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感谢icyray,为了方便大伙,我给贴出来,可以吗?^_^
开头
第一句:
This argument concludes/recommends/argues that…
In this argument the author concludes that…
第二层:
To support this conclusion the writer cites…/points out that…
第三层:
The argument is logically unconvincing in several respects.
However, this evidence provides little credible support for the editorial's conclusion.
This argument suffers from several critical flaws and is therefore unconvincing/ unpersuasive as it stands.
However, the author's argument relies on a series of unsubstantiated assumptions, and is therefore unpersuasive as it stands.
The president's argument relies on several doubtful assumptions and is therefore unpersuasive.
BODY:
各段开头:
To begin with, First and foremost, To begin with, As a threshold matter, One problem with the argument is that,
Next, Aside from, The argument also, Moreover, Furthermore, A second problem with the argument is that, Even if …Finally, A Final problem with the argument involves…
具体内容:
the editorial observes a correlation between… and …, then concludes that the former is the cause of the latter.
However, the editorial fails to rule out other possible explanations for…For example,…
Any of these factors, or other social, political or economic factors, might lead to…
Without ruling out all other such factors it is unfair to conclude that…
This evidence would support the editorial's conclusion only if…
Moreover, the editorial fails to provide any evidence that…
cites the Observer survey in which…However, the editorial fails to provide any information about the survey population; therefore it is impossible to determine whether the survey results apply generally to the Alta population.
In addition, we are not informed how many parents were surveyed but did not respond. The greater this number, the less reliable the survey.
Thus, as it stands the Observer study is statistically unreliable and lends no credible support to the editorial's conclusion.
in citing the survey the editorial assumes that…However, the editorial provides no evidence to link one with the other.
the argument assumes unfairly that…It is entirely possible that…
The argument also overlooks many other possible explanations for…For example, perhaps Or perhaps Or perhaps For that matter, perhaps…/Any of these scenarios, if true, would undermine the conclusion that…/ Without considering and eliminating these and other possible reasons why…the president cannot rely on the fact that…to bolster the recommendation.
the letter fails to adequately support the claim that…
it is fallacious to conclude that…
Having failed to address this distinct possibility, the letter is wholly unconvincing.
In further support of the recommendation, the letter cites the fact that…yet…
But this fact alone lends no support to the recommendation.
The author must eliminate these possibilities in order to rely justifiably on this evidence for his or her recommendation.
the author unfairly equates …with…
The author ignores the possibility that…
Thus the author cannot convincingly conclude that
Some ways of concession:
Even if…the author concludes too hastily that…
Even assuming…the author falsely assumes that…
even assuming that…the author fails to provide adequate evidence that…
Even if … the author unfairly assumes that…
even if we accept that…the argument ignores the possibility that…Without ruling out this possibility, the argument's proponent cannot justifiably conclude that…
Besides, the mere fact that…proves nothing unless the author can show that…
The author unfairly assumes that…Lacking evidence that this is the case, the author cannot convince me that…
it assumes that…applies equally to…Yet this might not be the case, for…
A second problem with the argument is that it unjustifiably assumes that…
We are not informed…
Without ruling out such possibilities, the author cannot justifiably conclude that…
The only evidence the author provides to substantiate this assumption are…
If so, then the author cannot justifiably rely on these reports to conclude that…
it unfairly assumes that…It is entirely possible that…It is also possible that…
Without considering such potential academic benefits, the author cannot reasonably conclude that…
the president's assumption that… might be unwarranted.
This "either-or" argument is fallacious in that it ignores other possible causes of…
(The result) might have been caused by one or more other factors--such as…
Without ruling out these and other possible reasons for the decline, the president's argument seems ill-conceived.
the results of (some) survey are not necessarily representative of the overall population of …
If so, then the president has overlooked the possibility that…
If so, then (making such decision) would be ill-advised indeed.
the mere fact that… provides little assurance that…
Without ruling out these possibilities, the president cannot justify…on the basis of…
the argument depends on the assumption that …--rather than…
Yet lacking evidence to the contrary it is entirely possible that…
Without ruling out all other reasons why…, the argument that…is dubious at best.
Even if …, the argument relies on the further assumption that… Yet the only evidence the article offers to substantiate this assumption is that… (Perhaps… Or Perhaps…For that matter…)
In short, without more information about…were established it is impossible to assess whether…
(used for false analogy) Without accounting for such differences any analogy between the two cities is premature, and any conclusion based on that analogy is unjustified.
the author's inference that incentives which were effective in the past will also be effective in the future rests on the poor assumption that during the last 18 months all conditions upon which their effectiveness depend have remained unchanged.
the article fails to consider any other course of action that might help…
In short, without weighing the proposal against alternatives, the article's claim that the proposed incentives are the "best" means of …is wholly unconvincing.
结尾:
结尾的开头:
In conclusion, In sum, To sum up. In the final analysis,
the recommendation of the author is not well supported.
the editorial is (logically) unconvincing as it stands.
this is a weak argument.
the letter's author fails to adequately support the recommendation that…
the article has not convinced me that…(the proposal)
结尾的第二层:
To strengthen it/the argument /To bolster the argument, the arguer must provide detailed demographic/statistical evidence showing that…/ the editorial's author must rule out all other possible factors contributing to…/ the argument's proponent must consider and eliminate all other possible explanations for…/ the author must provide clear evidence that…/ the author must first establish a clear causal relationship between…/ the author must demonstrate/show that…/ The author must also show that…
The author must also provide evidence--perhaps by way of a reliable survey—that…
A proper evaluation of the recommendation requires more information about…
In order to better evaluate/ assess/understand the argument, we would need more information about…(the Observer survey population, and about the percentage of those surveyed who responded.)
I would also need to compare…with…
Finally, I would need to consider… |
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