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发表于 2004-7-31 11:07:56 |只看该作者
W:It's all right to wear jeans for a class presentation, isn't it?

M:That's what I'm wearing. But if we wear jackets too, maybe we won't look so casual.

What does the man imply? (C)

(A) The woman shouldn't wear jeans.
(B) They shouldn't dress too much alike.
(C) They shouldn't dress too informally.
(D) The man is looking for a new jacket.
我的理解是,woman说我们去class presentation可以穿的随便吧,语气不太肯定
man说我穿的就是这样的,但也许可以加上jacket,那样就不会显得过于随便了。
两人都不太肯定能不能穿得随便,但觉得还是不要过于随便为好~
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发表于 2004-7-31 12:42:20 |只看该作者
支持楼上的说法!
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发表于 2004-7-31 13:22:18 |只看该作者
那似乎(C) They shouldn't dress too informally. 改为(C) They shouldn't dress too casually.

更贴切些~~
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
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和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
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放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
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发表于 2004-7-31 19:58:36 |只看该作者

请斑竹和大家给点意见,第一篇作文,

Topic: when people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer ? support your answer with specific details.



Moving to another country, people have a good opportunity to learn a new life style. It can not only help people to obtain different customs, but also increase their knowledge and broaden their vision. However, some people insist on their own way to live. On balance, I prefer to follow the new kind of way to live.

First of all, I concede that there are some disadvantages to follow the customs of the new country. For instance, in many western countries, people greet each other by kissing when they meet. In their opinions, this is the best way to say hi and make a good blessing. Nevertheless, in eastern countries, like china , when people meet , they would just say hello to express their greeting. Kissing is used only when people want to convey their love to their lovers. Another drawback is that some countries have their own diets which is difficult for foreigners to adapt. For example, people tend to cook the food half done in many western countries, while people in eastern countries prefer to eat them done enough.
  
Even though there are some disadvantages to follow the new way of life, I believe that the advantages are far outweigh them. By following the customs of the new country, people can learn new life experience and knowledge. To illustrate this point , here is an example ,when people move to an English speaking country, they definitely improve their English by conversing with native people. Furthermore, people could take a good chance to make friends with different countries’. In this way , people would earn a lot in life.

Another advantage is that following the new way of life in foreign country can also give us a good chance to improve our customs. Because different countries have different advantages. People who live in foreign country can use the new customs to improve their own ones. For example, people enjoy fast food in western countries, but these food are bad for health. While in eastern countries, many people have their own ways to eat healthier. So people could learn a lot from foreign customs to do benefit to their own customs.

To sum up, although there are some disadvantages when people follow the customs of the new country, the advantages are more obvious. It can help people more easy to adapt to live in foreign country. In addition, people will learn a lot of new knowledge and experience. So in my opinion, it’s very important and helpful to follow the new way of life when people move to another country.
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发表于 2004-8-1 05:34:45 |只看该作者
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[B]那似乎(C) They shouldn't dress too informally. 改为(C) They shouldn't dress too casually.

更贴切些~~ [/B]


看来你粗心了, informally = casually.
你理解为formally了,对吧?
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发表于 2004-8-1 05:56:17 |只看该作者

Re: 请斑竹和大家给点意见,第一篇作文,

最初由 xiongml81 发布
[B]Topic: when people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these..

以下省略...... [/B]


整体不错.这种结构比较另类的.让步段在前做为第一个理由?,不过范文中老外有这么写的.
那个kiss的例子.不只是lover之间对吧?亲人...,这个老外也知道,所以有点片面.并且既然要支持一个观点,对立观点的好处不要写得篇幅太长为好.
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发表于 2004-8-1 07:16:36 |只看该作者
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[B]..

以下省略...... [/B]


晕倒~~我这人确实很粗心的,犯了这么弱智的错误~~~

当时看的时候觉得一看到inform,就好像觉得挺正式的似的,后面想都没想,在版上发问题的时候也是惯性思维

嗯呐,这种错误应该体罚~~~~~~~
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
追一切我们未完成地梦

放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
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发表于 2004-8-1 07:20:12 |只看该作者

Re: 请斑竹和大家给点意见,第一篇作文,

最初由 xiongml81 发布
[B]Topic: when people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these..

以下省略...... [/B]


结构和语言都好像issue啊~~不知道这么写TWE行不行?

nysabrina 的意见“对立观点的好处不要写得篇幅太长为好”没错,要不就分不清主次了:)
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
追一切我们未完成地梦

放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
[/B]

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发表于 2004-8-1 08:28:42 |只看该作者

打一下气吧~~

给dalloway加油,忽忽~~

还有20天

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发表于 2004-8-1 08:30:45 |只看该作者

谢谢Karen~~

我的现状是:听力依旧头疼,信心呈负极大值状态。究其原因:实力不够+方法不济。

彻底打倒自己,重新来过

还有20天,Karen,我们一起加油~~
[B]终于还是走到这一天
要奔向各自的世界
没人能取代记忆中的你
和那段青春岁月

一路我们曾携手并肩
用汗和泪写下永远
拿欢笑荣耀换一句誓言
夜夜在梦里相约

放心去飞勇敢地去追
追一切我们未完成地梦

放心去飞勇敢地挥别
说好了这一次不掉眼泪
[/B]

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发表于 2004-8-1 09:14:50 |只看该作者
HI!我可以加入你们吗?
我是参加10T的.报告一下现状:
听力2000年以前基本在4-5个之间
语法极其不稳定,有时1-2个,有时甚至有5个
阅读:..............是我的弱项,阅读速度慢暂且不提,基本每次做50就错14.5个,估计是词汇问题(我还没背词汇书...........)
作文:是我目前最担心的问题,我对自己的文章极其没有把握,不知道什么才是好,什么才是不好,一直都没动笔写,有时想写面对着题目又不知道写什么...........

谢谢大家了!

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发表于 2004-8-1 17:11:10 |只看该作者

^_^

看了大家所有的帖子,感觉很热闹嘛!好羡慕哦!
这8T是我第一次参加有关出国的考试,没有好好准备呢还。
不过斗胆想请各位指教一些,不胜感激啊!
听力:基本稳定在7,8个。而且PART B,C总是要占到一半,或者更多。怎么办呢?请各位帮忙。
语法:稳定在3,4个。偶尔会很少,就有一两个。给点建议呢?多谢!
阅读:我的阅读也大概在八个左右。可是问题是这样的,我一般情况下,对于每篇文章,要么不错,一错就是3个。现在一般错的是主体题(最近两次的)。不过以前更多的是词汇题。
写作:到现在还一片没有写过呢!怎么办呢?不过,文章看了不少。模板也写出来了。请各位大侠指教!
不胜感激啊!
BTW:请问,那个小梅是什么?词汇都要背什么呢?
张红岩那本不够吧?
坚持到最后一天!!!!

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发表于 2004-8-1 17:43:43 |只看该作者
看了xiongml81的作文,你是规定时间写的吗?感觉过渡不错,可是好像也是范文的格式啊,我有点糊涂,想问问xqmelissa和yadcx,这算是模板的格式吗?
另我有一个作文字数的问题,我昨天看了一下答题纸,对照了一下,我写的300多字的文章只能写到答题纸背面的中间啊,这样够吗?
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发表于 2004-8-1 18:30:44 |只看该作者

我能跟着你们混吗?

我能跟着你们混吗?

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发表于 2004-8-1 18:36:32 |只看该作者
我做新东方的听力教程 平均错5个/套,最多11个,最少2个, 4~6个占多数
阅读出错率<=6%
语法出错率<=5%
这里能评改作文吗?
Vive la France, Vive la republic!

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