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GcanadaUID: 118286

183."As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious." Issue 9

Admittedly it is true that when we acquire more knowledge, we maybe perceive more complex knowledge than before and we may reach the sense that knowledge is changing into complexity. However, we should not ignore that the more knowledge we got, the more comprehensible things become. Hence, I do not stand the side of the assertion the title says.

In the first place, we can know the things better when we acquire more knowledge. It is true that we cannot know things completely at the time we do not still have more knowledge about the things. In the sense, we can look back into the scene in our primary schools, for example, when we were in the primary schools, we learned courses such as mathematics and English. Mathematics was the course we had so many questions about in that time, and we did not know about it well. As we went ahead from one grade to more grades, we could find we had known the math questions better and better and things about math became more comprehensible.

Moreover, if we did not acquire more knowledge, consider, we ourselves, what will happen? Of course, some things we did not know well still stand in our questionable head and cannot be solved, and thus it leads to some mysterious things. For instance, we were in childhood, when we were in primary schools, and we were asked to answer the reason why the apple does fall from the trees when it ripens. At the time we could not give an answer the question in that we did not still have the knowledge to solve the question. If we did not go ahead to study more knowledge, that may be a mystery for us. Hence, through more knowledge can we learn and know the thing, and solve the question not leave it a mystery.

On the other hand, it does represent the more complex when we acquire more knowledge, but it can give us a more clear answer to questions and make questions comprehensible. As we become university students, we need to study more knowledge and the knowledge also becomes more difficult and complex. For example, mathematics includes the calculator, which is difficult to us. But we do not perceive the mystery but have the sense that we can know about the things more comprehensibly.

All in all, we can get us more comprehensible through more knowledge. If we do not have more knowledge, on the contrary, we can get the mystery. Although more knowledge makes more complex questions, which we think are difficult, we can know it better and more completely. Therefore, I stand the side of the fact that acquiring more knowledge makes the things more comprehensible.

有没有什么ideas给我救命!谢谢!
还有有个题目问问:
Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them.
这是一个高频题目,能不能给我点ideas,虽然这个我也写了,可人家看了直接给我跑题两个字!

chinamaggieUID: 142335

你写的不错啊！现在不用太着急，那只能影响你的正常发挥。^-^

我想，正常的情况时我们学的越多， 就会对一些从前不太了解
的东西，突然觉得原来是这么回事啊，就是所说的高屋建瓴吧；
但也会有这种可能，就是，随着学识的增多，我们考虑问题的思路也会跟着增多，这会有两个结果，一是对问题考虑的会变得全面；二是多了一些不必要得思路，就是那个1+1 等于几的故事。专家，学者等大人们都不停的考虑考虑1+1到底应该等于几，而只有小学生们说出了等于2。

我想， 能不能从简单到复杂，在从复杂到简单，我觉得简单
才是一切事物的根本。

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传统和现代，我想这是个应该批判的观点；谁说传统和现代格格不入呢？ 我们不是可以把从前的旗袍翻新，做的比现代的衣服更好看吗？韩国人把传统的泡菜做成了汉堡包，结果大受欢迎；有古有今，有东有西，多好啊！^-^
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不要太紧张，你的水平，即使不复习也能拿4分，何况有复习了这么长时间呢！！！祝你好运，发挥正常！！！

happyman2000UID: 136936

我帮你看看！晚上回复！

GcanadaUID: 118286

谢谢,
chinamaggie,happyman,我以为贴了这么久了,都没有人来做出点反应,自己感觉没救了!
还好有你们啊,谢谢!

GcanadaUID: 118286

happyman,feier记得晚上都要来看看!
拜托了!

dukesilenceUID: 128386

建议尽量少的使用人称代词，我看WE用的太多。
开头的方式很多：
名次加插入语
名次同位语
介词
分词
it is
not
only
还有很多，这样子较正式

realturtleUID: 69047

刚看了qhyw的，也给回给那里了
I think there are several reasons accounting for it:
first, there are things that people encounter for the first time so people are bewildered by them.
second, when it comes to the details of things that people have looked into, people are not able to make it clear every segment of the whole picture with the present knowledge and technology, thus finding them more complex and mysterious.
third, nature does not always showing people it really is, which make many people confused, and that's why there are still pseudosciences.
我觉得第一点勉强
另，chinamaggie说的很有道理
simple is beauty
越简单越是不容易达到的境界，不是有道题是这个意思吗？^_^

feier521UID: 109747

183."As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious." Issue 9

Admittedly it is true that when we acquire more knowledge, we maybe perceive more complex knowledge than before and （we删掉） may reach the（a） sense that knowledge is changing into complexity. However, we should not ignore that the more knowledge we got（get）, the more comprehensible things become. Hence, I do not stand the side of the assertion the title says.(这么多的we？)

In the first place, we can know the things better when we acquire more knowledge. It is true that we cannot know things completely at the time we do not still have more knowledge about the things.（前两句一样的意思，正过来说，反过来说。） In the sense, we can look back into the scene in our primary schools, for example, when we were in the primary schools, we learned courses such as mathematics and English. Mathematics was the course we had so many questions （about删掉） in that time, and we did not know about it well. As we went ahead from one grade to more grades（higher grade）, we could find we had known the math questions better and better and things about math（表达别扭） became more comprehensible.
这里应该说很多以前不懂的问题现在明白了，并不是数学问题变得comprehensible。（还是太多的we）

Moreover, if we did not acquire more knowledge, consider, we ourselves, what will happen?（we ourselves？这一句写的不对。） Of course, some things we did not know well still stand in our questionable head and cannot be solved, and thus it leads to some mysterious things. For instance, we were in childhood, when we were in primary schools（还是primary schools的例子？）, and we were asked to answer the reason why the apple does fall from the trees when it ripens. At the（that） time we could not give an answer （to）the question in that we did not still have the knowledge to solve the question. If we did not go ahead to study more knowledge, that may be a mystery for us. Hence, through more knowledge can we learn and know the thing, and solve the question not leave it a mystery.（此段又是反过来说。）

On the other hand, it does represent the more complex when we acquire more knowledge（句式错误）, but it can give us a more clear（clearer） answer to questions and make questions comprehensible. As we become university students, we need to study more knowledge and the knowledge also becomes more difficult and complex. For example, mathematics includes the calculator（calculus）, which is difficult to us（说微积分难干什么？）. But we do not perceive the mystery but have the sense that we can know about the things more comprehensibly（开头一句，结尾一句，可以make things comprehensible，论证太简单了）.

All in all, we can get us（get us？） more comprehensible through more knowledge. If we do not have more knowledge, on the contrary, we can get （？）the mystery. Although more knowledge makes more complex questions, which we think are difficult, we can know it（them） better and more completely. Therefore, I stand the side of the fact that acquiring more knowledge makes the things more comprehensible.
总之，我们如何能够know things better and make them completely,没有说明白。

呵呵，Gcanada，批评的比较严厉一些。严兄出高弟！对把？
明天好好考！！
哥哥，给你加油，打气。运输武器，捣ETS 总部，冲啊.........

blake_wangUID: 9871

Gcanada，要相信自己，你写的很流畅，对付考试足以！心态要调整好，目标3分化，构思简单化。

happyman2000UID: 136936

183."As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."

Admittedly it is true that when we acquire more knowledge, we maybe perceive more complex knowledge than before and we may reach the sense that knowledge is changing into complexity. However, we should not ignore that the more knowledge we got, the more comprehensible things become（前后时态怎么不一样呀！）. Hence, I do not stand the side of the assertion the title says.开头还可以！

In the first place, we can know the things better when we acquire more knowledge. It is true that we cannot know things completely at the time we do not still have more knowledge about the things. In the sense, we can look back into the scene in our primary schools, for example, when we were in the primary schools, we learned courses such as mathematics and English. Mathematics was the course we had so many questions about in that time, and we did not know about it well. As we went ahead from one grade to more grades, we could find we had known the math questions better and better and things about math became more comprehensible.
这段讲增长知识的好处，比较清楚。

Moreover, if we did not acquire more knowledge, consider, we ourselves, what will happen? Of course, some things we did not know well still stand in our questionable head and cannot be solved, and thus it leads to some mysterious things. For instance, we were in childhood, when we were in primary schools, and we were asked to answer the reason（question about）why the apple does fall from the trees when it ripens. At the time we could not give an answer the question in that we did not still have the knowledge to solve the question. If we did not go ahead to study more knowledge, that may be a mystery for us. Hence, through more knowledge can we learn and know the thing, and solve the question not leave it a mystery.
从反面论述知识的好处，好！

On the other hand, it does represent the more complex when we acquire more knowledge, but it can give us a more clear answer to questions and make questions comprehensible. （这里的it指代什么呀？）As we become university students, we need to study more knowledge and the knowledge also becomes more difficult and complex. For example, mathematics includes the calculator,(微积分还是计算器) which is difficult to us. But we do not perceive the mystery but have the sense that we can know about the things more comprehensibly.

All in all, we can get us more comprehensible through more knowledge. If we do not have more knowledge, on the contrary, we can get the mystery. Although more knowledge makes more complex questions, which we think are difficult, we can know it better and more completely. Therefore, I stand the side of the fact that acquiring more knowledge makes the things more comprehensible.

Gcanada呀，你的文章错误很少啊，语言也比较通顺，我实在是挑不出多少毛病。
这个题目的确很难，我也不知道如何下手！但我觉得你的内容还是可以的，虽然不够深，但也没有浅的感觉。
明天好好靠吧，然后发个机经给我们！

GcanadaUID: 118286

谢谢大家!
我明天考完就来发机经的!:)