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改好~

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2.15 独立
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2.15 综合
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抱歉！ 2.14综合修改

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感谢 Henry 和伶女！！！

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2.15 改

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2.16 独立
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2.16 综合
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Archaeology in Britain


The lecture mainly discusses the improved current condition of archaeology in Britain by the new rule, which is different with the attitudes in the passage that archaeology in Britain is facing many problem and limitations.
First, the professor states that with the new rules on archaeology, all the construction must be checked before start constructing. By contrast, the passage believes that many valuable cultural relics are lost during constructions. However,（一个by contrast 又一个However..好难受） the professor point out that, not only the region is checked by archaeology before construction, if there is anything valuable found, the constructor and local government must make a plan with archaeology to preserve it by transforming the construction to around area or making other proper solutions to protect it.
The second point differed between the passage and lecture is that whether archaeologies are facing inadequate finance support. The professor holds an opposite attitudes towards the passage, which claim that archaeologies are in lack of fund to support their research. (感觉没讲完后面不要However了吧)However, the professor argues that new rules regulated the constructor must pay for the archaeologies` work, and this is an complete new support for research, which will ensure all the cultural relics will be proper protected.
Finally, the professor rebuts the passage which states that it is difficult to have a career in archaeology. The speaker tells us that paid of archaeologies is on the summit of history. With the paid from examination, draw a plan for protection and publish articles, the incoming of archaeologies has improved a lot.

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2.17 独立 综合
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不好意思有事情没及时改好~~