寄托家园8T互助小组第二组

husterUID: 2110691

欢迎，批准加入，多练练笔，

gaaraUID: 200175

呵呵,那就不客气先来一篇了.由于我是考IBT的,所以作文不是185,但个人觉得没啥区别.
Should people emphasis on their appearance and fashion?

It has been said that today more and more people pay attention to their appearance and fashion. Different people hold different views on this issue because of their distinct backgrounds. For instance, some people think that an impressive appearance makes them more confident, while others consider that it is useless unless they want to waste of their time and money. In my opinion, I believe that it undoubtedly depends on which stage are you in.

In the school, it is commonly found out that most of students are wearing uniforms, short hair and no ornaments. School is where people go to get an education. All students have to do is concentrating on their studies. In addition, catching up the latest new fashion also spends a lot of money, which will cause a disadvantaging effect on their developments. Consequently, it is not necessary that people in learning pay too much attention on their appearance and fashion.

As an adult, the situation would be much more different. A good look is very important to adults because it impressed others whether in social life or working. It reflects on the truth that people are more preferable to communicate with who has an impressive appearance and fashion. Moreover, research studies show us that appearance may reflect someone’s personality. Therefore, people who are working in the company should emphasis on their appearance and fashion.

In my case, as an university student, even though a good look is also very significant for me, I think it is not reasonable to pay much attention on it because of studying.

Although some people claim that people should emphasis on their appearance and fashion, I believe that it should be dependent on which stage are you in.

[ 本帖最后由 gaara 于 2006-7-20 09:19 编辑 ]

lihuaminUID: 2189326

旧TWE时不考已经考过的题吗？或不用复习已经考过的？请问哪里有06年9T的作文预测？

lihuaminUID: 2189326

旧TWE时不考已经考过的题吗？或不用复习已经考过的？请问哪里有06年9T的作文预测？

husterUID: 2110691

考过的还有可能考，托福不搞压题这套

husterUID: 2110691

身体要紧,加油咯,希望你早日康复

fanruitongUID: 2201228

there goes my social life &  i was up before 8　　this morning 分别杀意思啊？咱们组人气低了些，没关系，大家可能都在古墓里闭关修炼玉女心经呢吧？呵呵，大家加油，神雕侠们

husterUID: 2110691

there goes my social life 这就是我的社会生活 。
i was up before 8　　this morning 今天早上我8点之前就起床了。
下次你问听力尽量给出上下文

Lyon_TonyUID: 178961

原帖由 fanruitong 于 2006-7-20 21:41 发表
there goes my social life &  i was up before 8 this morning 分别杀意思啊？咱们组人气低了些，没关系，大家可能都在古墓里闭关修炼玉女心经呢吧？呵呵，大家加油，神雕侠们

第二句字面意思是 早上8点之前我就起来了。

以后提问时，要把整短对话发上来，不然没有语境不大好理解。

gaaraUID: 200175

练了几篇作文...发现自己问题是在于句子不够高级,而结构,语法idea都是不错的,大家有什么意见?

husterUID: 2110691

idea是次要的
TWE重在结构和句法
加油:)

莫名NUID: 146481

原帖由 gaara 于 2006-7-21 11:26 发表
练了几篇作文...发现自己问题是在于句子不够高级,而结构,语法idea都是不错的,大家有什么意见?

你所说的句子不够高级是什么概念？是指复杂程度不够？还是句式变化不够？

如果是复杂程度不够的话，我觉得你可以去看看范文，他们文章里的句子也并非一句三行.另外并不是一味地长句就是好的,更重要的是长短间隔,那样读起来才有节奏感.

如果是说句式变化不够的话,我建议你可以去看看模板或者是别人习作里的比较好的句型,抄下来,背下来,但是最重要的是反复用.考试的时候,人是处在一种紧张状态,可以说,一般人能发挥出平时写作水平的70%就不错了,有很多句子,词语是想不到会用的,下笔的都是一些潜意识里的句子,所以你要多用那些词语,句子,让它们变成一种习惯.

[ 本帖最后由 kanganqi 于 2006-7-24 17:58 编辑 ]

芜桴子钰UID: 2221887

《越狱》好看吗
昨天看了一整天电影
我决定每天都模考一次
别等到了考场试都考不下来
suck……

husterUID: 2110691

恩
记住留几套
我们 可能 会组织摸考的

rosalind1984UID: 2128106

组织模考是大家一起做题吗