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We have to face the trend that economic is booming today, especially students in the school, bringing more competitive pressure for them nowadays. From the point of students, some people say that students can gain more efficient education if they spent 11 months in one year studying, as a student, i strongly deem that that kind of proposal cannot reach the goal, in contrast, will trigger unpredictable consequences.
     To start with, it means fewer leisure time to the students than before. It is universally acknowledged that students can have twice vocation, summor and winter vocation. During this time, students can do the things they cannot do during the school time freely, such as a trip to china, go to see Olympic central building, bird nest in beijing. Nevertheless, if some days of vocation are conquered to study, it is not only means that students cannot tolerate hard time in shool, but also have a bad influence on students mood. It is the high timet students would resemble together to play, yet they must sit on their chair to listen boring courses.  
     In addition, students occupied their most of time in school, the parents have to pay more fees for that. We cannot imagine that what is feeling of parents. In china, a developed country, parents are mainly using their wages to give the only one child chance to attend university, leading their parents in a lower life standard. The advice of prolong the chool time of students, it will strongly elavate parents finance pressure, making their life more arduous. For instance, the money for travelling abroad must pay for the extra education for their child. Such a good chance which can look around for three-people family can not help vanishing.  
     However, the coin has two sides, The purpose of extra enducation certainly take overall consideration for students so that they can have more compeletely ability to find a good job in a severe society, yet we ignore one crucial factor in this process, it is the feeling of students. They should be the arbitrater of their education in that the people who be most familiar yourself is yourself.

bruce520UID: 2634940

We have to face the trend that economic is booming today, especially students in the school, bringing more competitive pressure for them nowadays. From the point of students, some people say that students can gain more efficient education if they spent 11 months in one year studying, as a student, i strongly deem that that kind of proposal cannot reach the goal, in contrast, will trigger unpredictable consequences.

' ~* X( h4 h! y& Y9 g; T, U% S     To start with, it【还是说出来的好我觉得】 means fewer leisure time to the students than before. It is universally acknowledged that students can have twice vocation, summor and winter vocation. During this time, students can do the things they cannot do during the school time freely, such as a trip to china, go to see Olympic central building, bird nest【注意对专有名词的拼写】 in beijing. Nevertheless, if some days of vocation are conquered to study, it is not only means that students cannot tolerate hard time in shool, but also have a bad influence on students mood. It is the high timet students would resemble together to play, yet they must sit on their chair to listen boring courses.  

0 Z# r( r8 V- T* z6 f. O7 |# I9 k' Q     In addition, students 【换成the courses on syllabus，这个动作是它发出来的】occupied their most of time in school, the parents have to pay more fees for that. We cannot imagine that what is feeling of parents. In china, a developed country, parents are mainly using their wages to give the only one child chance to attend university, leading their parents in a lower life standard. The advice of prolong the chool time of students, it will strongly elavate parents finance pressure, making their life more arduous. For instance, the money for travelling abroad must pay for the extra education for their child. Such a good chance which can look around for three-people family can not help vanishing.  ' T;
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     However, the coin has two sides, The purpose of extra enducation certainly take overall consideration for students so that they can have more compeletely ability to find a good job in a severe society, yet we ignore one crucial factor in this process, it is the feeling of students. They should be the arbitrater of their education in that the people who be most familiar yourself is yourself.

主要是拼写错误哈，我和你一样，这个看来的好好注意了

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