Issue150 Because of television and worldwide computer connections...

hehuiUID: 134334

150. Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.

简要提纲:
1.科技大大方便了我们的生活,足不出户就可以了解世界的信息.但人们对旅游有着本能的渴望
2.we go out for a complete relaxation both of our bodies and our hearts.
3.more importantly, we are driven by our curiosity and enthusiasm to go out.
4.what's the role of the modern media such as television and computer connection, unlike what the title statement indicate, they bring more positive effects to tourism than causing the it to an end.
5.admittedly, sometimes those advanced methods do reduce the number of tourists to certain sights. for example computer-based museum encourage people to make online visits instead of going to it personally. However the intent of it is to protect the natural and cultural heritages in order to make more people accessible to them.
注:提纲是看到题目时写的,与正文有一定差距

正文:
The modern communication media such as television and World Wide Web has brought great changes to our daily life, making us available to all sorts of worldwide information without stepping out of our living rooms. But does that mean that because we can learn some knowledge about the places we want to visit, we will never go out ourselves? As long as we question ourselves why we travel, we may see our inner craving for travel. And as a result, tourism will never become obsolete.

We go out for a complete relaxation both of our bodies and of our hearts. We want to return to nature to get ourselves refreshed; we want to experience all the enjoyment on our trips. But all these cannot be achieved by television and Internet. Even the most advanced television set or computer, with the highest definition and the most vivid sound, are fundamentally nothing but flat screens. They may display to us the most beautiful natural scenery, but they cannot bring the fresh air in the morning mountains, they may show us the finest beach in the world, but they are impossible to bring us the healthy brown skin basked in the Hawaii sun; they may tell us what things like, but they cannot let us know what things really are. One cannot enjoy the fantastic Roast Duck (one of Beijing, China's famous local foods) or smell the aroma of French patisserie by watching a cuisine program or browsing a web page. Neither can we learn the true attraction of skiing without going to ski resorts in body. We need relaxation, not only by entertaining our eyes or ears but also the whole bodies and hearts. How can televisions and computers do that?

Moreover, travel functions beyond an entertainment; it is also an important way for us to communicate with other people and to express our deep love to our friends and families, whereas televisions and computers may offer little help. Many people enjoy going to hiking or a picnic with their family members and friends. Sometimes they even do not care whether their destination is attractive or not, the point is that they get a time to share with each other, a chance to further understand each other and to make each other happy. In turn, traveling can make us new friends too. During visiting a new place, we meet new people. Unlike watching the images of a western cowboy in jeans wear or a weird-dressed Mongolian nomad on television, we meet them face to face, we may talk to them, and may even change ideas with them. All these are magical experiences which we can never gain via even the most reportorial television program.

Another point that should not be missed is that we go traveling, driven by our eternal human natures of curiosity and enthusiasm of life. We can never resist the temptation to explore the outside world, especially those faraway and strange places. We can consider those adventurous travelers, or to say explorers, as the exemplifications to this point. In their views, appreciating or gaining the related knowledge of the new places are far from enough, and travel to them is challenge, both their challenge to the world and the challenge that the world put forward them. They are always eager to go anywhere they know by far. Therefore in this case, televisions and worldwide computer connections indeed assist them to go out, providing them plenty of information about new places, rather than impede them from traveling.

To summarize, however advanced the technology of television and computer goes, they will never substitute for our personal visit, because our yearning for travel is ingrained in our nature and hearts.

realturtleUID: 69047

150. Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.

简要提纲:
1.科技大大方便了我们的生活,足不出户就可以了解世界的信息.但人们对旅游有着本能的渴望
2.we go out for a complete relaxation both of our bodies and our hearts.
3.more importantly, we are driven by our curiosity and enthusiasm to go out.
4.what's the role of the modern media such as television and computer connection, unlike what the title statement indicate, they bring more positive effects to tourism than causing it to an end.
5.admittedly, sometimes those advanced methods do reduce the number of tourists to certain sights. for example computer-based museum encourage people to make online visits instead of going to it personally. However the intent of it is to protect the natural and cultural heritages in order to make more people accessible to them.
注:提纲是看到题目时写的,与正文有一定差距

正文:
The modern communication media such as television and World Wide Web has brought great changes to our daily life, making us available to all sorts of worldwide information without stepping out of our living rooms. But does that mean because we can learn some knowledge about the places we want to visit, we will never go out ourselves? As long as we question ourselves why we travel, we may see our inner cravings for travel. And as a result, tourism will never become obsolete.

We go out for a complete relaxation both of our bodies and of our hearts. We want to return to nature to get ourselves refreshed; we want to experience all the enjoyment on our trips. But all these cannot be achieved by television and Internet. Even the most advanced television set or computer, with the highest definition and the most vivid sound, are fundamentally nothing but flat screens. They may display to us the most beautiful natural scenery, but they cannot bring the fresh air in the morning mountains, they may show us the finest beach in the world, but they are impossible to bring us the healthy brown skin basked in the Hawaii sun; they may tell us what things like, but they cannot let us know what things really are. One cannot enjoy the fantastic Roast Duck (one of Beijing, China's famous local foods) or smell the aroma of French patisserie by watching a cuisine program or browsing a web page. Neither can we learn the true attraction of skiing without going to ski resorts in body. We need relaxation, not only by entertaining our eyes or ears but also the whole bodies and hearts. How can televisions and computers do that?这段排比，举例应用得很自然^_^

Moreover, travel functions beyond an entertainment; it is also an important way for us to communicate with other people and to express our deep love to our friends and families, whereas televisions and computers may offer little help. Many people enjoy going to hiking or a picnic with their family members and friends. Sometimes they even do not care whether their destination is attractive or not, the point is that they get a time to share with each other, a chance to further understand each other and to make each other happy. In turn, traveling can make us new friends too. During visiting a new place, we meet new people. Unlike watching the images of a western cowboy in jeans wear or a weird-dressed Mongolian nomad on television, we meet them face to face, we may talk to them, and may even change ideas with them. All these are magical experiences which we can never gain via even the most reportorial television program.

Another point that should not be missed is that we go traveling, driven by our eternal human natures of curiosity and enthusiasm of life. We can never resist the temptation to explore the outside world, especially those faraway and strange places. We can consider those adventurous travelers, or to say explorers, as the exemplifications to this point. In their views, appreciating or gaining the related knowledge of the new places are far from enough, and travel to them is challenge, both their challenge to the world and the challenge that the world put forward them. They are always eager to go anywhere they know by far. Therefore in this case, televisions and worldwide computer connections indeed assist them to go out, providing them plenty of information about new places, rather than impede them from traveling.

To summarize, however advanced the technology of television and computer goes, they will never substitute for our personal visit, because our yearning for travel is ingrained in our nature and hearts.

看过两三篇同题作文，感觉还真是一人一种观点
这篇文章也写得不错
还有先转进习题库的那篇雨&彩虹写的，也不错
可以作为同题作文对照着看