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7月10日：Many teachers assign homework to students every day.Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students?Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Nowadays has witnessed an unprecedented controversy as to whether students should be assigned homework every day.
（拟人句用的很不错，但是建议在HOMEWORK上就不是特好，在一些大问题上更不错）Some people contend that there is no point requiring pupils to hand in assignment each day since it may take up too much time and deprive students of freedom to do other things.As far as I am concerned,nevertheless,it is of paramount significance for teachers to assign homework.The following reasonings(复数) will account for this.

Firs and foremost,school assignment contributes to strengthening what students have learned in class.It is universally admitted that study is a repetitive procedure and homework helps students consolidate the knowledge.If one learns only by listening to teachers and never practices by himself or herself,chances are that he or she may remember almost nothing after a few days,not to mention after several months or years.（递进关系很不错）This could be properly illustrated by the example of my roommate.She was rather attentive in the calculus class but she never did any practice required by her teacher.It came no surprise to me that she eventually failed the final exam because math requires large amounts of homework.According to her words,it was all her fault not to finish the exercise after class.
In addition, schoolwork may boost communication between students and teachers.There exist possibilites that some students may be confronted with difficulties during the course of doing the homework and turn to their teachers for help.In this way,teachers are becoming more friends than teachers.One instance is that once a seniro（senior） student mentioned that he often talked to his teachers about the assignment both in and out of class.And he gradually regarded his teachers as his intimate friends.He would send a message or make a call to them when it was a big day,such as Teachers’ Day and the Lantern Day.3 x+
Furthermore,homework satisfies a sense of achievement and students' desire to showcase.It may be very tough to concentrate on a problem for long.But one may fell more than cheerful after he or she finally comes up with an approach to it.From a psychological perspective,everyone possesses the aspiration to showcase his or her own capabilities.If one could show his or her friends how to solve the problem,he or she would become rather delighted and satisfied,especially when not many of the students are able to figure out the problem.
Taking all these causes into consideration,it is now safe to come to the conclusion that the advantages of assigning homework to students every day far outweigh its disavantages mentioned by some people.As a consequense,it really pays(这个感觉用的很牵强) to finish school assignment.
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Nowadays has witnessed an unprecedented controversy as to whether students should be assigned homework every day. Some people contend that there is no point requiring pupils to hand in assignment each day since it may take up too much time and deprive students of freedom to do other things.As far as I am concerned,nevertheless,it is of paramount significance for teachers to assign homework.The following reasoning will account for this.

Firs and foremost,school assignment contributes to strengthening what students have learned in class.It is universally admitted that study is a repetitive procedure and homework helps students consolidate the knowledge.If one learns only by listening to teachers and never practices by himself or herself,chances are that he or she may remember almost nothing after a few days,not to mention after several months or years.This could be properly illustrated by the example of my roommate.She was rather attentive in the calculus class but she never did any practice required by her teacher.It came no surprise to me that she eventually failed the final exam because math requires large amounts of homework.According to her words,it was all her fault not to finish the exercise after class.

addition, schoolwork may boost communication between students and teachers.There exist possibilites that some students may be confronted with difficulties during the course of doing the homework and turn to their teachers for help.In this way,teachers are becoming more friends than teachers.One intance is that once a seniro student mentioned that he often talked to his teachers about the assignment both in and out of class.And he gradually regarded his teachers as his intimate friends.He would send a message or make a call to them when it was a big day,such as Teachers’ Day and the Lantern Day.


lFurthermore,homework satisfies a sense of achievement and students' desire to showcase.It may be very tough to concentrate on a problem for long.But one may fell more than cheerful after he or she finally comes up with an approach to it.From a psychological perspective,everyone possesses the aspiration to showcase his or her own capabilities.If one could show his or her friends how to solve the problem,he or she would become rather delighted and satisfied,especially when not many of the students are able to figure out the problem个人感觉第三个理由， 只有在中国，才有可能。建议楼主在前面限定下，In china..
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Taking all these causes into consideration,it is now safe to come to the conclusion that the advantages of assigning homework to students every day far outweigh its disavantages mentioned by some people.As a consequense,it really pays to finish school assignment.
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