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2009.10.17 NA
Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Movies and televisions should always
show audience good people are beingrewarded and bad people are being punished.


In recent years ,watching movies and televisions have occupied a large amount of time in our daily life .People in growing numbers argue as if it is true that movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished for the sake of (in order to) constructing a more harmonious society. But to be frank ,tempting as such claim might to be ,it is hardly true .There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on it ,and I would explore only a few primary ones here.


To begin with ,movies and televisions play an indispensable role in our recreational activities .People go to theatre to get amused and relaxed after a whole day work ,so a wonderful story with a unique ending is extremely welcomed .However ,imagine that if you already knew the end of the movie will you feel happy or relaxed ?Do you still want to see any other movie whose characters go into the same tedious result ?Personally ,my answer is definitely not .People won't expect to know the end of the movie before watching it and most of us prefer to speculate how will the story develop .So ,in my view(opinion),whether a person should be punished does not depends on what kind of person he is but the kind of theme that the play wants to show.


Moreover ,there is hardly a clearly define on a real person .Just like each coin has two sides ,all the people have advantages and disadvantages .No one can claim that he is definitely a good guy or a bad guy .For instance ,"Prison Break" ,a well known series in America ,tells a story about a person named Michael Scofield who make enormous efforts to save his brother out of prison .Is he a good person because he attempted(tried) to save his relative or must he be punished because he tried to escape from the prison ?Obviously ,neither of the answer is totally correct .Good actors ought to show different aspects of whom they are performing and should also get close to the people in real life .So whether the person is good or not is depend on different circumstances he involved in.


In addition to the reasons listed above ,I don't think it's a proper method to educate adolescents .Because it is undeniable that ,nowadays ,we live in a society which becomes much more complicated .People are not allowed to be as simple as several years ago .We can no longer hold the view that all good people are being rewarded and all bad people are being punished .Instead ,we should teach children to judge a person in a more comprehensive way and train them to adjust to many different conditions .Movies and televisions have an essential effect on education and ,of course ,they influence a lot on youths .Therefore ,varies ends of different movies and televisions have a significant effort on young people ,which lead them to think deeper and more comprehensively .


Although it is true that good people should be rewarded and bad people should be punished ,it isn't a good ending of all movies and televisions .A masterpiece owns a unique ending .We can't classify a person only into "good" or "bad" .What's more ,movies and televisions should give the best reflection of our society rather than only tell the theories .In conclusion ,taking into account of all these factors ,I say without doubt that movies and televisions should not always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.

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2010 年01 月16 日北美
Advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits？

In recent years ,with the development of advanced science and technology ,the remarkable increasing of advertisements in our daily life has aroused wide public concern .People in growing number argue as if is it a general truth that advertising is the major cause of unhealthy eating habits .But to be frank ,tempting as such claim might be ,it is hardly true .In my view ,unhealthy eating habits may caused by many other different factors and the advertising isn't the main cause .


To begin with ,eating habits relates to many aspects in people's life .On contemporary society ,a large amount of people who have unhealthy eating habits ,suffer a lot from his/her life .For instance ,one who is under enormous work stress ,may has a terrible health condition .The busy work will lead to an irregular time of eating or involving too much fast food each meal .However ,with no time to watch TV or read magazines ,how could he influenced so much by advertisements ?What's more ,there are also many other reasons which will cause unhealthy eating habits ,just like ,people who focus his daily food in limited types ,like meats or potatoes with no vegetables .With so many factors which will result to unhealthy eating habits ,I hold the view that advertising isn't the main influence of it.

The second reason why I disagree with the statement above is that, from my perspective ,the main cause of unhealthy eating habits isn't advertising but the decreasing quality of foods .Also because people think little of developing their own health eating habits . Surrounded by various fast foods, such as chips and Humburgs ,which contain enormous calories of energy and a large amount of fat and sugar do harmful to our physical health ,while it is very convenient and time-saving .People who do not care much about the eating would keep on eating such food for weeks or even months for sake of saving time .This habit is really unhealthy though it has little relation to advertisements .

Admittedly , I have to concede that advertising ,in some cases ,do have negative effects on people's eating habits .It may exaggerate the good flavor of unhealthy food or attract people to buy the food they do not really need but cheap .Nevertheless ,there's no denying that advertising also benefits our modes of life a lot ,including eating habits .It gives us easer accesses to the new productions and with a proper judgment we can easily find the good things that advertising brings .

To sum up ,nowadays ,people are influenced by numerous things .The unhealthy eating habits are caused by many aspects of life ,such as working stress ,low quality of fast foods and even the preference to foods which is diverse form person to person .Moreover ,advertising may have some positive effect on eating habits .Therefore ,taking into account of all these factors ,I say without doubt that adverting isn't the main cause of the unhealthy eating habits .