[820互助]蝴蝶结:Fernando

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Originally posted by 蝴蝶结 at 2005-8-5 23:20
我们组好多人啦！
再次号召大家组内互助哦！
同意的响应一下啦~
蝴蝶结谢谢大家~~

那我也加入吧，最后阶段了，希望的到大家尤其是蝴蝶结姐姐的帮助。

cctv_futureUID：2103041

Originally posted by 蝴蝶结 at 2005-8-6 00:15


cctv_future（不知道叫GG还是JJ？），偶很佩服在职考GT的人的，+U+U！

是JJ，本来想保密的，后来想起来资料里都有，我也就不故做神秘了:)
我现在想在最后这段时间恶补语法，太惨了，今天做0210，又错了6道。现在只做了00到02的题，现在是做00以前的题还是看已经做过的，亦或是看本语法书呢？大家有什么建议啊

cctv_futureUID：2103041

0210语法38题，There are a series of large-scale wind patterns (all over) Earth (are called) prevailing winds that (have a direct) effect (on weather) and climate.
B错的很明显，但Earth 前是要加the吧

蝴蝶结UID：195566

Originally posted by cctv_future at 2005-8-6 16:37
0210语法38题，There are a series of large-scale wind patterns (all over) Earth (are called) prevailing winds that (have a direct) effect (on weather) and climate.
B错的很明显，但Earth 前是要加the吧

我也不是特别清楚，首先B错的最离谱，那么无论如何都要选它，Earth用的是大写，可能就不加the了吧，不知道这样解释合不合理……汗……

蝴蝶结UID：195566

大家都有这些笔记么？
发个上来吧

蝴蝶结UID：195566

还有一个阅读的怎么传不上来呢:confused:
不过精华区里有的，很有用哦~

蝴蝶结UID：195566

Originally posted by LIULI0901 at 2005-8-6 12:19
我的听力PartA很不好，我知道如何提高，我的语法每次都要错好几个，做的时候也提醒自己要细心，但是每次。。。我怀疑脑子有问题。阅读每次都要错上5－6个，久久不能提高。。
      几天做的是02年10月的题，听力 ...

汗……下次把题目一起发上来的说……害我翻了好久才找到……
21——仔细看看第一段，哪有remember past experience啊？
27——rudimentary这里有原始的，未发展的意思，和original更接近一些
50——18 century就是I R的开端啊，D的时间并不明确
贝贝要对自己有信心哦~~

FernandoUID：157455

我把0210的阅读笔记传上来

fiaoyayaUID：193089

我来了,帮我改一改作文吧~~~

蝴蝶结UID：195566

Originally posted by fiaoyaya at 2005-8-6 19:01
我来了,帮我改一改作文吧~~~

贴上来大家讨论讨论~
偶已经被AW折磨的看到作文两个字就:vomit:

蝴蝶结UID：195566

哈阅读笔记在这里~~
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

fiaoyayaUID：193089

165. you have decided to ggive several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live.what is one thing you will do to improve your community?

currently, with the development of technology and economy, the life in our community is being changed to be better. however, in the mean while, the gap between the poor and the rich is also insurmountable. while the rich in our community always dine out during the weekends, those poor children are facing the problem of dropping out of school. therefore, if possible, i would like to tutor them voluntarily.

first of all, everyone, be he rich or poor, is born equal. let us get down to the fundamentals and agree that the poor are after all, human beings---despite of theire impoverishment, they can not be deprived from the right of being educated. however, the situation is seriously. take one of my neighbors for example, because his parents are laid-off workers, who barely can meet their ends meet, let alone affording the increasing tuition fee, he has to confront the fact that he'll soon have to leave his beloved teacher and best friends in school. so his right of education is being eroded by the reality of poverty. what is worse, there are numerous children who have the same problem as my neighbor's. To secure their right, i think tutoring them may be quite helping, at least offering them an oppurtunity to learn.
secondly, because poverty is always pregnant with a high crime rate, if we don not help those children, it is not exaggerating that the crime rate of our community will skyrocket in due course and thus jepardize our daily life. imagine, if the children leave school, where their life , in some sense is constrained by the discipline of the school and they are supervised by their teachers, and enter the work world, young as they are, they are not self-desciplined enough to resist temptations such as drugs and once they get addicted to drugs, a series of other kinds of problems such as shoplifting,smuggling, will also be committed by them. to ensure the harmony of our community, i am responsible to help them out.
finally, it is also a precious opportunity for me to improve my own skill of communication. not only can I learn communicating with children by tutoring, but i can also apply this skill to getting along with other people.
by and large, to protect the right of the poor and to secure the harmony of our community, to refine my own skill, i think tutoring the poor is a good choice for it benefits the poor as well as the whole community.
这是我前天花了40分钟写的第一篇文章,昨天花了30分钟写了第二篇,有没有好的办法能在25分钟内写完.另外我的情况是5T作文5分,这次目标5.5分,恳请蝴蝶结JJ指教

FernandoUID：157455

最好再加个结尾
感觉有点像模版，可以用further,besides之类的连词

[ Last edited by Fernando on 2005-8-6 at 20:16 ]

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作文得5分是不是很难,如果简单句较多是不是没有5分了啊?

fiaoyayaUID：193089

Originally posted by Fernando at 2005-8-6 20:15
最好再加个结尾
感觉有点像模版，可以用further,besides之类的连词

我这个最后有结尾啊,帮偶改改吧?比如润色润色!偶没有用过模版啊,坚决不用!大家千万别用哦