issue130

treesUID: 82785

为了应付考试1周没写作文，2周没写AW，再不写就只好横尸街头了。写的感觉还是不对，谢谢诸位了！！！

这个是GC当时没写的那个题目，很是头疼，一会去写GC考的ARGUMENT。

严重超时，605words
思路1。孩子社会化决定部分命运。
2。我们有一些手段来诱导他们
3。还有其他原因决定社会的命运

ISSUE:
130."How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."

Do you think children could forecast the future of a society at present for their more and more significant status? The answer might be yes yet it is not the only reason for the destiny of society. And what is the nice method to learn the youth help bring about a better society is not be defined while we try to do the best at the while. In other words, it does not mean we have nothing to do for the raising of our society to children and only wait for their growth.

What decides the destiny of society is a question existing since the society appearance. The answer, most direct and traditional, is the youth. The level of their socialization forecasts the culture, civilization, the ideology and the material in future. As an ancient word, ‘children is the hope of the world’ and when people belong to and live into the society they could acknowledge from the mirror of history that most people’s meaning and behaviors infer to the situation today and aftertime, especially the children. For instance, the children from the North Africa usually live with poverty, the nation in whose eyes is a poor place and has not more opportunities to educate them while others from the developed country merging into the world as a young age have amount of ideas and viewpoints on the society. The result of that is always the poor would be poorer and the upgrowth is more flourish. And children who could not touch world enough will not impact it after being adults as the flowers which are not bloom in morning rarely show their coming appearance and fragrance at noon even the night.

And if only we want to educate our children to acknowledge and understand more about this world and do something advantageously in the future, we could find the suitable methods for them. As leading them to know more events on science and politics, giving their more chances to attain the deep, wide and complex fact, and allowing them publish their own viewpoints on everything around them. The conscious imply and suggestion will wake children to think over more than before.

Of course, it is impossible for us to know the destiny of society for a simply reason that children will be the host of the world sooner or later. Still even some other reasons are ignored by us when we face to this question. And this more or less leads to our misunderstanding of actual signification about the destiny of society. It is obvious that some other factors as the current of economics, the entity reflection from people and the condition of the peace and the war around the earth indicate the day after present. Take children from Iraq as an example, they grow under the destiny of war and most of them hate the battle and hope the placid and happy lives, but we are hard to say what will be some yeas later in Iraq that the situation is always not only determined by the public buy the leader who might be want to continue the worse activities. So how children are socialized is not equal to what they will do in the society, and not the only reason for the destiny of country.

To sum up, children’s socialization, on which we should make great efforts to lead, is decide the future of society to some extent and there are still some other facets effect the destiny. We should not separate the surrounding of an object, and had better pay more attention on the relationships among the every factor about it.

imongUID: 140258

如果只有3天了，那就尽量稳定就好了，没有什么突破的余地了，当然考试当天能有神来之笔再好不过
vicious circle是恶性循环，可以用在你的第二段。这片中规中距吧，见的很多了，也没有什么新的建议了。
我也是差不多，4号的。

trees是T版的斑竹，原来没注意到，失敬。

feier521UID: 109747

trees加油！
flourish 不是形容词把 flourious
The conscious imply (implication)
a simply(simple) reason
entity reflection是什么DD？
children’s socialization, on which we should make great efforts to lead, （is decide改为determines） the future of society

dreamflyerUID: 21967

给trees加油！只要注意时间就好了。
特别喜欢trees的头像，可惜俺就是不会贴一个上来：（

treesUID: 82785

谢谢各位！！！：）
dreamflyer我送你个PP衣服好了~估计你是MM那就花裙子了哦~
feier：flourish的形容词我查的是flourishing，还是好多语法错，汗
imong我也是4号的，你在哪里考呢？