YukikoのIndependent Writing

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改好了~~呼~~欢迎以后多改我的文哦~~

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Do you think that young people should take several different kinds of job before they take a career in a long term?
  A question discussed keenly is that whether young people should take several different kinds of job before they take a career in a long term. Different people have different ideas. Some people hold the opinion that it is a good way to go because we can enrich more social experience and meet the challenge to realize the value of life. Personally, I’d prefer to be opposed to their ideas and the reasons are as follows.
  Just imagine that, when we find a decent job in a big company, the first thing we should do is to learn to cooperate and compromise in order to achieve a harmonious interpersonal relationship. Furthermore, we should also nurture a sense of responsibility. If we are under the situation that changing several kinds of job frequently, our colleagues don’t always company us, there may be more challenges for us to change our habits and personalities frequently to meet the needs of different people. Additionally, when we come to a new company, we are sure not to be familiar with the company philosophy, everything we tried and learned before has lost its value and we should make a refresh start.
  Moreover, we certainly have many ambitions when we are just students studying in the universities. The major we take must be in some extent related to the job we choose. There may be some people claiming that taking several kinds of job will help us expand our horizon, but why don’t they need the stability and satisfaction? We decide our goal when we are students and seek for our personal development after graduation. Finding a well-paid job which meets our interest will let us gain a sense of self-fulfillment, and then what we should do is just to undertake our responsibility. I just can ‘understand that why should we change the job if it is proper? Can a person who always changes his job finally take a career in a long term?
  Above all, I’m still inclined to against the opinion that young people should take several different kinds of job before they take a career in a long term. We find job to earn enough money to make our life, the most important thing is stability and satisfaction. In addition, we can also accumulate experience if we just take a career in a long term.                                                                                 

这篇我想了很久才写出。。求大家的批评啊~~

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14# 奔跑蜗牛 谢谢啊！！ 谢谢大神批改~~好久没上论坛了才看到~唉，听说9.18考得很难，在下很是焦虑啊。。。。。

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改好了~！！感谢Yukiko给我改作文~建议我会毫不大意地收下的！！！

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9/19
09.04.03
Do you agree or disagree?
The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teachers’ salaries?
  
A question discussed keenly is that whether increasing teachers’ salaries is the best way to improve the quality of education. Some people hold the opinion that the teachers will take more action to teach their students for the higher salaries, therefore, the quality of education will certainly be improved. Nevertheless, I prefer to be opposed to their ideas and the reasons are as follows.
There is a situation that the teachers’ salaries are increased, just imagine that if the salary of every teacher is increased, there may seem no change for the teachers themselves. Then, how can they get the motivation to try their best to prepare for the lessons and take the classes? I think providing awards for the good teachers may be a better choice. Additionally, the teachers just teach to earn more money, their goal is the money, not to make the students they teach become more excellent. The real good teacher is who sincerely wants to help children learn a kind of subject in a more vivid and interactive way, He or she should show the love for the students, not for the money.
Moreover, changing the salaries doesn’t mean changing the teachers themselves. Some teacher can stimulate the students’ interest successfully on the lesson, but others are disliked by the children because of their strictness and seriousness, or their teaching skill is so poor that can’t make the students to get any improvement. Increasing this kind of teachers’ salaries will do no good even do harm to the quality of education. For example, the parents may possibly choose a teacher with low teaching skill and high salary as a tutor for their child, their origin hope is to see the progress of their honey sweet. What a waste of money if they finally don’t choose the right teacher for they judge the ability by the income of him?
Above all, I’m still inclined to against the opinion that the best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teachers’ salaries. A teacher takes the major role in the education, but increasing their salaries doesn’t equal to improving their ability.
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09.12.04
Do you think people should buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than the same things made somewhere else.
  A question discussed keenly in that whether should people buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than the same things made somewhere else. Personally, I think it is an opening question, but I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that the products imposed from other countries should also have some consideration.
  I have a friend who always believes the quality of the products made in Japan. Of course, we are not Japanese. Maybe the Japanese people contribute themselves in their work more than the workers of our country, everything made in their country is not only of good quality, but with excellent features. For example, the Canon cameras and the Sony lap-top win great popularity because they are easier to use and make our life more colorful. Also, there are some lovely designing such as Hello Kitty, Sakura Momoko which we saw in the cartoons attracting most of the children and young girls. The cute cat with beautiful clothes and the naughty little girl with sweet smile can’t be found in our country unless these kinds of products are imposed. Moreover, Germany is famous for its automobile, France is famous for its perfume. It’s a good idea for car fans and young ladies to buy the excellent goods made in these two countries, why not?
  Some people may cast doubt that if we intend to buy the things made in other countries, how about the products made in our country? We manufacture them to win the development of economy, but the situation now is that even the people in our country would like to buy the same products in other countries, which does no good to our economical standard anymore. But, why don’t we export the products to other countries? Purchasing the foreign products, on one hand, will boost the communication between each country, the more important thing we can do is to ask ourselves that why the same thing made in other countries looks much better, we can learn to promote the manufactory in our country then, can’t we?
   Above all, I’m still inclined to against the opinion that people should buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than the same things made somewhere else. We should open the door of our country to the world, buying the things made in other countries may encourage the progress of the domestic economy for the products made in our country may also become popular in these countries after the communication with them and the advancing manufactory will also do some help.

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不好意思……总是让Yukiko桑来改我的……一直忘记来改……我马上改~尽可能传上来！！！！

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一下改了2篇的说~欢迎讨论！