life on our planet, this is a matter of life and death-amatter no country can afford to overlook and any government which is blind tothis point may pay heavy price.（虽然是范文。。。沉重的代价？有点CHINglish的嫌疑哦）
（. This is a matter of life and death-a matter no governmentcan afford to ignore. （我没看过范文。。。可是这句话我见过==））For instance, there is no denying thefact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem, the city authoritiesshould take strong measures to deal with it, effectual policy of prevent(ing)the air pollution will contribute directly to ameliorate（ing）
the currently disagreeableair quality. As we know, the carbon dioxide is the murderer who is warm of theclimate, this is a mainly reason of the green-house effect and the sea levelrises which cause a mass of people's existence to be threatened. Thus,government have responsibility to improve environment issues, in view of theseriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before thingsget worse. 8 p( k. ]+ ^6 T
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Moreover, centring on the environmentalproblem, more and more expansion ofinternational cooperation between each country, each government is devoted todealing with environmental problem, and other relevant problems that theenvironmental problem initiate. The Copenhagen conference seta good example. It is a response that should be made to environmentalproblem as the United Nations which opened in Copenhagen, more than 15,000delegates and observers from nearly 200 countries attending what is beingbilled the last best chance for an agreement to combat global warming. Theirtask is to find common ground, including on reduction of greenhouse gasemissions, promotion and transfer of new more eco-friendly technology and thenecessary funding to make this possible, especially for the less developed andpoorer nations. It also means coming up with long term vision and cooperationfor the future.(这个
没看出怎么能用Moreover)


Admittly,health care can improve people's environmental protection consciousness too,but it is not as severe and urgent as environmental problem, I have toacknowledge the necessity of health care, they less hazards consuming, lessillness consuming, easier to manipulate condition of one’s own and so on. Butall of these benefits have aprerequisite: the environment determines health care. Without good environment, health care will loses all its functions.(?)

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From what havebeen discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that government shouldpay more attention to environment issues than on health care issues. No matterwhich kind of reason, environment issues is problems that should be solved atfirst
第二点算什么吗
怎么能用现状当并列的例子呢
IBT没那么一本正经
义正言辞~
感觉
能多一些亲切的例子就好了
拼写
词汇
语法底子很棒
很多词很有表现力
加油！！

rjyuuUID: 2591508

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怎么一回复就这么支离破碎的。。。

showgood07UID: 2605959

Topic: Young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term.

Perhaps many people have considerated such a question frequently: whether should people try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term. Because they allow for different choices can bring different advantages to them. Different people have different choice bese on they different position, experience and view of world and valuable. However, I deem that their behavior are understandable without young people which are group should be rich in the passion, adventurism, go-aheadism, undoubtly, this opinion will win my preference.

Admittedly, everybody wants to have a steady job，many young people always go into rapture at the merely mention of a comfortable and satisfactory job, and they seem to be attracted by Physical and mental fulfillment. There is nothing, they maintain, that can be comparede with good job. In fact，a steady job, has become a lot of people's first-selection, and people equate success in life with the good job. However, many people seem to overlook the basic fact that young people should regard studying the skill and accumulating experience as primary goal. Choose different work to have an opportunity to obtain more experience and master more skills, and broaden our outlook. Myself is a very good example：in May of 2009, I am worked in CCTV, but four months later, I left there. Someone will think my choice is unwisely, because my behavior makes me lose a very good job. Until I enter the centre of propagates and exchange, still someone queries my choice, but I have got the chance of exercise more than before when I was in CCTV, these are two totally different fields which lets me accumulate more experience.

Secondly, different job will make us know the persons of different fields, establish more interpersonal relationships which have very important function in the contemporary society, even can determine a person's job prospect. In the afterwards, we will meet different difficulties, various interpersonal relationships will play an important role and accomodate us to solve the problem. Just think such a situation: when a young man meets difficulty in some field, but he can not be helped, an important reason is he lacks of the friends who are the experts in this field. However, he changes a job, makes him realize some friends of different fields, so, when he met the same question again, he got help.

What’s more, different job accomodate us find out which kind job is most suitable for us, changing work should be determined according to the needs of society. Trying different jobs constantly, can help to find out about the demand of the society.

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that Young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term. In other word, people's life is limited, but we have different choices, young people should try different experience.

glly7UID: 2675646

Topic: Young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term.
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Perhaps many people have considerated such a question frequently: whether should people try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term（建议换成同意表达）. Because they allow（allowinging） for different choices can bring different advantages to them. Different people have different choice bese (based)on they different position, experience and view of world and valuable（value）. However, I deem that their behavior are understandable without young people which are group should be rich in the passion, adventurism, go-aheadism, undoubtly, this opinion will win my preference.' q: w/ W9 u; B0 C
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Admittedly, everybody wants to have a steady job，many young people always go into rapture at the merely(mere吧，135句里面出现了好几次，大都是mere，我觉得看词性的话应该是，你觉得呢) mention of a comfortable and satisfactory job, and they seem to be attracted by Physical and mental fulfillment. There is nothing, they maintain, that can be comparede（compared） with good job. In fact，a steady job, has become a lot of people's first-selection, and people equate success in life with the good job. However, many people seem to overlook the basic fact that young people should regard studying the skill and accumulating experience as primary goal. Choose different work to have an opportunity to obtain more experience and master more skills, and broaden our outlook. Myself is a very good example(好别扭，换种表达方式比较好)：in May of 2009, I am worked in CCTV, but four months later, I left there. Someone will（may,would 比较好） think my choice is unwisely, because my behavior makes me lose a very good job. Until I enter the centre of propagates and exchange, still someone queries my choice, but I have got the chance of exercise more than before when I was in CCTV, these are two totally different fields which lets me accumulate more experience.
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Secondly, different job will make us know the persons of different fields, establish more interpersonal relationships which have very important function（s） in the contemporary society, even can determine a person's job prospect. In the afterwards, we will meet different difficulties, various interpersonal relationships will play an important role and accomodate us to solve the problem. Just think such a situation: when a young man meets difficulty in some field, but he can not be helped(建议but 后面的换成helpless), an important reason is he lacks of the （has few）friends who are the experts in this field. However, he changes a job, makes him realize some friends of different fields, so, when he met the same question again, he got help.（这段后面的例子蛮好的）
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What’s more, different job accomodate us find out（？？？） which kind job is most suitable for us, changing work should be determined according to the needs of society. Trying different jobs constantly, can help to find out about the demand of the society.

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that Young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term. In other word, people's life is limited, but we have different choices, young people should try different experience.
  呵呵，又是一起合作
1.全文上下对主题句的表达你基本用的是一个句型，词也没有进行同意变换。比如different 从开头到结尾都是的，various ,distinct 等都是可以等换的
2.全文基本是大都市一个主谓宾句式，这样不太好喔，建议用用 动词ing 形式作主语之类的，会对你文章有很大的作用的，好几个句子好像是135里面的原句吧，建议句式不变，词语什么之类的换换比较好，相信那句子是用来模仿。
3. 个人感觉文章很多句子有些汉化现象，比如an important reason is he lacks of the （has few）friends who are the experts in this field 如果换成 an important reason lies in the fact that he has few friends who are experts in field 多少会好点吧，呵呵，实力有限，个人观点，有什么意见欢迎一起讨论哦
大概是这些吧，在发现了会再补充的，，，

glly7UID: 2675646

忘了说了，第三段那个例子用的蛮好的，呵呵，学习

showgood07UID: 2605959

Topic: Do you agree or disagree that improving schools is the most factor in successful development of country.

We must admit the fact that improving schools play a significant role in development of country. We are lucky enough, living in a period surround by high technology and economy. Porsperous and developed the world may be, it is at one time evitable for human to make some mistakes no matter, trivial or fatal. Education as a mirror for progress of society. No doubt, the contribution of schools cannot be overlooked, whatever primarily school, high school or university. But, base on this idea, some people asserts that improving schools is the most factor in successful development of country, I cannot accept this opinion, even if schools’s function cannot irreplaceability in development of country.

No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is one of the most important aspects of his life, along with the rapidly society development, the educational way is weeding out the old and bringing forth the new too, for instance, our educational means inhabited by digital equipment unceasing, an increasing number of people are beginning to accepted even rely on it. Such as overhead projector，computer, ebook and other machines. It is widely acknowledge that modern equipment have become an indispensable part of our educational way and society, which make our life and work more comfortable and conveniency. At the result, educational way are less money consuming, less physical force consuming, easier to control and so on so forth. But all of these benefits with improving educational way have a prerequisite: The progress of science and technology which makes the teaching means diversified and modernized. Without this qualification, we cannot admit that improving schools is the most factor in successful development of country. In other word, in fact, the progress of science and technology is more important than improving school. At the same way, construction of the infrastructure，economic development and some other elements are likewise essential to a country.  

Even if, educational way is a most important element. But not merely only one method that improving school, education is made up of a lot of parts, the school, the family, the society, and none of any part can be dispensed. For instance, it is indisputable that teahing resources are exerting a growing important effect, especially in recent years. Teaching resources influence the quality of education directly, if is only improving school, and does not ameliorating teaching resources, it is very difficult to imagine education will be melioration. What’s more, Family and parents are playing an important role in modern education too, understandablely, if without the support of family, the development of education can be said to be Arabian Nights.

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that improving schools is the one of good way rather than best way of development of country. Developing of country is decided by the factors of a lot of respects, logic and common sense inform us that the results might have been due instead to one or more other factors. From what has been discussed above, it would be reasonable to believe that some elements just I mentioned play far more important role than improving school. Thus, I deem that it is important to look at the argument on both sides.

半夏之北UID: 2517498

We must admit the fact that improving schools play a significant role in development of country. We are lucky enough, living in a period surrounded by high technology and economy. Porsperous and developed the world may be, it is at one time evitable for human to make some mistakes no matter, trivial or fatal. Education as a mirror for progress of society. No doubt, the contribution of schools cannot be overlooked, whatever primarily school, high school or university. But, based on this idea, some people asserts that improving schools is the most factor in successful development of country, I cannot accept this opinion, even if schools’s(S去掉） function cannot irreplaceability(be replaced前面的否定加否定应该就变成肯定的意思了吧) in development of country.

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No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is one of the most important aspects of his life, along with the rapidly society（social） development, the educational way is weeding out the old and bringing forth the new too, for instance, our educational means inhabited by digital equipment unceasingly, an increasing number of people are beginning to accepted(accept) even rely on it. Such as overhead projector，computer, ebook and other machines. It is widely acknowledge that modern equipment have(has) become an indispensable part of our educational way and society, which makes our life and work more comfortable and conveniency(convenient). At(as) the result, educational way are less money consuming, less physical force consuming, easier to control and so on so forth. But all of these benefits with improving educational way have a prerequisite: The progress of science and technology which makes the teaching means diversified and modernized. Without this qualification, we cannot admit that improving schools is the most factor in successful development of country. In other words, in fact, the progress of science and technology is more important than improving school. At the same way, construction of the infrastructure，economic development and some other elements are likewise essential to a country.  2 O

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Even if, educational way is a most important element. But not merely only one method that improving school, education is made up of a lot of parts, the school, the family, the society, and none of any part can be dispensed. For instance, it is indisputable that teahing resources are exerting a growing important effect, especially in recent years. Teaching resources influence the quality of education directly, if is only improving school, and does not ameliorating teaching resources, it is very difficult to imagine education will be melioration. What’s more, Family and parents are playing an important role in modern education too, understandablely, if without the support of family, the development of education can be said to be Arabian Nights.
我理解的是发展学校就包括了教学方法，提供设备之类的了，可以更加强调family的作用

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that improving schools is the one of good way rather than best way of development of country. Developing of country is decided by the factors of a lot of respects, logic and common sense inform us that the results might have been due instead to one or more other factors. From what has been discussed above, （重复了）it would be reasonable to believe that some elements just I mentioned play far more important role than improving school. Thus, I deem that it is important to look at the argument on both sides.
很多词用得非常好，学习了~~

showgood07UID: 2605959

Topic: Teachers should not show their political or social views known in the classroom

Undeniable, the political democracy have already become main directions of social development, people who obtain freedom of speech; people who have freedom of political belief; people who have social responsibility ceaselessly, all these are examples of people who have measurable results to show for progress of the society. In this course, teacher who is the engineer of the human soul play an extremely important role in progress of the society, class should be the place for colliding in thinking, it is the origin of the progress of mankind, political point, view of world, valuable, ideology are set up here. As far as I am concerned, in the class, any thought should not be confined, thus, I disagree with this statement.

Educators should instill in students certain basic upon which any democratic society depends. These values include principles of fairness and equity upon which our system of laws is based, as well as the values of tolerance and respect when it comes to the viewpoints of others. It seems to me that these basic values can best by instilled at an early age in a classroom setting, where young students can work out their values systems as they interact with their peers. Moreover, as students grow into working adults, practicing the basic values of fairness and respect they learned as students serves them well in their jobs. By exposing students to various political view and social beliefs, educators promote the values of respect and tolerance when it comes to the viewpoints of others. Besides, in my observation certain fundamental view, such as compassion, responsibility, judgement and humility are common to all major social view. By appreciating certain fundamental values that we should all hold in common, students are more likely to grow into adults who can work together at the workplace toward mutually agreed upon goals.

What’s more, teachers should not show their political or social views for help students develop their own principles for living, and when they instill certain fundamental values, do young people grow into successful working adults. Educators to equip students with a moral compass and ballast to prevent them being tossed about aimlessly in turbulent life. Admittedly, on a systemic scale undue emphasis personal ideas of teachers in class can have deleterious societal consequences. The danger of which are all too evident in contemporary society. For example, when it comes to the war on drugs, free speech and religion, abortion issues, public policy today seems to simply mirror the voters’ fear and prejudices. Yet, common sense dictates that social ills are best soved by identifying cause and effect relationship, in other words, through critical thinking. The proliferation of shouting match talk shows fueled by irrationality and emotion gone amuck is further evidence that our culture lends too much credence to our emotions and not enough to our minds, a culture that sancions irrationality and unfettered venting of emotion is vulnerable to our minds. A culture that sanctions irrationality and unfettered venting of emotion is vulnerable to decline. Indeed, exploiting emotions while suppressing reason is how demagogues gain and hold power and how humanity’s most horrific atrocities have come to pass. In contrast, reason and better judgment are effective deterrents to incivility, despotism and war.

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that tachers should show their political or social views known in the classroom

tqidtestUID: 2766196

Undeniable, the political democracy have already become main directions (fundamentals?) of social development, people who obtain freedom of speech; people who have freedom of political belief; people who have social responsibility ceaselessly, all these are examples of people who have measurable results to show for progress of the society. (sorry，这块俺没看懂。。。)In this course, teacher is the engineer of the human soul，who plays an extremely(这等语气强烈的词还是慎用) important role in the society, class should be the place for collision of different thoughts（这句是要说思想上碰撞吧？）, it is the origin of the progress of mankind, political point, view of world, valuable, ideology are set up here. As far as I am concerned, in the class, any thought should not be confined, thus, I disagree with this statement.


Educators should instill in students certain basic upon which any democratic society depends. These values include principles of fairness and equity upon which our system of laws is based, as well as the values of tolerance and respect when it comes to the viewpoints of others（tolerating and respecting other viewpoints?）. It seems to me that these basic values can best by instilled at an early age in a classroom setting, where young students can work out their values systems as they interact with their peers. Moreover, as students grow into working adults, practicing the basic values of fairness and respect they learned as students serves them well in their jobs. By exposing students to various political view and social beliefs, educators promote the values of respect and tolerance when it comes to the viewpoints of others. Besides, in my observation certain fundamental view, such as compassion, responsibility, judgement and humility are common to all major social view. By appreciating certain fundamental values that we should all hold in common, students are more likely to grow into adults who can work together at the workplace toward mutually agreed upon goals.


What’s more, teachers should not show their political or social views for help students develop their own principles for living, and when they instill certain fundamental values, it makes young people grow into successful working adults. Educators to equip students with a moral compass and ballast to prevent them being tossed about aimlessly in turbulent life. Admittedly, on a systemic scale undue emphasis personal ideas of teachers in class can have deleterious societal consequences. The danger of which are all too evident in contemporary society. For example, when it comes to the war on drugs, free speech and religion, abortion issues, public policy today seems to simply mirror the voters’ fear and prejudices. Yet, common sense dictates that social ills are best soved by identifying cause and effect relationship, in other words, through critical thinking. The proliferation of shouting match talk shows fueled by irrationality and emotion gone amuck is further evidence that our culture lends too much credence to our emotions and not enough to our minds, a culture that sancions irrationality and unfettered venting of emotion is vulnerable to our minds. A culture that sanctions irrationality and unfettered venting of emotion is vulnerable to decline. Indeed, exploiting emotions while suppressing reason is how demagogues gain and hold power and how humanity’s most horrific atrocities have come to pass. In contrast, reason and better judgment are effective deterrents to incivility, despotism and war.

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that tachers should show their political or social views known in the classroom.

词汇量好大啊，基础不错，但是很多单词用得并不准确，我只是指出一些认为欠妥的地方，你自己想想是不是换个说法比较好。句子的结构我觉得还是多像uu学习吧，她很厉害。还有你的文章好长啊，竟然能写这么多，好厉害。加油吧。

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Undeniable, the political democracy have already become main directions of social development, people who obtain freedom of speech; people who have freedom of political belief; people who have social responsibility ceaselessly, all these are examples of people who have measurable results
to show for progress of the society. In this course, teacher who is the engineer of the human soul play an extremely important role in progress of the society, class should be the place for colliding in thinking(看起来很奇怪，google之好像没这么用的), it is the origin of the progress of mankind, political point, view of world, valuable, ideology are set up here. As far as I am concerned, in the class, any thought should not be confined, thus, I disagree with this statement.
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Educators should instill in students certain basic upon which any democratic society depends. These values include principles of fairness and equity upon which our system of laws is based, as well as the values of tolerance and respect when it comes （纵观全文，这个when it comes to 用的太多了）to the viewpoints of others. It seems to me that these basic values can best by instilled at an early age in a classroom setting, where young students can work out their values systems as they interact with their peers. Moreover, as students grow into working adults, practicing the basic values of fairness and respect they learned as students serves them well in their jobs. By exposing students to various political view and social beliefs, educators promote the values of respect and tolerance when it comes to the viewpoints of others. Besides, in my observation certain fundamental view, such as compassion, responsibility, judgement and humility are common to all major social view. By appreciating certain fundamental values that we should all hold in common, students are more likely to grow into adults who can work together at the workplace toward mutually agreed upon goals.  H- i( _. Q5 R

: K4 K" O/ r: f) i/ VWhat’s more, teachers should not show their political or social views for help students develop their own principles for living, and when they instill certain fundamental values, do young people grow into successful working adults. Educators to equip students with a moral compass and ballast to prevent them being tossed about aimlessly in turbulent life. Admittedly, on a systemic scale undue emphasis personal ideas of teachers in class can have deleterious societal consequences. The danger of which are all too evident in contemporary society. For example, when it comes to the war on drugs, free speech and religion, abortion issues, public policy today seems to simply mirror the voters’ fear and prejudices. Yet, common sense dictates that social ills are best solved by identifying cause and effect relationship, in other words, through critical thinking. The proliferation of shouting match talk shows fueled by irrationality and emotion gone amuck is further evidence that our culture lends too much credence to our emotions and not enough to our minds, a culture that sancions irrationality and unfettered venting of emotion is vulnerable to our minds. A culture that sanctions irrationality and unfettered venting of emotion is vulnerable to decline. Indeed, exploiting emotions while suppressing reason is how demagogues gain and hold power and how humanity’s most horrific atrocities have come to pass. In contrast, reason and better judgment are effective deterrents to incivility, despotism and war.
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骄傲的词汇量非常之巨大，足见英文功底之深厚。文章思路清晰，逻辑严谨。我当范文学习啦~

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这是写给GRE的吧...很不错哇

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今天感觉特别不好，唉~~~


TOPIC:   Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on universities?

Perhaps many people have never considerated such a question: whether should a government focus its budget on young children or universities. Because this question makes people very difficult to choice, in other word, people will consider this question from other aspect: which one is more important between primary school and universities. if I have an opportunity to choose one from primary school and universities, undoubtly the first one will win my preference

First of all, I have to acknowledge that universities are very important, even in some areas, it are indeed more advanced than primary school, they are less destitution consuming, less goneness consuming, easier to succeed and so forth. But all of these advantages have a prerequisite: any of talent cannot succeed without favorable basic education. According to this reason, young children are more worth to government budget than universities. Children’s plasticity are very strong, a lot of things took shape as a childhood, its could not managed when they growing up, such as the morals, if the morals are not well, they will bring awful influence to our society when they grow up, and more erudite, more danger. For instance, nine-year compulsory education in our country are meaningful to everyone. For this system, government have responsibility to bolster it, especially in finance support to eximious equipment, high quality teaching resources and so on. This system have made the foundation well for people's life in basic education. Even more, in order to respond the required of society’s development, government should establish other none-fee agency like specialty training classes, there is a growth tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational program over the recent years, they believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kind of practical skill and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future enter university when they grow up.

What’s more, university is a kind of higher education where are the place for training high-quality talents, students have responsibility and obligation that are responsible for their own education. because the children are lack of independent capacity and judgement, to them, it is Arabian Nights to solve the fund problem by themselves alone. And also because of this reason, the rate of children's crime has been remaining high all the time, thus, government should consider that extra input of these respects, such as after school programs for delinquent latchkey kids, by enhancing AIDS awareness and education, and so forth.

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the government should focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on universities