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发表于 2010-7-24 21:51:56 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-7-25 16:42:22 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-7-26 12:12:22 |显示全部楼层
改好了哦~~有点晚了~~注意查收

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发表于 2010-7-27 20:07:20 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-7-28 19:19:43 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-7-28 20:32:41 |显示全部楼层
改好啦~~~谢谢这两次都很快帮我改好文章~~~我每次都这么慢~惭愧了

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发表于 2010-7-31 20:41:21 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-8-1 11:43:30 |显示全部楼层
个人观点,多多指教

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发表于 2010-8-1 17:48:46 |显示全部楼层
很有道理~~~~~
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发表于 2010-8-4 21:40:13 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-8-4 22:41:17 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.

Nowadays people always pursue a high salary even if they have to sacrifice the vacation time. Because they think that salary is more valuable than vacation time. However, a job with more vacation time but a low salary is better for me, which means I could have more time to relax (relieve)the pressure from work, stay with my family and even do a business of my interest to earn a profit.

Firstly, a job with more vacation time allows me to relax and relieve the pressure from work. For instance, every weekend I can go to play table tennis with friends and enjoy the leisure time. I also could make a plan of traveling all over the world on my vacation to experience the culture in different places. What’s more, the relaxation makes me (form)a good condition of healthy and I will benefit in the future life from the vacation time.


In addition, I could have the chance to stay with my family on the vacation. Just as a saying goes: love begins at home. The love of family is priceless and we should spend more time on our family members and try our best to get well alone with them. So more vacation time makes it possible for me to stay at home and the love of the family would in turn be a great support to my career.


Finally, a job with more vacation means that I could have more time to develop my personal interest. As we know, most of people are not interested in their own work. However, in order to gain the salary they have to follow the every routine to finish the boring job. What they really need is more vacation time to do what they like. For example, I feel like singing and play a rock bank with my friends. We spend most of our vacation time on the music, which makes us feel the reality(现实?作者想表达什么意思呢) and passion of life. Luckily, our bank is *has been)invited to attend commercial performances several times and earn some fortune.


In summary, a job with more vacation time but a low salary is better for me, which means I could have more time to relax the pressure from work, stay with my family and even do a business of my interest to earn a profit.

文章结构很清晰,加油哦。。。。
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发表于 2010-8-5 10:20:40 |显示全部楼层
又见fanfan,几号考?

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发表于 2010-8-7 17:20:43 |显示全部楼层
我是9.11的~~
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发表于 2010-8-7 17:21:18 |显示全部楼层
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