是否有必要了解过去来解决当前和未来的问题（Dailly Writing)

xielijuan36UID: 2995990

agree or disagree:to solve the problem of present and future,it is necessary to understand the past.


In my opinion,to solve the problem of present and future,it is necessary to understand the past.The famous British philosopher,Francis Bacon,said histories make men wise.There are many kinds of problems in reality,no matter in learning or in life.People can know more information from the past to get a better way to solve the problem of present and future.
     The past may be successful or of failure,and people can learn much from the past.When we saw many factories for earning money to lead to air pollution and it makes people live in a dirty environment,now we are aware of the importance to improve the economy but also protect the environment.In the past,people didn't have the opportunity to go to school for studying knowledge,as a result,our economy and technology has fell behind that in the developed countries and for their strong they agressed upon the weak countries.So we can get lessons from the failure experience when we are going to solve the problem of present and future we can avoid mistakes made in the past.
     On the other hand,we are easy to learn the successful experience in the past.By contenting with the needs of people before the new China seted up,Mao Zedong,the founder of People's Republic of China,leaded people to a democratic and free life.So we can learn that respect,equality,justice and something like that are seek by everyone and it is a must for people to own the basic needs.On the contrary,if we are not able to meet the demand,we are impossible to solve problem successful neither at present nor in the future.
     In addition,we can get a better understanding of friends if we know his past.A friend strives to be a doctor for the reason that her grandmother who loved her very much was dead in cancer,she was very sad and want to be a doctor to learn medical science for one day she can find ways to treat the cancer.So her friends are able to know why she is so hard working.
    Hence,the past is a good way to learn the development of things and have a better understanding of other people,then we are easy to solve problem of present and future.

feifeionlyUID: 2778967

是我进错了地方么，看到独立的题目和我的不同，先改了，如果走错地方了再发个链接给我：）


agree or disagree:to solve the problem of present and future,it is necessary to understand the past.3 o8 O) G: x2 W  B6 v; t
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In my opinion,to solve the problem of present and future,it is necessary to understand the past.The famous British philosopher,Francis Bacon,said histories make men wise.There are many kinds of problems in reality,no matter in learning or in life.People can know more information from the past to get a better way to solve the problem of present and future.* A( x. R( Z9 Q1 k! ?
     The past may be successful or of failure,and people can learn much from the past.When we saw many factories for earning money to lead to air pollution and it makes people live in a dirty environment,now we are aware of the importance to improve the economy but also protect the environment.In the past,people didn't have the opportunity to go to school for studying knowledge,as a result,our economy and technology has fell behind that in the developed countries and for their strong they agressed upon the weak countries.So we can get lessons from the failure experience when we are going to solve the problem of present and future we can avoid mistakes made in the past.3 C+ ^; D% K" Q. c/ w; T
     On the other hand,we are easy to learn the successful experience in the past.By contenting with the needs of people before the new China seted up,Mao Zedong,the founder of People's Republic of China,leaded people to a democratic and free life.So we can learn that respect,equality,justice and something like that are seek by everyone and it is a must for people to own the basic needs.On the contrary,if we are not able to meet the demand,we are impossible to solve problem successful neither at present nor in the future.; I5 i: n! c4 n  e" f/ o

第1，2段论题感觉有些重复，都是从教育的角度谈past的影响。思维还可以延展下，可以从现实的角度谈古代积累的文化＋科技等成果对目前的影响。或者past哪些方面对future能产生影响。

     In addition,we can get a better understanding of friends if we know his past.A friend strives to be a doctor for the reason that her grandmother who loved her very much was dead in cancer,she was very sad and want to be a doctor to learn medical science for one day she can find ways to treat the cancer.So her friends are able to know why she is so hard working., I2 F! n7 B0 X$ ^3 ]" K8 \!
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    Hence,the past is a good way to learn the development of things and have a better understanding of other people,then we are easy to solve problem of present and future.三个论点只总结了两个。

例证很有说服力，文字流畅。

xielijuan36UID: 2995990

是这个吗  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1237350&extra

wangrunningf1UID: 2488529

In my opinion, to solve the problems of present and future, it is necessary to understand the past. The famous British philosopher, Francis Bacon, said histories make men wise. There are many kinds of problems in reality, no matter in learning or in life. People can know more information from the past to get a better way to solve the problem of present and future.开头有些重复，可以考虑换种说法
The past may be successful or of failure, and people can learn much from the past. When we saw many factories for earning money to lead to air pollution and it makes people live in a dirty environment, now we are aware of the importance to improve the economy but also protect the environment. In the past, people didn't have the opportunity to go to school for studying knowledge, as a result, our economy and technology has fell behind that in the developed countries and for their strong they agressed upon the weak countries. So we canget lessons from the failure experience when we are going to solve the problem of present and future we can avoid mistakes made in the past.这段有点乱，可以重新组织下语言

On the other hand, we are easy to learn the successful experience in the past. By contenting with the needs of people before the new China seted(set)up, Mao Zedong, the founder of People's Republic of China, leaded people to a democratic and free life. So we can learn that respect, equality, justice and something like that are seek by everyone and it is a must for people to own the basic needs. On the contrary, if we are not able to meet the demand, we are impossible to solve problem successful neither at present nor in the future.

In addition, we can get a better understanding of friends if we know his past. A friend strives to be a doctor for the reason that her grandmother who loved her very much was dead in cancer, she was very sad and want to be a doctor to learn medical science for one day she can find ways to treat the cancer. So her friends are able to know why she is so hard working. 这两段例子挺好的

Hence, the past is a good way to learn the development of things and have a better understanding of other people, then we are easy to solve problem of present and future.
语法词汇什么出错较少，可以组织下结构，尤其是开头可以尝试些句式或者模板使其更丰富些

liu9046114UID: 2823290

In my opinion,to solve the problem of present and future,it is necessary to understand the past.The famous British
philosopher,Francis Bacon,said histories make men wise.There are many kinds of problems in reality,no matter in learning or in
life.People can know more information from the past to get a better way to solve the problem of present and future.1 H: l1 u2 M& \,
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     The past may be successful or of failure,（这一段只说了failure的经验吧）and people can learn much from the past.When we saw
many factories for earning money to lead to air pollution and it makes people live in a dirty environment,now we are aware of the
importance to improve the economy but also protect the environment.In the past,people didn't have the opportunity to go to school
for studying knowledge,as a result,our economy and technology has fell behind that in the developed countries and for their strong
they agressed upon the weak countries(这儿有点看不懂).So we can get lessons from the failure experience when we are going to solve
the problem of present and future we can avoid mistakes made in the past.
     On the other hand,we are easy to learn the successful experience in the past.By contenting with the needs of people before the
new China seted up,Mao Zedong,the founder of People's Republic of China,leaded people to a democratic and free life.So we can learn
that respect,equality,justice and something like that are seek by everyone and it is a must for people to own the basic needs.On
the contrary,if we are not able to meet the demand,we are impossible to solve problem successful neither at present nor in the
future.
  In addition,we can get a better understanding of friends if we know his past.A friend strives to be a doctor for the reason that
her grandmother who loved her very much was dead in cancer,she was very sad and（感觉突然又说朋友，有点突然） want to be a doctor to
learn medical science for one day she can find ways to treat the cancer.So her friends are able to know why she is so hard working.
    Hence,the past is a good way to learn the development of things and have a better understanding of other people,then we are
easy to solve problem of present and future.
总体结构还不错，呵呵，有些地方感觉可以更有逻辑性，学习呢