issue183,请多指教！

qhywUID: 136716

183."As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."

Human society develops step by step by means of attaining knowledge to explain all kinds of mysterious phenomenon and deepening the existing ken. On the one hand, as we acquire more knowledge, we do comprehend many things more easily which seemed to be complicated and inexplicable than ever before. On the other hand,however, the more knowledge we learn, the more complex and mysterious things seem to be.

Many things and phenomenon become comprehensible and explainable once we acquire the specific knowledge hehind them. At the original time, people know little about the science or the idea of science. When they hear the thunder, they become full of fear. People at that time even mistakely regard it as a kind of punish by the god for some of their deeds. As the time is on, people begin to explore the nature. Later they find that thunder is just a common phenomenoe which often happens before a storm and clearly understand the essence of thunder. Now it is never mysterious even for a little boy.

It is also true that there are some things becoming more complex instead of comprehensible when we get more knowledge. when Copernicus’s theory that the earth revolves around the sun was provided, the people’s eyes firsty shift from earth into the mysterious universe. They have more confusion about the world than before. For example, Why the earth revolve around the sun?how? Are there any other planets in the universe except earth and sun? if there are, what are they and how they run? How to get them? Are there any lives in other planets? When and how these planets formed? and the like. A famous professor ever give an vivid way to understand the ralationship between the known part and the unknown part just like this(paraphrase): If we compare the known part of the world to the space within a circle, the unknown part of the world around the circle grows as the circle of our knowledge expands.

However,there is no need to feel frustrated about the increasingly more complex and more mysterious world that confront because our knowledge in total keeps growing and correspondingly we are becoming better equipped to cope with the problems that emerge. As for the exploration of universe, people have achieved great success. Most of the above questions have been given quite satisfied answers within decades of years,moreover, it is never a dream for people to ramble on the moon and further on the mars. Therefore, people should expect rather than avoid learning more knowledge in order to better understand the unknown world.

To sum up, it is true to some extent that as we learn more knowledge, things become more complex and mysterious, however, a further content can not be ignored that with the abundant knowledge, we are more capable for dealing for the mysterious part which ultimately propel the development of the whole world.

qhywUID: 136716

已经沉了，顶一下先！

feier521UID: 109747

Human society develops step by step by means of attaining knowledge to explain all kinds of mysterious phenomenon(phenomena) and deepening the existing ken. On the one hand, as we acquire more knowledge, we do comprehend many things more easily which seemed to be complicated and inexplicable than ever before(不好！要么comprehend many things more easily than ever before, 要么comprehend many things easily which seemed to be complicate and inexplicable before) On the other hand,however, the more knowledge we learn, the more complex and mysterious things seem to be.

Many things and phenomenon become comprehensible and explainable once we acquire the specific knowledge hehind(?) them. At the original time, people know little about the science or the idea of science. When they hear（时态） the thunder, they become full of fear. People at that time even mistakely(mistakenly) regard(ed) it as a kind of punish(ment) by the god for some of their deeds. As the time is(went) on, people begin（人类的探索有起止吗？） to explore the nature. Later they find that thunder is just a common phenomenoe(?) which often happens before a storm and clearly understand the essence of thunder. Now it is never mysterious even for a little boy.

It is also true that there are some things becoming more complex instead of comprehensible when we get more knowledge. when Copernicus’s theory that the earth revolves around the sun was provided（不好）, the people’s eyes firsty(?) shift（时态） from earth into（to） the mysterious universe. They have(?) more confusion about the world than before. For example, Why (does) the earth revolve around the sun? how? Are there any other planets in the universe except (for) earth and sun? if there are, what are they and how they run? How to get(?) them? Are there any lives in other planets? When and how these planets formed? and the like. A famous professor ever give(?) an(?) vivid way to understand the ralationship(?) between the known part and the unknown part just like this(paraphrase(d)): If we compare the known part of the world to the space within a circle, the unknown part of the world around the circle grows as the circle of our knowledge expands.

However,there is no need to feel frustrated about the increasingly more(increasingly和more 冲突) complex and more mysterious world that (we) confront because our knowledge in total keeps growing and correspondingly we are becoming better equipped to cope with the problems that emerge. (可以说说，然而正是这种complex 及需要解答的问题催促着人们不断的探索unknown，这样的话，可以和上一段很好的连接起来) As for the exploration of universe, people have achieved great success. Most of the above questions have been given quite satisfied answers within decades of years,moreover, it is never a dream for people to ramble on the moon and further on the mars. Therefore, people should expect rather than avoid learning more knowledge in order to better understand the unknown world.
To sum up, it is true to some extent that as we learn more knowledge, things become more complex and mysterious, however, a further content（可数吗？point） can not be ignored that with the abundant knowledge, we are more capable for（of） dealing for(with) the mysterious part(s) which ultimately propel the development of the whole world.

qhyw MM 加油！

realturtleUID: 69047

the earth and the sun
我觉得可以更深入地说一下为什么有些问题会变得更加complex和mysterious呢？
I think there are several reasons accounting for it:
first, there are things that people encounter for the first time so people are bewildered by them.
second, when it comes to the details of things that people have looked into, people are not able to make it clear every segment of the whole picture with the present knowledge and technology, thus finding them more complex and mysterious.
third, nature does not always showing people it really is, which make many people confused, and that's why there are still pseudosciences.

qhywUID: 136716

谢谢feier and realturtle!
我今天才开始了第一篇argument 限时写作，结果深受打击。
30分钟只写了2段，没有开头没有结尾，我很难想象考场上的人是怎么完成他们的作文考试的。
好像考过的人中几乎不存在没有写完的,且有五六百字，而且大多很满意。（万分钦佩与羡慕中！）
另外我做了一个试验，直接敲那篇argument的习作，400来字，居然花去近20分钟（当然不是纯敲，有少许思考）。（很惭愧，我还是这个专业的，哎）
无法想象，后面的考试如何继续？
另外这样的写作有意义吗？如此短的时间如何很好的展示自己的逻辑思维？茫然ing

你们都是怎么在规定时间完成写作的？expecting  your reply!

qhywUID: 136716

学习她，潇洒走一回！

不好，心情还是沉沉的。。。。。。

angle123UID: 105697

语法错误很多哦,但论证挺好,第四段衔接不好,我觉得如果从科学发展的过程见会更好