Task 1
大学的录取通知应是I got the admission from my dream university,不是offer letter
milestone /maɪlstəʊn/的/aɪ/ 误发成/ɪ/
时态要仔细,过去时 - which was really a small town; I went outside to see the world
I got ???? to leave my hometown,中间的那个词听不清是什么
倒数第二句很奇怪,I changed them out? 想表达什么?
Task 2
prefer的用法是prefer sth | prefer to do/doing sth | prefer A to B
在表达的时候需要注意单复数,例如:on the questions which are (is) asking opinions
建议用they are only based on the teachers' viewpoints,而不是personality