ISSUE50 高频7词。第一次在45分钟内敲完了字，静候拍

gehaifengUID：189090

时间一紧，很多心中的例子就忘写了，而且句式单一，有“  ××应当怎样做才能××样 ” 喊口号的不良趋势。

请大家指正，并留下链接。

position:  有保留的反对
1。在engineering领域，抽出适当的时间是必须的
2。在management领域， 也是要抽出适当的时间
3。有些时候，还是好好当老师的好。

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In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
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What it the goal of high level education in colleges and universities? When come to the complex issue about whether or not any faculty should be required to devote most of their time in teaching, I don't agree with the speaker's assert, for it depend on the field of education and the level of the students to make the ultimately decision.

To begin with, when come the education field of engineering, which is popular in many universities, it is essential for the professors performing the academic research while teaching their students about the latest technology. The goal for the students who are special in engineering is to inspiring their genius ideas into the real world to solve problems, which in turn call for a tutor or teacher who has fluent experience in this special field. Take the computer technology which are developed fast today for instance, the student should know the direction besides the knowledge on the textbook. Suppose that if the teaches don't cost extra time performing his/her research, less experience as well as accumulation of the latest direction will be gathered, which will in turn has negative effect during his lessons to the young who are eager to receive the innovative technology.  Therefore, in the field of engineering, which has a relative tight connection with the practice, the faulty as well as the professors ought to take some time doing academic research and concern the orientation of the technology in his field.

Moreover, in management school, which aimed at optimization of limited resources to achieve the maximal profit, merely teaching on the classes is not sufficient and effectless. For the knowledge on the textbook is indeed the collection of experience and failure, no one can grasp the spirit of management without participating in some project. And deeply consideration of this fact, management schools of many famous universities including Yale and Harvard frequently asked the leader of international companies and government to present speech for their students, which reflect the importance and necessity of practice in the management education. Therefore it is clearly education leaders and professors majoring in this field should not keep themselves out the chance to access the experience of their field, and merely preparing for the courses they teach.

On the other hand, however, for the variety of fields among college education, it is sometimes preferable for the teaches to spend much part of their time in preparing the course they teach, especially for the freshmen. For the new student who entrance into the universities without much academic background, it is crucial for them to learn as much knowledge as possible for the their future advancement. If the teachers bring the their latest news and materials in some specific academic field to the young, which are too hard for they to appreciate, it may achieve nothing beside discourage their interest.
In sum, whether or not should the teachers and professors spend much time working on their academic research rely much on the level and the time in which their students are involved. Appropriately arrangement of the time between academic and teaching in some special education field will impel the progress of students knowledge base and also the advancement of the academic itself.

猫猫624UID：171232

思路清晰,语言也还不错.进步挺大的.加油

gehaifengUID：189090

猫猫，你再仔细看看我的首段，还有TS,
我写跑题了。没有认真读题

这是我重新写的东西，参照了修瑞的北美范文。 烦劳再拍一次吧

P:  有保留的赞成。  除了某些专业，都应该这样做  
B1: 某些细节，让步
B2：工科应该多多实践
B3 ：管理学科也应该多多的时间



Issue50  第5篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：58分35秒     514 words
从2005年2月19日15时52分到2005年2月19日16时58分
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In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
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When come to the issue of enhance the instruction quality at colleges and universities, whether or not should all faculty be involved in outside work beside academic mainly relies on the kind of the field. To my point of view, besides some fields such as humanity and performance art which are either not appropriate for working outside or itself is part of working in their academic world, all other faculty ought to spend some time participating in some relevant filed.

As a threshold matter, the statement require qualifications in two aspects. One is some field that no possible work besides the academic world exists. Take humanity for example, what will professor who study humanity do without focusing on their academic research? The second are some fields that working outside itself is a kind of way to teach their students. For instance, the actively participation of some professors who teach performing art , in some extent ,  is an appropriate way and only way to show their students about the knowledge and technology in this specific field.

Aside from these fields, I strongly agree that it is worthwhile for college faculty to work outside the academic world in position relevant with their field. For it benefits both the society and the improvement of the field as well as enhances the students' knowledge themselves. First, in the education field of engineering, for example,  in which experience and real-world practice take a essential role in education, working outside the academic is indispensable for the faulty. With doing some projects relevant to the their academy, professors can bring up-to-data information and useful experience about their research field to the students, which are vivid samples to the principles in the textbook. On the other hand, if professors exclude them away from taking some practice outside their academic research, and keep digesting only the theories in the textbook, they can't follow the rapid development of the complex technology today, which will in turn impede student's future development.

Turn to the field of management next, which aims at optimize the limited resource for the purpose of achieving the maxim result in the real world, appropriately participating in some outside work is necessary and even desirable for both society and professor. Nowadays, professors in the management school of many famous universities such as Yale and Harvard in American often act as consultants in big companies. By doing this, not only the companies and the society can get constructive advice from the experts , the students of these professors, on the other hand, can also receive various successful experience. In fact, many big colleges often request the leaders of some international companies and governments to present lectures to their student, which will broaden the young's knowledge and incite their interest and genius for their future work in this special field.

In sum, I support with what the speaker asserts. In some academic field, appropriately participation of the faulty in the work relevant to their research field will benefits the education as well as impel the advancement of this field .

猫猫624UID：171232

When comeit comes or coming to the issue of enhance enhancing the instruction quality at colleges and universities, whether or not should all faculty be involved in outside work beside academic mainly relies on the kind of the field.前面是疑问格式这里是”？” Toin my point of view, besides some fields such as humanity and performance art which are either not appropriate for working outside or itself is part of working in their academic world, all other faculty ought to spend some time participating in some relevant fileds.

As a threshold matter, the statement requires qualifications in two aspects. One is some field that no possible work besides the academic world exists. first, there exists no possible besides the academic world in some fields Take humanity for example, what will professor who study humanity do without focusing on their academic research? 用设问句后面要给答案。你等老外来回答？The second are some fields that working outside itself is a kind of way to teach their students.second, working outside itself is a kind of way to teach students in other fields For instance, the activelyactive participation of some professors who teach performing art , into some extent , is an appropriate way and only way an appropriate, even the only way to show their students about the knowledge and technology in this specific field.

Aside from these fields, I strongly agree that it is worthwhile for college faculty to work outside the academic world in position relevant with their field. For做原因吗？for在句首一般不表原因 it benefits both the society and the improvement of the field as well as enhances the students' knowledge themselves去看一下反身代词用法，主宾一致用反身代词. First, in the education field of engineering, for example, in which experience and real-world practice take aan essential role in education, working outside the academic is indispensable for the faulty. With doing some projects relevant to the their academy, professors can bring up-to-data information and useful experience about their research field to the students, which are vivid samples to the principles in the textbook. On the other hand, if professors exclude them away from taking some practice outside their academic research, and keep digesting only the theories in the textbook, they can't follow the rapid development of the complex technology today, which will in turn impede student's future development.

Turn to the field of management next, which aims at optimizeoptimizing the limited resource for the purpose of achieving the maxim result in the real world, appropriately participating in some outside work is necessary and even desirable for both society and professor. Nowadays, professors in the management school of many famous universities such as Yale and Harvard in American often act as consultants in big companies. By doing this, not only the companies and the society can get constructive advice from the experts , the students of these professors, on the other hand, but also 去哪里了can also receive various successful experience. In fact, many big colleges often request the leaders of some international companies and governments to present lectures to their students, which will broaden the young's knowledge and incite their interest and genius for their future work in this special field.

In sum, I support with what the speaker asserts. In some academic fields, appropriately appropriate participation of the faulty in the work relevant to their research field will benefits the education as well as impel the advancement of this field .
思路没有什么大问题，句式尽量稍做变换，非限制性从句不要太多，因为这一句式用不好文章会比较松散

gehaifengUID：189090

感谢猫猫的批改。文章中还存在这么多低级错误，真是焦虑

句式的提高不是一两天的功夫， 我看到别人的文章中的好句子就把他们摘抄下来

可是在模考的时候，就是想不起来 :(

猫猫624UID：171232

gehaifeng,不要焦虑,谁的文章都难免低级错误.你写的已经有进步了.保持平常心,因为虽然作文是慢工夫.但是只要用心练,到考试拿个4分应该没有问题.

gehaifengUID：189090

谢谢猫猫的祝福。
我写作的提高慢和自己的惰性是有关系的，看到别人说自己每天在电脑上写4个小时以上，我觉得惭愧
当然，个人条件和外部条件都不一样，可比性不高

any, try my best, thanks again