issue25 ,改了好久，2月2日的我的第一篇

foreverlovesUID: 166930

25"Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction-in other words, to make things as simple as possible."


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3 政治领域

I strongly agree with the issue that it requires real effort and courage to make things as simple as possible. As the world around us is a complex one, In order to make it easily accepted by us, we have to make great effort. Furthermore, the society we are living in is also full of conflict, in order for us to live peacefully, we have to make things simple, and this requires courage.

In the course of rendering the world readily understood, science emerges. The development of science, in a sense, is a process of simplifying both the theories and equations. This is brutally true   if we look back upon the development of science. Newton, the founder of the classic physics, described his theory only utilizing three laws, which is regarded as a generalization of the complex macro world; Maxwell, the forerunner of the electromagnetism, formulated his theory through four equations. The four simple equations completely describe the interaction between electronics and magnetism and therefore make wireless communication possible. Based on Einstein's equation mass-energy law, the nuclear energy is derived. However, behind these simple equations and theories is the great effort made by these great scientists. It is through their hard work that these theories come into being and finally change the world.

When science is applied to practical account, engineering emerges .this is more and more manifest. Probably we still remember the first computer ENIAC, produced in 1946, took too much room and required many people to manipulate it. However, nowadays we can operate personal computer freely and easily; so is the same with mobile phone. It is really hard to imagine that the mobile phone we are using today originate from a big brick-like stuff. Behind the process of simplifying are the great efforts of thousands and millions of engineers. From the first transistor to the first integrated circuit, from the first RAM to the windows operation system, no one can deny this is an exhausting process and needs great effort.

As far as the social activity is concerned, I would draw my conclusion by reviewing the economic crisis during the 1920s.In this man-made disaster, some countries seek the way out by invading the neighboring countries, such as Japan, Germany and Italy, which made things bigger and more complex. To the contrary, great American president Roosevelt ,with great courage ,began New Deal, and helped the U.S live through the Great Depression peacefully, which made things simple. (该例子不大恰当，但是怎么也想不出了，55，有没有人帮我想想呢，在social activity领域simplify 的例子)

In sum, from what we have discussed above, we arrive at the conclusion that effort and courage are required in order to make things simple both in scientific endeavors and in social areas.

指向大海UID: 158737

I strongly agree with the issue that it requires real effort and courage to make things as simple as possible. As the world around us is a complex one, In order to make it easily accepted by us, we have to make great effort. 这句看的别扭,as应该没有吧?in  order to 是小写吧? Furthermore, the society we are living in is also full of conflict, in order for us to live peacefully, we have to make things simple, and this requires courage.

In the course of rendering the world readily understood, science emerges. The development of science, in a sense, is a process of simplifying both the theories and equations. This is brutally true if we look back upon the development of science. Newton, the founder of the classic physics, described his theory only utilizing three laws, which is regarded as a generalization of the complex macro world; Maxwell, the forerunner of the electromagnetism, formulated his theory through four equations. The four simple equations completely describe the interaction between electronics and magnetism and therefore make wireless communication possible. Based on Einstein's equation mass-energy law, the nuclear energy is derived. 这一个例子为何不用和前面一样的格式把人名放前面然后列举贡献哪? However, behind these simple equations and theories is the great effort made by these great scientists. It is through their hard workworking?偶觉得是work hard和hard working也许是偶见识少了 that these theories come into being and finally change the world.

When science is applied to practical account, engineering emerges .this is more and more manifest. Probably we still remember the first computer ENIAC, produced in 1946, took too much room and required many people to manipulate it. 改为took too enormous room and required huge number of people to manipulate it.语言是不是更好一些However, nowadays we can operate personal computer freely and easily; so is the same with mobile phone. It is really hard to imagine that the mobile phone we are using today originate from a big brick-like stuff. Behind the process of simplifying are the great efforts of thousands and millions of engineers. From the first transistor to the first integrated circuit, from the first RAM to the windows operation system, no one can deny this is an exhausting process and needs great effort.

As far as the social activity is concerned, I would draw my conclusion by reviewing the economic crisis during the 1920s.In this man-made disaster, some countries seek the way out by invading the neighboring countries, such as Japan, Germany and Italy, which made things bigger and more complex. To the contrary, great American president Roosevelt ,with great courage ,began New Deal, and helped the U.S live through the Great Depression peacefully, which made things simple. (该例子不大恰当，但是怎么也想不出了，55，有没有人帮我想想呢，在social activity领域simplify 的例子) 偶觉得你不一定要写政治领域的换成艺术怎么样?

In sum, from what we have discussed above, we arrive at the conclusion that effort and courage are required in order to make things simple both in scientific endeavors and in social areas.

偶觉得在句式方面作者是不是太追求多样化了,看的我有些眼花,还有就是只有例子没有例证,不过这些例子是很好的,如果是限时写的整体上我觉得是不错了,一点意见,仅供参考

foreverlovesUID: 166930

谢谢楼上的,我是限时写了,但写完以后惨不忍睹,改了1个多小时,所以句子复杂了,

偶觉得你不一定要写政治领域的换成艺术怎么样?

茅塞顿开之感,呵呵,也许从来就比较害怕艺术,所以就没感往那儿想,我再想想,你有什么好主意
艺术上的简单化的例子一起来讨论下

例子要跟论证,这点记下了,多谢