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发表于 2015-1-30 20:51:21 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

本帖最后由锦衣。于 2015-2-28 02:34 编辑

英文渣求各种建议。
刚开始可能有些逻辑混乱和手生，多多包涵了。
从1.30号开始：）

1.30
Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. What is your view?
P1：赞成花更多时间在教学，否则会导致教学质量下降。
P2：教学质量下降→本科生没法找到好工作。
P3：教学质量下降→有志于研究的学生会改变主意。
P4：让步，提出调节方法。
P5：总结，强调教学重要性。

2.2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? students should not take part-time jobs when they're studying in university.
P1：disagree
P2：招聘和招生都喜欢有工作经验的学生
P3：工作帮助学生更理解所学知识
P4：让步
P5：总结

2.4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In modern times, grandparents cannot give their grandchildren useful advice because the world of today andthe world of 50 years ago are too different.
P1：disagree
P2：classical suggestions don't change
P3: old men have abundant experience
P4: admittely
P5: conclusion

2.7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government is not doing enough to educate people about the importance of good nutrition and healthy eating.
P1：agree;
P2：school education层面
P3：daily life层面
P4: internet and books层面
P5:conclusion

2.8 TPO1 综合写作
好久没写综合啦，这次也就在规定时间内完成，质量不怎么样，辛苦批改者~

2.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Workers would be much happier if they are doing different types of tasks during their workday than doing the same task.
这次换了种形式走推导型：
做不同工作→熟悉不同专业技能，提高个人能力→得到晋升机会→晋升之后有钱有地位有成就感→所以很开心

2.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To achieve successful development of a country, a government should spend more money on young children’s education rather than on universities.
P1：Agree
P2：基础教育让没上过大学的人也成为国家发展的重要部分
P3：基础教育为大学提供良好生源
P4：conclusion

2.15
P1：Agree
P2：招聘会上，比起低社会地位的职位，人们会更多去申请其他岗位。
P3：即使不给钱，慈善活动也不缺志愿者。
P4：让步，认为钱重要的都是需要钱维持基本生存的，当生存需要被满足，他们会改变观念。
P5：conclusion

2.17
今天貌似没人改只有我一个人占座……
P1：agree
P2：basic education
P3：universities' education
P4:admittly
P5:conclusion

2.25
P1:disagree
P2:因为社会竞争激烈，家长更看重老师
P3:比起过去，很多学生想要将来当老师
P4:让步+削弱让步（媒体扩大时态）
P5:conclusion

2.26
P1：AGREE
P2：赞助社会活动能扩大学校知名度
P3：社会活动能为学生提供工作经验
P4：让步
P5：总结

2.27
思路见文档

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