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For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on universities?

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The issue on government budget for education is always a controversial topic being fierce discussed among both officials and ordinary people. Some people consider young children education more significant than universities that should be given more budget support form government, while others hold the opposite point. In my opinion, I think that government should be responsible to balance the budget between young children education and universities according to development requirement of country.

Firstly, young period is the best learning time for a person with better memory and vitality , hence it is rather obvious that we should pay more attention on children education. In China, there are great differences between preliminary schools in city and in county. Some preliminary schools in county haven’t modern equipments or good library, even no one would like to stay for teaching because of low salary. All of these have caused serious impacts on the future development of children in county. Therefore, I think that government must give more budget or strategy support to young children education in county.

Secondly,young children education is vital because the youths will be hosts of country in future and be the decisive strength for successful development of a country in some extent. The government budget for young education could be used to enhance the personal ability of teachers, to renew the teaching equipments and condition, to increase teachers’ salary and so on. By doing the above things, it will improve the quality of young children education greatly and will foster more and more excellent people for future development of country.

Nevertheless, it doesn’t follow that universities are not important for country development. Young children educaiton is only the basic education stage, it makes children to gain rudiments on science and technology.With the general accumulation of knowledgement, they must futher their study in universities in order to get great achievement or apply the knowedge in practical work in specific field. Most of the qualified scientists and technicians are fostered by universities and Almost all of the top technologies in military, physics, electronics and astronomy come from the universtiies. From this point, it is more significant of universities’ education which provide the chance for students to study specific diciplinary deeply. So it is undoubted that government should give sufficient budget for construction of universities.
In a word, I think that both young children education and universities have their own roles in successful development of counry. It is the government responsibiliy to balance the budget in order to guarantee the good development of every education stage instead of focusing on one of them.

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For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on university?(h’ Q: B1 |

The issue on government budget for education is always a controversial topic being fierce discussed among both officials and (ordinary people中国式英语) citizens. Some people consider young children education more significant than universities that should be given more budget support from government, while others hold the opposite point. In my opinion, I think that government should be responsible to balance the budget between young children education and universities according to development requirement of country.


Firstly, young period is the best learning time for a person with better memory and vitality; hence it is rather obvious that we should pay more attention （on) to
children education. In China, there are great differences between preliminary schools in city and in county. Some preliminary schools in county (haven’t）don’t have modern equipments or good libraries(y), even no one would like to stay for teaching because of low salary. All of these have caused serious impacts on the future development of children in country. Therefore, I think that government must give more budget or strategy support to young children education in country.

Secondly, young children education is vital because the youths will be hosts of country in future and be the decisive strength for successful development of a country in some extent. The government budget for young education could be used to enhance the personal ability of teachers, to renew the teaching equipments and condition, to increase teachers’ salary and so on. By doing the above things, it will improve the quality of young children education greatly and will foster more and more excellent people for future development of country.

Nevertheless, it doesn’t follow that universities are not important for country development. Young children education is only the basic education stage, it makes children to gain rudiments on science and technology. With the general accumulation of knowledgement, they must further their study in universities in order to get great achievement or apply the knowedge in practical work in specific field. Most of the qualified scientists and technicians are fostered by universities and Almost all of the top technologies in military, physics, electronics and astronomy come from the universtiies. From this point, it is more significant of universities’ education which provide the chance for students to study specific diciplinary deeply. So it is undoubted that government should give sufficient budget for construction of universities.

In a word, I think that both young children education and universities have their own roles in successful development of counry. It is the government responsibiliy to balance the budget in order to guarantee the good development of every education stage instead of focusing on one of them.

结构很清晰，
但是我觉得楼主应该把作文贴上来之前先起码好好检查一下自己的拼写错误吧？ 前面一开始我还在改但是后面发现太多了我就只画出来了。
此外建议楼主平时多积累些好用法、好句子，可以通过多看范文、看英文小说什么的， 因为你的句子我觉得读起来有点费劲有点别扭，到了考场让老美考官读完可能对分数不利；
欢迎相互交流：） 我的作文我这就写，写完欢迎你来改^_^
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