老师~一直想谢谢您啊~虽然我一直潜水也不爱在坛子里说话~但是您的博客真的对我帮助很大~要知道两个月前一战的时候只有3.0...
找出来啦是这个“229楼:issue 28/ 113/120/121/127/145 greatness of nations measured by achievement or welfare”
思路:基本按照老师的思路来的
paragraph1:introduction:disagree
paragraph2:define "greatness"
paragraph3: nation rich in natural resources, high welfare, low achievements, not great nation
paragraph4: take ancient China as an example, four invention=>great nation with low welfare but high achievement
paragraph4: take America as an example, high welfare, high achievements,great nation=> nation with high welfare could be a great nation, actually high welfare is helpful to achievements (financial support)
paragraph5: both could be an indicator, but achievement is the main one, welfare is subsidiary
paragraph6: the statement emphasizes on the wrong side
大致是这样,不知道这样说老师能否意会(我的表达实在是不太好)