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178. The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer

这个就是所谓的BT列举题,很不好写
所以希望大家一起多练练
同样的题目还有
159 ,179 ,176 ,161 这几道题目希望大家写写提纲
我会开一个提纲讨论贴,让大家抒发自己的意见
人多力量大


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180. Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
参考分析:
人们喜欢电影是因为:
·        电影能够满足人们的幻想
·        电影能使满足人们的好奇(了解其他国家的很多事情[183])
·        电影是最经济的娱乐手段(金钱上、精力上[127])

相对比较好写,换一下还可以写音乐
所以希望大家把这个文章写出来
180相关的还有183,也请大家写提纲


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两个都写!

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发表于 2006-8-13 18:28:05 |只看该作者
第一篇完稿:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
请尽量拍砖,当然老弟也会帮你改的

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发表于 2006-8-13 18:43:53 |只看该作者
最后一次,不拉下

180我已写过了

updated: 178
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D280

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发表于 2006-8-13 21:55:40 |只看该作者

烂文共批 -恶心的topic 178

The wheel of history never stops no matter whether you have noticed it or not. Everything is changing with the time. When asked what changes the new century will bring to us, people have different answers and explanations. As far as I am concerned, these changes can be summarized from various aspects. I would like to explain some representatives of them to show my opinion about this question. I will analyze from physical, mental, environmental aspects.

To begin with, the new century will bring changes to us physically. As we know, with the development of the science and technology, people’s living condition is being improved. They earn more than before from their employment. With the money, they will be able to afford more healthy vegetables and fresh meat for the meals, they can buy air-conditionings to deal with hot summers and cold winters, and what is more, they can employ time-workers to address their housework and enjoy the free time.

Secondly, when it comes to the mental aspect, the new century can bring us both positive and negative changes. On one hand, more and more public places such as cinemas, parks, and entertainment centers will be constructed everywhere. People can enjoy the exciting films they want in the cinemas, can view the beautiful landscape of the parks after the heavy workload, and can adjust the tedious life-pace by singing or dancing in the entertainment centers. On the other hand, the busier schedule and heavier workload can cause a lot of mental problems to people. There is a survey showing that the number of people who suffer mental illness just from the unbelievable schedule. What a danger if the new century will continue to enlarge this figure.

Last but not least, the new century will bring changes to the environment of the earth. The artificial landscapes will beatify the surrounding of our houses, the highways will facilitate the transportation, and the techniques will be further advanced to predict or avoid the nature disasters such as earthquake, hurricane, and tsunami. Nevertheless, the new century will also bring us a more polluted world. Air pollution, wastage, and noise really do harm to our health. They are becoming more and more severe if left unaddressed.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, we can see that the new century will bring us a lot of changes from different aspects. While some of these changes are beneficial to us, others really do great harm. What we should do is to make full use these advantageous changes, and utilize our utmost to decrease the adverse impacts of the disadvantageous changes.
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发表于 2006-8-13 22:30:24 |只看该作者
改了netmaster的,在https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768953643
我的在
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
期待互拍。

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发表于 2006-8-13 22:31:40 |只看该作者
我的作文,topic178,认真写的,等待拍砖。
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
期待互拍。
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