issue56

icyrayUID: 139286

“Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.”

Outline:
1.        阐述题目，提出保留地反对的观点。
2.        赞同点。对一些社会问题和政治问题，如犯罪、吸毒、战争等，应给予充分的关注。
3.        过渡，提出反对的几点理由。
4.        反对之一。从经济和社会发展方面来看，长远的问题比较重要。如对产品的市场范围和占有率的预计。
5.        反对之二。许多当前问题和长远问题是相互联系的，例如环境问题和现在工业问题，所以在考虑当前问题时，其长远的影响也是非常重要的。
6.        总结。当前问题和长远问题各有其重要所在，需要具体问题具体分析。

icyrayUID: 139286

作文全文如下：
There is a growing public concern that the authorities should put down most of their consideration onto solving the problems before their eyes, not those anticipated problems of the future. I agree that some immediate problems do need governmental concern for they are critical to the everyday life of us citizens. At the same time, however, this doesn’t mean that those anticipated problems of the future are of no importance and need no foci.

Beyond all doubt, those emergent problems, especially social problems and political problems like criminals, drug abuse and wars, are in need of full considerations of the government and the authorities should solve them immediately without any hesitance. One of the major functions of our government is to keep our living circumstance quiet and peaceful. Thus those social or political problems as mentioned before should be put sufficient focus on.

But only focusing on the current problems is far from enough. For there’re all kinds of problems are in need of solution, such as economical problems and the social development problems, which might have something to do with some certain future details. In such cases, the government’s close attention to the anticipated problems of the future becomes equally significant with that to current ones, if not more important. Also, some future problems are intertwined closely with immediate ones, which make it impossible to only pay attention to current situations while neglect all the future ones, for sometimes the latter is the prerequisite of the former.

Firstly, from the aspect of such problems as in the fields of economy and social development, we can see that in some cases future problems are even more significant than immediate ones to our process of making decisions to those critical choices. For example, if a multinational corporation is considering opening up new commercial regions somewhere, doubtlessly they will think over the potential market over there, not the market there at the time. It is the same with the social development problems including the constructions of the cities such as where to build an overpass, or the necessity of establishing a large scale of greenland or broadening a road. All these instances suggest that sometimes it is the future problems not the current ones that may need to be put in the first place of considering.

Secondly, there’re also situations that involve both problems coming into being presently and anticipated of the future, such as the future environmental problems arise from today’s industrial ones. Since the industrial revolution, people have been polluting this planet fiercely for quite a long time, which lead to a solemn contradiction between holding the progress of the technology and keeping alive the environment in which we live. There’s another example, that is, the waste and the maintaining of the natural resources. We all know that the natural resources on this planet is limited, and one day those resources like petroleum, natural gas and coal will die out, however, people haven’t found any inexhaustible substitution that have similar effect as those mentioned before while at the same time is not that pollutive. Thus when we consider using these resources, we should put the current and future problems together, and learn not to waste any of it.

In conclusion, both immediate problems and the anticipated problems of the future are equally important to us. They have different emphases and that’s the reason why in some cases current problems are considered more while in other cases it’s the opposite. Thus we should analyze the situation according to its specific circumstance.（590）

icyrayUID: 139286

这个好冷清啊
自re下

paisleyUID: 64183

There is a growing public concern that the authorities should put down (down可去掉) most of their consideration onto solving the problems before their eyes, not those anticipated problems of the future. I agree that some immediate problems do need governmental concern for they are critical to the everyday life of us citizens. At the same time, however, this doesn’t mean that those anticipated problems of the future are of no importance and need no foci. （最后一句话似乎偷换了命题，题目中并没有说不管长远问题了，只是说不应放太多的注意和精力。你说的绝对了）

Beyond all doubt, those emergent problems, especially social problems and political problems like criminals, drug abuse and wars, are in need of full considerations of the government and the authorities should solve them immediately without any hesitance. One of the major functions of our government is to keep our living circumstance quiet and peaceful. Thus those social or political problems as mentioned before should be put sufficient focus on. （这段是个让步，说明长远问题也很重要吧？不过我觉得让步的味道不是很浓，要靠我自己揣摩出来，可是批卷子的人未必有耐心揣摩啊。建议在语气方面再改一改）

But only focusing on the current problems is far from enough. For there’re（正式的文章中应该避免出现缩写） all kinds of problems are in need of solution, such as economical problems and the social development problems（这两个problems还是太笼统，等于没有such as，呵呵）, which might have something to do with some certain future details. In such cases, the government’s close attention to the anticipated problems of the future becomes equally significant with that to current ones, if not more important. Also, some future problems are intertwined closely with immediate ones, which make it impossible to only pay attention to current situations while neglect all the future ones, for sometimes the latter is the prerequisite of the former. （这段说理不错，如果再继续深入就好了）

Firstly, from the aspect of such problems as in the fields of economy and social development, we can see that in some cases future problems are even more significant than immediate ones to our process of making decisions to those critical choices. For example, if a multinational corporation is considering opening up new commercial regions somewhere, doubtlessly they will think over the potential market over there, not the market there at the time. It is the same with the social development problems including the constructions of the cities such as where to build an overpass, or the necessity of establishing a large scale of greenland or broadening a road. All these instances suggest that sometimes it is the future problems not the current ones that may need to be put in the first place of considering.

Secondly, there’re also situations that involve both problems coming into being presently and anticipated of the future, such as the future environmental problems arise from today’s industrial ones. Since the industrial revolution, people have been polluting this planet fiercely for quite a long time, which lead to a solemn contradiction between holding the progress of the technology and keeping alive the environment in which we live. There’s another example, that is, the waste and the maintaining of the natural resources. We all know that the natural resources on this planet is limited, and one day those resources like petroleum, natural gas and coal will die out, however, people haven’t found any inexhaustible substitution that have similar effect as those mentioned before while at the same time is not that pollutive. Thus when we consider using these resources, we should put the current and future problems together, and learn not to waste any of it.
（这两点说理都不错，不过总觉得意犹未尽。如果能再透彻一些就好了。感觉你想得比较宽泛了，反而深度还尚有欠缺。例子稍嫌长了些）

In conclusion, both immediate problems and the anticipated problems of the future are equally important to us. They have different emphases and that’s the reason why in some cases current problems are considered more while in other cases it’s the opposite. Thus we should analyze the situation according to its specific circumstance.（最后这句有点庸俗了，呵呵。而且也不太适合做结尾）（590）

语言不错。内容方面的，我都写在上面了。

你这篇文章有人写过非常类似的题目。你可以搜索一下，对照一下这些文章。


希望你也能多多修改其他朋友的文章。提点结构上和想法上的建议也是好的。因为你不可能每个题目都练过来啊，看别人的题目，自己脑子过一遍,既可以给别人提建议，自己又多了一次训练的机会.为别人服务的人优先得到斑竹的修改哦！

icyrayUID: 139286

深受启发！我总是觉得自己的论述不够深入
我会努力的
3x！
//bow