remy作文贴

a08805436UID：2725634

Nowadays, numerous people like to stay with their friends who have same hobbies and personalities. In this case, some people hold that if people have different kinds of interests compared with others, they will be difficult to communicate with their friends. However, other people, like me, prefer choosing to stay with variety of friends, and I have several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First and foremost, if people stay with different personalities’ people, they will be easy to be rescued when they are in trouble. For example, Steve Jobs, Apple's CEO, when he graduated by the Stanford, he had been jobless. However, he had already accumulate enough personal networks in Stanford, no matter his classmates had different interests, when he fallen in abyss(这样的比喻手法会不会让人理解成他真的掉到沟里了呢？), they all provided subsidizes. Therefore, he could use this human ware to help him to steal home.
As a result, we can draw a conclusion that people with different interests like different chances, we can use these chances to help ourselves when we vague.

The first above example is only an illustration that there is a deeper theory underlying this problem which is that if people always have the same topic or interest with their friends, they will be easy to feel boring or gloomy, because they have to face the same thing all day. Compared with this phenomenon, if different kinds of people stay together, they can be easy to have outstanding interaction mining.（interaction mining关系挖掘？ ） For instance, if people hang out, go travelling; they will be easy to meet new friends, especially by bus or train. Because the time is so long, people have to find different topics to communicate with others, if they only have the same interest, they will be quickly to use up all topics. Consequently, different people have different interests, they can be easy to go along with others and then become new friends.

However, sometimes meeting friends which have same interests and personalities also have some advantages, like studying Tofel, they can share their experiences with others, and then together with progress. But a close inspection of the argument would reveal how flimsy it is: this reason can only use in a few ways, but not all possibilities.（```argument的台词还可以在这里用 有见地！！） Therefore, I am sure that my above examples can conquer all opponents.

In conclusion, no matter others maintain different opinions, I still support my viewpoint: to escape abyss, we should meet friends who have different interests and personalities. To change our life more colorful, we should also meet friends with different interests.

结构清晰 条理完整   有一部分语言觉得不是很地道  建议稍作修改~

charlieqcUID：2990355

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hdchangieUID：2402936

Do you agree with the following statement? People with different interests and personalities cannot be friends.


Nowadays, numerous people like to stay with their friends who have same hobbies and personalities. In this case, some people hold that if people have different kinds of interests compared with others, they will be difficult to communicate with their friends. However, other people, like me, prefer choosing to stay with variety of friends, and I have several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First and foremost, if people stay with different personalities’ people, they will be easy to be rescued when they are in trouble. For example, Steve Jobs, Apple's CEO, when he graduated by（from） the Stanford, he had been jobless. However, he had already accumulated enough personal networks in Stanford, no matter his classmates had different interests, when he fallen （fell）
in abyss, they all provided subsidizes（subsidy）. Therefore, he could use this human ware to help him to steal home.

As a result, we can draw a conclusion that people with different interests like different chances, we can use these chances to help ourselves when we vague (vague为adj,这里应该用一个v.).

The first above example is only an illustration that there is a deeper theory underlying this problem which is that if people always have the same topic or interest with their friends, they will be easy to feel boring or gloomy, because they have to face the same thing all day. Compared with this phenomenon, if different kinds of people stay together, they can be easy to have outstanding interaction mining. For instance, if people hang out, go travelling; they will be easy to meet new friends, especially by bus or train. Because the time is so long, people have to find different topics to communicate with others, if they only have the same interest, they will be quickly to use up all topics ( they will soon use up all topics). Consequently, different people have different interests, they can be easy to go along with others and then become new friends.

However, sometimes meeting friends which have same interests and personalities also have some advantages, like studying Tofel, they can share their experiences with others, and then together with progress ( making progress together). But a close inspection of the argument would reveal how flimsy it is:(这句话很不错啊~~) this reason can only use in a few ways, but not all possibilities. Therefore, I am sure that my above examples can conquer all opponents.

In conclusion, no matter others maintain different opinions, I still support my viewpoint: to escape abyss, we should meet friends who have different interests and personalities. To change our life more colorful, we should also meet friends with different interests.

思路还算清晰，只是第一个论据——escape abyss有点怪异。。。不是很常见吧。。。不过写的出彩也OK~
感觉你的英文有点中国式英文，不是很地道，看起来有点费力。。。建议多看范文~~加油啦！

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同学不好意思，群里分组的时候只看到了前两个，现在补上 13# adj-remy