issue 87(高频，顶回拍！)

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Issue 87 Test
In this era of rapid social and technological advancement leading to great change of human society, many complex and diverse problems are always left to the expert due to his/her tremendous of experience and knowledge in the certain areas. Thus, I fundamentally hold that the expert is more likely to make important discoveries in most field of inquiry.

To begin with, any important discoveries depend on the long and arduous accumulation of knowledge and experience. Any discoveries cannot spring to life in a flash of inspiration. It is just as the preeminent American inventor--Thomas Edison says that genius is one percent inspiration and ninety nine percent perspiration. Thus, if there is not the abundant accumulation of knowledge, one would hardly make any important discoveries. To illustrate this point, Newton's law of gravity and Einstein's general and special theory of relativity can serve as examples.  Newton's law of gravity was associated by the phenomenon of observation “apple fall”, but actually was the result of learning, experimenting, hypothesizing, and thinking in the researching endeavor. Let us imagine that why wasn't the significant law that has been exerting great profound influence on human exploring the nature, discovered by the physics beginner? When it comes to Einstein's general and special theory of relativity, it is precisely the same. Einstein established the complicated and abstract system by employing myriads of mathematics, optics and also classical mechanics knowledge in combination with theoretical deduction. It is obvious that the beginner cannot possess these academic background and experience, which is responsible for the discoveries. /学术背景和经验

Furthermore, the expert tends to be prudent with every problems he/she encounters and consider every possibilities and flexibilities in the process of research and discoveries, which ensure the final success. Also he/she will fully consider the evil or good consequence of each his/her experiment before hand. In contrast to the expert, the beginner usually is motivated by he/she enthusiasm and inclined to draw hasty generalizations in order to pursue their quick success in both academia and career. /慎重对待每个问题，考虑各方面情况和可能的影响和结果VS

Notwithstanding the abundant experience and carefulness spirit of the expert, he/she sometimes is more conservative and stiff, which might be a great bondage to his/her research and impede his/her effectiveness and efficiency. Contrary to the expert, the beginner more often than not is adventurous and enthusiastic, and more active than his/her precursors due to his/her more curiosity about everything around him/her. And the very curiosity and enthusiasm play a crucial role in the process of any human endeavor of science and research.

In conclusion, the expert is more likely to make important discoveries, whereas, the spirits of beginner are also of considerable importance in any fields of inquiry. And any important discoveries need the instruction of the experts and the participation of the beginner.

smartyrUID: 169453

自己 up以下！！！

imjasonUID: 176604

占一个，晚上回来看

smartyrUID: 169453

自己再顶一下！
后天就考了

imjasonUID: 176604

Issue 87 Test
In this era of rapid social and technological advancement leading to great change of human society,

many complex and diverse problems are always left to the expert due to his/her tremendous of experience

and knowledge in the certain areas. Thus, I fundamentally hold that the expert is more likely to make

important discoveries in most field of inquiry.建议开头能够尽量出现题目的关键词，比如这里还

差新手。个人意见了

To begin with, any important discoveries depend on the long and arduous accumulation of knowledge and

experience. Any discoveries cannot spring to life in a flash of inspiration这个好象绝对了点

. It is just as the preeminent American inventor--Thomas Edison says that genius is one percent

inspiration and ninety nine percent perspiration. Thus, if there is not the abundant accumulation of

knowledge, one would hardly make any important discoveries. To illustrate this point, Newton's law of

gravity and Einstein's general and special theory？ies of relativity can serve as

examples. Newton's law of gravity was associated by the phenomenon of observation “apple fall”, but

actually was the result of learning, experimenting, hypothesizing, and thinking in the researching

endeavor. Let us imagine that why wasn't the significant law that has been exerting great profound

influence on human exploring the nature,这里不应该用逗号了 discovered by the

physics beginner? When it comes to Einstein's general and special theory of relativity, it is precisely

the same. Einstein established the complicated and abstract system by employing myriads of mathematics,

optics and also classical mechanics knowledge in combination with theoretical deduction. It is obvious

that the beginner cannot possess these academic background and experience, which is responsible for the

discoveries. /学术背景和经验 这段不错哈

Furthermore, the expert tends to be prudent with every problems he/she encounters and consider every

possibilities and flexibilities in the process of research and discoveries, which ensure the final

success. Also he/she will fully consider the evil or good consequence of each his/her experiment before

hand. In contrast to the expert, the beginner usually is motivated by he/she enthusiasm and inclined to

draw hasty generalizations in order to pursue their quick success in both academia and

career.这里也不见得了，并不是一定是名利的驱使了 /慎重对待每个问题，考虑各方面情况和

可能的影响和结果VS

Notwithstanding the abundant experience and carefulness spirit of the expert, he/she sometimes is more

conservative and stiff, which might be a great bondage to his/her research and impede his/her

effectiveness and efficiency. Contrary to the expert, the beginner more often than not is adventurous

and enthusiastic, and more active than his/her precursors due to his/her more curiosity about

everything around him/her. And the very curiosity and enthusiasm play a crucial role in the process of

any human endeavor of science and research.

In conclusion, the expert is more likely to make important discoveries, whereas, the spirits of

beginner are also of considerable importance in any fields of inquiry.And any important discoveries

need the instruction of the experts and the participation of the beginner.
文章的思路很清晰，再深入多扩展点就好了，还有用词和句式都有点一般了。

imjasonUID: 176604

最近法帖的格式怎么总是这样啊，大家有没遇到这个情况啊

smartyrUID: 169453

谢谢!
等我考完好好拍你！