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第一篇正式托福作文,难免有些土鳖,大家见谅哈!使劲拍砖。:lol
Parents are the best teachers. Agree or disagree?
段一:According to a recent statistic on the internet, the number of people believing that parents are the best teachers occupies 75 percent of Chinese people, and unquestionably has the tendency of increasing. But, there are still some people who are into the point that parents are not, for they deem that parents are not able to teach us better than the school teachers, and they have less time to stay at home than to work. In my point of view, I stand on the ground with most people.

段二:In a matter of fact ,sometimes parents are not the best teachers. No one is perfect, so as our parents. At times, they can understand ,hardly, the difficult definitions, and even they could, they might not make themselves acknowledged as a result of the shortcoming of teaching abilities, which means we could possibly misunderstand the knowledge. For example, a farmer called Lihua cannot absolutely make his children have a picture of the universe.

段三:However, most parents have known about the professional knowledge which we thought that they would never understand easily. Besides, they have experienced a lot which can help us to lead a beatific life on our own in the future. While, the school teacher mostly do not have so many knowledge about how to deal with relationship like our parents do. Obviously, our parents have more effective information to tell us ,with their full experience, they are capable of teaching us better ,especially in daily life. For instance, my friends father called Li hua who is so wise that he almost beat all his children’s teachers in both teaching methods and knowledge he has. So, facing plenty of evidence, what would you select? It must be parents.

段四:In addition, our parents frequently stay with us in order to teach us. It is true that they need pay attention to the job, but we, their lovely children, are the stars hung in their sky, which means they would do everything they could to concentrate on us., including sacrifice the work time. Let me take Wangli as an example, he used to be a famous worker, however, since he had a child, he never went to work so often as before, cause his newly born baby needing taking care of had already taken his mind up, which can precisely prove the point that they do spare more time on us than the job.
段五:To sum it up, it is a parent who is the best teacher. Although, sometimes they have the downsides , compared with the benefits, the shortages can be ignored. Besides, parents can gain more knowledge as we do to solve the problem, which would definitely provides us a better educational environment.
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