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Nowadays, people are getting used to measure a person by his or her wealth. The most attractive and famous column of Fortune Magazine is its list of businessmen by the order of their richness. From people’s traditional view, businessmen are always the hunters of interest, which are only motivated by money. However,it is not enough for businessmen to get large amount of money and it accounts for only a part of their desire.
Most businessmen will choose to running for poitical right after they have some fortune. Every enterprise try(tries) their best to expand their scale to possess the markets of other competitors and finally drive them out. Such process is the way to monopoly. Businessmen ’s desire is endless, so the money is never where they stop. Once they become the monoply of the market, they can control nearly everyone’s life. Besides, the bureaucrats’ collusion with the business sector is common in every nation in the world. In the elections of every country, candidates are made up from head to toe and advertised through every channels. Such luxurious election can never be obtained by one person. The candidates are only the representatives of the business supporters’ interests. So both the phenomenons(phenomenona) I described above indicate that political rights are also the motivation of businessmen.
Money may be the beginning desire of most businessmen, but it can’t be the lifelong motivation for them. Businessmen can earning more money by cutting salaries of their worker, using material with low quality and reducing investments in the short run. However,successful businessmen seldom do like this. They have their idealities, which motivate them to give up the money they have now to build a strong enterprise to accomplish their missions. For example, Bill Gates and his microsoft is try to develop the best operating system and convinient(convenient) every computer users by their system. Having such mission, microsoft is still the market leader of the market. If Bill and his company are only motivated by the desire of money, they can stop running long long ago.
In summary, both the desire of political rights and the completion of mission are the further-reaching desire than that of money for businessmen. So, the desire of money is not the only motivation in the business world.   
文章的文字功底很好，要像楼主学习！但是这篇文章，怎么阐述观点，我本人也有点犯难。文章读下来，我个人没有被很好的说服，呵呵，望楼主和我能探讨一下。。。

layla1989UID：2832481

7.24 还好赶上了

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修改好啦~~~~~



欢迎互相交流~~~

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改好咯··~看看嗯~~~~~~加油！

layla1989UID：2832481

7.27 写了好久啊~~唉唉~~~不知道怎么提高速度

dandan17UID：2812933

请问下怎么上传啊，帮你改好了。

fanfan1247UID：2591669

修改好啦~~~~~

fanfan1247UID：2591669

这个问题 是你的权限不够
在多回几个帖子 到寄托新兵就好啦
21# dandan17

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layla1989UID：2832481

7.29

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不好意思诶我上传不来，贴上来别介意哈

Today’s graduates are all trying to find a perfect job at their first hunt. For them, a appropriet job with high initial salary and promising future development means settleing down, high starting point and early management for career. However, getting such job is the reality for minority but far-away dream for majority. There always be something unsatisfied with the job that majorities can get at the pesent. Then what should they do, to hunt until the perfect job come or just take the offers they have now? To my mind, giving a try for such jobs is not big deal in a person’s life and people always benefit more from their early experience of changing jobs.
Before determining the direction of long term career, it is necessary to know what is the one’s real interest and gift for jobs. In today’s education system, the young complish their studies in the universities where the connection to the outside society is limited. They need to learn from the beginning to adapt to the environment of their work. Besides, their notion about the new environment they will faced with is only their own predicion that is of great possibility far away from the reality. If they just take one job as their long term career, they are likely to find out after a long time’s working that the job they have taken as their life long career is just not appropriet for them, which is certainly a great tragedy for their lives.
Trying different jobs can enrich a person’s life experience. The visual field of a person who has worked for different companies and taken different kinds of jobs is definitly broader than that of those who always stay at the same position all the time. People having different jobs see problems from different angles. After having several jobs, a person can easily think from others’ angles and learn how to get along with others. In addition, the relationships that acmulated during working in different companies will do a great help to one’s pursuit of life long career.
As a conclusion, trying variety kinds of jobs can not only help the young get to know both the society and themselves better but also accumulated HR and get prepared for their long term career. Besides, the current conditions of the employment market make the dream of finding ideal job at the first time impossible. So it is wise and reasonable to try different jobs before pursuit one’s long term career.
写的超好！有一些拼写错误。

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我改好了 终于可以发附件了。。。LZ加油~~
我Q： 460764060 邀请楼主当我T友

layla1989UID：2832481

8.10~~~~回家放空了几天~~~写的很不顺手~~~大家狠狠批啊！

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请看附件

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我上传不了啊
没有这个功能
直接回复在这里面了哈

Today, people can easily get the video resources of foreign countries through internet, making many successful local TV programs and movies prevailing worldwide. It is common to see the newest TV plays from many other countries list on the homepage of e-mule(a P2P software) and movies from hollywood get high box office in cinemas ouside the USA. (It is easy to watch newest TV programs of this world or Hollywood movies just stay at home会不会好点？) All of these phenomenons/things indicate that the TV programs and movies are not limited in one (certain) countries anymore and people are finding foreign TV programs and movies interesting. (can find every programs around this world as they wish)
The foreign TV programs and movies can interest people more easily than local ones can. Foreign TV programs and movies can attract people by shallow elements such as clothes, makeup, buildings, landviews
and living habits, whereas the local films can only arouse people’s interest
by comlicated plot (复杂的故事情节？直接用attractive story怎么样？) and excellent acting,
both of which (them) are difficult to attained (不知道这个词可不可以这么用，不过即便使用的话应该是动词原形吧). Such phenomenon may result from that people are more easily to get tired of familiar things. So, to some extent, movies and TV programs made in other countries can be more interesting.
Some one may argue that the cultural gaps between different countries may become obstacles in understanding the real meaning of foreign TV programs and movies. However, with the development of globalization, such obstacles are diminishing. You can find young girls dressing in gossip girls’ style in Chinese street and an American learning kongfu in Shaolin temple just because he have seen the movie Crouching Tiger,Hidden Dragon. The differences between cultures has (have) been accepted by people and are no longer the understanding obstacles.
In conclusion, due to the difference of culture, movies and TV programs can interest people more easily and the globalization makes it not a big deal to understand the foreign movies and TV programs. So whether a movie or TV program was interesting can’t be easily measured by where they are made. It is rediculous (ridiculous) to say that the local movies are more interesting than the foreign movies.