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狐步双双UID: 2376845

占楼，等修改出来的结果，再根据结果写篇作文:loveliness:谢谢欣儿同学

andingmenUID: 3404670

关于4.25的作文我有个问题，想请教一下。

4-25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important characteristics for a politician or leader is good communication skill.

As a successful politician or leader,a person must have many extraordinary characteristics such as great courage,outstanding intelligence,broad horizons and good communication skills.I do not think that a good communication skill is the most important characteristic.In my opinion,a broad horizon is the most important one.I will give some reasons in the following paragraphs.
First,a broad horizon can make you figure out what the audience desire.I want to take Steven Jobs as an example.As the leader of Apple Inc.,Jobs had a very long-time horizon.He knew what the consumers need and created so many products of high technology such as Iphone and Ipad.If Jobs were not aware of the market demands,these products which now are changing the world might never appear.So,I think as a leader of a company,broad horizon is the most important characteristic.
Second,

写到这里我忽然想起了一个问题。我这样写算不算偏题？因为我似乎提出了另一个观点：horizon。
没写完的second是想举obama的例子，医疗改革等解决很多问题，体现obama高瞻远瞩。最后再来一个总结。

题目里说认不认可交流是最重要的。我是不是应该写成：
1.自己的观点：不是最重要的
2.好的交流促进问题的解决，但是要真正高效地解决问题，需要各方面的技能，缺一不可。可以举Jobs的例子：horizon/creativity/hard work/cooperation......促成成功。所以交流能力不是最重要的。
3.Obama高瞻远瞩解决医改问题，造福社会，依靠的是自己的智慧、执行力以及各方面的协调。交流能力有作用，但是不是最重要的。
4.总结

我觉得要是我agree的话要好写得多。。。。例子都可以反过来用，但是觉得和事实不符啊。
求指点。

dongfangbaobeiUID: 3413785

我要占座+4.26+作业类型：独立

dongfangbaobeiUID: 3413785

dongfangbaobei 发表于 2013-4-26 16:38
我要占座+4.26+作业类型：独立

[url=(独立写作) 4.11作业贴 https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;fromuid=3413785 ]4.26作文[/url]

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4.26 https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1776753808

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andingmen 发表于 2013-4-26 16:23
关于4.25的作文我有个问题，想请教一下。

4-25

不算跑题~你举出来一个品质比communication重要就行。或者举出一个不擅长交流的政客或者领导者更好。你自己写的123条就很好。

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月明日暗 发表于 2013-4-25 23:09
你不是已经上传上去了么？

我占座了的啊。。。您就把我华丽丽的忽略了。。。刚好这个题目不会写。。。那我再占27好啦~~谢谢啦~~辛苦！！！

dongfangbaobeiUID: 3413785

我要占座+4.27+作业类型：独立

狐步双双UID: 2376845

4.27 [新独立写作] 狐步双双的作文帖
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狐步双双UID: 2376845

4.27 [新独立写作] 狐步双双的作文帖

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不好意思，第一次发发错了呀，里面有个段落，我不知道带不带政治色彩呢？？

Moreover, newspaper or magazines will lead misunderstanding to us. Before I went to Japan, I heard a lot of negative aspect of Japan from the Medias, such as they weren’t friendly with Chinese due to history problem and there is a dangerous country for us. However, I arrived in Japan and lived there for several months, felt how kind of they are.  When I face to the difficult situation, they will devote great efforts to help me. The information I have collected over two years leads me to believe that Japan is more hospitable than people think.

我作文好差的，希望大家狠狠批我，再给我些建议，感激不尽

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4.27 axdliu 的作业贴：

https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1776924949

多谢版主大人~

月明日暗UID: 3400027

yhggg 发表于 2013-4-26 23:44
我占座了的啊。。。您就把我华丽丽的忽略了。。。刚好这个题目不会写。。。那我再占27好啦~~谢谢啦~~辛苦 ...

实在不好意思。。囧囧。可能漏看了。今天帮你分！

月明日暗UID: 3400027

狐步双双 发表于 2013-4-27 11:04
4.27 [新独立写作] 狐步双双的作文帖

https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=1546017&fromu ...

不算呀。写的很好

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4-27
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1516293-1-1.html

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https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1547499-1-1.html   
第一次参加，求大侠狂拍钻，下个月就要考试了，求解救。