5T互助小组 第四组 专用贴

olive8310UID: 2164907

作文写好以后放在这里还是放在作文的贴里面~?

polymathUID: 179557

任务：本打算下午写euge布置的同主题作文，后来中午接电话临时决定下午去打乒乓球，陪一个BBS上邀请的fans。他说请人帮他提高球艺，他帮鄙人提高英语和德语水平。我LP听完大笑，;P不过我到是非常开心，本来就打算今天去洗澡的，好机会啊！很久没有表现我的球技了，抓住机会好好HIGH一下哈！:D
DDMM们今后想打球的也喊我啥！篮球，乒乓球，随时:hug:

euge表生气，偶已经占座，作文晚上补上哈！今天天气不错，一来实验室就有香蕉吃，一口气吞了两，爽！:lol

祝大家下午愉快啊！:victory:

euge_013UID: 173003

原帖由 olive8310 于 2006-4-11 13:50 发表
作文写好以后放在这里还是放在作文的贴里面~?

放作文的贴里
不过我们组里贴出来也可以

olive8310UID: 2164907

作文写好了  放在作文贴里面。。 不过写得蛮少的  其实大概应该要写多少字呢？ 小迷茫ing。。。

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

原帖由 polymath 于 2006-4-11 13:35 发表

汇报：谢谢组长，今天上午搞定3套语法，一套阅读，一套听力。回来一对，那个:eek:语法还是2个，阅读4个，:L听力好残，10+:vomit:因为习惯高速做题（GRE训练的），听力好象时间间隔调快了点！ ...

既然自己都说是低级错误了，以后做题就要很仔细很仔细了哦~
T的时间很充裕的，所以还是踏踏实实做阅读吧~
如果有mp3之类的话，建议里面不要放歌了，全放上听力，嘿嘿每天听效果肯定明显~

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

原帖由 polymath 于 2006-4-11 13:54 发表
任务：本打算下午写euge布置的同主题作文，后来中午接电话临时决定下午去打乒乓球，陪一个BBS上邀请的fans。他说请人帮他提高球艺，他帮鄙人提高英语和德语水平。我LP听完大笑，;P不过我到是非 ...

偶十分羡慕你啊~:D

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

原帖由 olive8310 于 2006-4-11 15:41 发表
作文写好了  放在作文贴里面。。 不过写得蛮少的  其实大概应该要写多少字呢？ 小迷茫ing。。。

最好300-350字吧~

olive8310UID: 2164907

原帖由 蝴蝶结 于 2006-4-11 17:53 发表


最好300-350字吧~

其实道理都是那些 主要想不出什么好的EXAMPLE 蛮郁闷D``
难道说真要瞎编。。
:confused::confused:

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

原帖由 olive8310 于 2006-4-11 18:19 发表


其实道理都是那些 主要想不出什么好的EXAMPLE 蛮郁闷D``
难道说真要瞎编。。
:confused::confused:

编点自己身边发生的事情也无妨呀~
个人认为例子的广泛性也满重要的，如果总是大谈伟人呀历史事件呀大道理呀好象也不贴近现实生活，是不是？
TWE考察思维的，能把观点说清楚就可以啦~

polymathUID: 179557

原帖由 蝴蝶结 于 2006-4-11 17:52 发表


既然自己都说是低级错误了，以后做题就要很仔细很仔细了哦~
T的时间很充裕的，所以还是踏踏实实做阅读吧~
如果有mp3之类的话，建议里面不要放歌了，全放上听力，嘿嘿每天听效果肯定明显~

月黑风高，电闪雷鸣，暴雨顷刻间将直泻而下。:vomit:说时急，那时快，只见曙光沐浴更衣完毕，一个箭步登上风火轮，长途奔袭10余里；终于赶在大雨来临前来到寄托目的地，一镖打开电脑，二镖进入网页，第三镖下去，只见屏幕上清晰地弹出四个字：谢谢组长！:lol

[ 本帖最后由 polymath 于 2006-4-11 19:45 编辑 ]

polymathUID: 179557

贴作文了！:p大家帮忙修改下，写的不好，被LP批了一顿。:L请几个组长都给点意见啥！:)

polymathUID: 179557

5. A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

It is true that the plan to build a large factory near my community will bring serious of advantages to our local society, such as providing new jobs, developing the local economy and promoting immigrants, etc. Nevertheless, it is not wise to make an arbitrary decision that to build a large factory will stand to gain. The proposed factory will damage the habitat and the environment, bring noise pollution and may not be profitable by a long sight.

One of the main adverse effects of the proposed factory on the local society is the air and water pollution. A factory would provide masses of deleterious gases and untreated solid waste. When this waste dumped into rivers, the watershed can be contaminated and undrinkable. In the long term, the community would be exposed to a significant environment cost and people’s health will be also damaged.

Another negative effect by the factory is that it will bring noise pollution, therefore destroying the environment of our peaceful community. As it is known to us all, noise is a serious social effects of pollution. For instance, none of us would endure aloud noise when studying and working since noise always make us feel agonizingly and distract our attention from our thoughts or work. So having a factory is not worth that risk.

Admittedly building a new factory also has enough advantages such as providing new jobs, aiding the local economy and promoting immigrants. However, when comparing with the disadvantages, they are much less-weighted and have many hidden trouble. For example, more quarters need more workers and more houses. But as my community is a small and peaceful town, if over many immigrants flood into the local society to search for a job, our town would become a bear garden which is jam-packed and unsafe. Granted that comes true, the local residents would suffer greatly.

For all of the above reasons, building a new factory around my community is not an advisable way to improve our lives. Though it is benefit to some extent, the bad impacts are greater than the good. I strongly oppose the idea even if the company and the local government combined to make a statement that this disastrous situation will not occur by instituting correlative policies.(375)
20:50 PM 2006-4-11

组长都到哪里去了？:confused::(

[ 本帖最后由 polymath 于 2006-4-11 21:16 编辑 ]

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

原帖由 polymath 于 2006-4-11 19:40 发表

月黑风高，电闪雷鸣，暴雨顷刻间将直泻而下。:vomit:说时急，那时快，只见曙光沐浴更衣完毕，一个箭步登上风火轮，长途奔袭10余里；终于赶在大雨来临前来到寄托目 ...

:handshake;)

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

5. A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

It is true that the plan to build a large factory near my community will bring serious of :confused:  advantages to our local society, such as providing new jobs, developing the local economy and promoting immigrants, etc. Nevertheless, it is not wise to make an arbitrary decision that to build a large factory will stand to gain. The proposed factory will damage the habitat and the environment, bring noise pollution and may not be profitable by a long sight.

One of the main adverse effects of the proposed factory on the local society is the air and water pollution. A factory would provide masses of deleterious gases and untreated solid waste. When this waste dumped into rivers, the watershed 为啥用这个词？ can be contaminated and undrinkable. In the long term, the community would be exposed to a significant environment cost and people’s health will be also damaged.

Another negative effect by the factory is that it will bring noise pollution, therefore destroying the environment of our peaceful community. As it is known to us all, noise is a serious social effects of pollution. For instance, none of us would endure aloud noise when studying and working since noise always make us feel agonizingly and distract our attention from our thoughts or work. So having a factory is not worth that risk.

Admittedly building a new factory also has enough advantages such as providing new jobs, aiding the local economy and promoting immigrants. However, when comparing with the disadvantages, they are much less-weighted and have many hidden trouble. For example, more quarters need more workers and more houses. But as my community is a small and peaceful town, if over many immigrants flood into the local society to search for a job, our town would become a bear garden which is jam-packed and unsafe. Granted that comes true, the local residents would suffer greatly.

For all of the above reasons, building a new factory around my community is not an advisable way to improve our lives. Though it is benefit to some extent, the bad impacts are greater than the good. I strongly oppose the idea even if the company and the local government combined to make a statement that this disastrous situation will not occur by instituting correlative policies.(375)

有很好的AW功底了，写TWE不成问题的~
我认为文章内容可以再具体一点，比如建工厂对老人、孩子有什么影响呢，如果有一段这么写，可能会显得生动一些吧~
个人意见，仅供参考~

[ 本帖最后由 蝴蝶结 于 2006-4-11 21:35 编辑 ]

shashafeng33UID: 174358

向组长申请:我的TWE同主题作业可否暂缓交啊?GT同考,任务重,我想到本月下旬开始写作文行吗?