Above discussions,either deep or superficial,either about the positive and negative effects of modern civilization or towards the essential character of human nature,are all illuminating to our writing.As far as I'm concerned, first of all, it's necessary for us to make our opinions logically complete and linguisticaly fluent,that's ,self-adaptive. And besides, why not make our ideas a little more exceptional to extricate the reviewer(评卷人)from hundreds of thousands of mundane articles?