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发表于 2003-7-6 23:31:20 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
我的作文太差了,复习了一个多月,还是写的慢(一个半小时,不带修改),思想难展开。再这样下去我作文肯定没戏。希望斑竹救救我,看我究竟出在什么问题上了。我8月14号就考作文了。不胜感激.....
Issue 29
The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes.

我赞同这个ISSUE,将它展开三点论述:
1.在某些领域的研究,会让我们了解世界的基本要素和原理,从而改变我们对原来世界的看法
2.通过一些研究,我们发现了一些新的物质(比如原子),它的贡献是拓宽了我们的视野,让我们更加了解我们的世界
3.在艺术、哲学等一类的研究,它们改变了我们的思维方式、思维形态,这些当然会改变我们看世界的方式。
The speaker asserts that we perceive the world with different way as before through studying an academic discipline. I strongly agree with the speaker's claim for the reason that the study of an academic discipline alters and enrich our early system about certain lore and deepens our insight discussed as below.

Consider how the study of some academic disciplines makes us acquire the authentic essence of the world. With respect to the study of the discipline of gravity, we know why an apple falls down from a tree. However we do not recognize the gravity before Newton studied the discipline. Through the study of chemical discipline, we can solve a great many of problems of every day life such as why we can extinguish fire apart from air and why iron rust and so on. After the study of economic, we can clearly perceive many economical phenomena. Indeed, we have different eyes to survey the same world and no longer feel fewer puzzles about the world.

One the other hand, aside from altering our way we perceive the world, we might find out new things that we did not fundamentally recognize their existence before the research of a discipline. Many compelling example lend credence to the claim. Let us think how we know atom, neutron or proton and the researches contribute to our human being. The basic units that construct all material have been in the world since the beginning of existence of universe. Thus, we find out them through the research of microscope world. The study has the world present the utterly new face. To some extent, these researches made us face different world where we do not change only the way we perceive the world but learn the distinct world again.

In the final analysis, the study of an discipline in some areas that mainly consist of history, philosophy, psychology and arts changes our methods of thinking that determine whether it is objective and comprehensive that we perceive the world. Through the research we can gain accurate perception, critical thinking, fine understanding, etc. Without them we might fall in mire in which we will not free ourselves. For the study of philosophy, we can gain complete value; for the study of psychology, we can solve a thing without interference of our moods; for the study of arts, we improve our esthetics and culture. In my view, the studied in these areas is the most important portion of all the research for they provide us with the fundamental ability without which we would proceed more difficultly on the developing road.  

In sum, through the research of an academic discipline, we are provided with various new methodologies to interpret our world and new founds to exploit unknown world. It is inestimable that research contributes to human being.
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发表于 2003-7-7 01:11:00 |只看该作者
斑竹太忙了,各位大侠给我些建议吧,拉我一把!我现在无比痛苦,不知该怎么办好?在此谢先。

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板凳
发表于 2003-7-7 01:34:37 |只看该作者

我觉得你写的不错啊

别灰心
刚写了这篇的提纲,下面是我的一些简单想法:

同意文中观点

1 因为人的认识过程是人的思维对客观世界的反映,不可避免的受到人的知识的影响
2 人的知识的深化和扩展可以改变人对客观世界的认识
  例如学习了医学,可知人体是由各种器官组织构成,

想不出更多可写得了,请大家补充

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发表于 2003-7-7 02:44:48 |只看该作者
呵呵,哪有刚刚贴出来,就要斑竹给意见的啊?
要有耐心^_^
Never,never,never,never give up !!

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发表于 2003-7-7 16:27:34 |只看该作者
谢谢各位的热心帮助,不胜感动!希望和大家共勉!

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