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RE: Post June-writing-june
It is undeniable that obeying others' decisions is much easier than making decisions for oneself. In my point of view, however, in most cases, the majority of people still prefer to make decision by themselves.
Every person in
society exists as a unique individual with a sense of self awareness. They have their own habitudes, preferences, and interests, which are distinctive marks to show their personality and uniqueness. Thus, except for themselves, no one else in the world would make the decisions that reflect their features(特点,特征) and inclinations. Even children prefer to make their own decisions. Despite the attentive care from their parents, children still get furious at their parents' domination and infinite intervention. Their rebellion and rudeness can be seen as an expression or outlet for their ineligibility in determining their own options.
In addition, the awareness of right, which has been acclaimed by numerous philosophers in history, has already been embodied in most people living in the modern era. Rights of liberty, property and life, remarked by Lock as three fundamentally unalienable rights for human kinds, inherently indicate that most people nowadays would no longer easily hand out themselves to be decided by others. Particularly, employers, who were described by Karl Marx in the 19th century as subject to the exploitation as silent slaves, have made a huge progress in improving their rights in self decisions. Today, by holding some sorts of stocks, most of them have a say in the companies. Furthermore, with the back up of constitution and government laws, their legal rights and freedom are further protected.
Nevertheless, some people might prefer to follow the decisions made by others, regarding it as a smart and convenient way to avoid probable risks. On the whole, most people would still like to make decisions by themselves.
评语:作者一定是个报读诗书之人,文笔不错,可是你写的句子太长,和我以前高中时候的风格很像,但是老师有批评说貌似我在炫耀玩弄考官。。。。另外,除了开头给人脉络清晰之外,其他感觉有点小凌乱。。。整体是很不错的,运用了很多高级词汇。。。。向你学习哈,请多赐教 |
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