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发表于 2016-1-20 20:30:43 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>The course trains my ability to write effectively in English.</correction>
<correction.s2> Earning an MBA degree will augment the confidence of the business executives.</correction>

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本帖最后由 kasy 于 2016-1-20 23:23 编辑

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:32:32 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>搭配不当？？</error_type>
<correction.s1>The course will improve my ability on writing effectively in English.</correction>
<correction.s2>Earning an MBA degree will improve the confidence of the business executives.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:34:26 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:34:28 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
This course trains my ablity to write English effectively.

<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>
Earning an MBA degree would augment the confidence of the business executives.

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:35:51 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>搭配错误（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>The course trains my writing ability of English effectively </correction>
<correction.s2>An MBA degree will augment the confidence of the business executives.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:36:05 来自手机 |显示全部楼层

write English effecttively,
will argue

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:37:38 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>词语搭配</error_type>
<correction.s1>The course improves my ability in writing effectively in English.</correction>
<correction.s2>Earning an MBA degree will promote the confidence of the business executives.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:38:46 |显示全部楼层

句子 1 The course trains my ability to write effectively in English.
句子 2 Earning an MBA degree will augment the confidence of the business executives.
<训练某人做某事，主语应该是人，而不是物.s1>
<correction.s1>My ability was trained to write effectively in English.？？？
<？>
<correction.s2>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:40:08 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>1. 搭配冗余 2.不知道 </error_type>
<correction.s1> The course trains my writing ability effectively in English.</correction>
<correction.s2> Earning an MBA degree will augment the confidence of the business executives. </correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:41:26 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>单词的选择不合适</error_type>
<correction.s1>The course improves my ability to write effectively in English.</correction>
<correction.s2>Earning an MBA degree will gain the confidence of the business executives.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:42:14 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>语序错误<error_type>
<correction.S1>The course trains my ablity to write in English effectively

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:42:19 |显示全部楼层

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>The course trains my ability in writing English effectively.</correction>
<correction.s2>Earning an MBA degree will enhance the confidence of the business executives. </correction>