Issue185 【米国有米小组】寒假第5天1-31作业

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Issue185."Scandals—whether inpolitics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention onproblems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could." 185． 丑闻，不管是政治、学术还是其他领域，可能是有用的。它们能吸引人们的注意力，而这点，是任何发言人和改革家都办不到的
        

Issue185提纲：观点：丑闻确实可以以一种改革者和演讲者作不到的方式聚焦问题，丑闻也有误导性，我们还必须警惕和思考丑闻的真实性而不是盲从。
论证段：
1/的确，丑闻使我们从另一种方式关注问题，从而了解一些不为人知的真相，因为改革者和演讲者需要对他们的言行负责而暴光丑闻的媒体并不需要，例子Bill Clinton and Monica Lewinsky, Michael Jordan 的赌博嗜好及婚外情。韩国的黄禺锡试验成果造假。
2/但是呢丑闻有时候却迷惑了我们，并且误导我们过渡关注事件主角的过失而不是功劳。比如Hillary Rodham Clinton, 自从宣布竞选总统出现了负面新闻。2004年大选的时候，美国的两党也相互制造丑闻为了赢得选票。
3/我们应该用正确的眼光看待丑闻，对于丑闻我们应该理智的分析而不是走向极端。比如，一些地方上的政府官员的贪污时间暴光导致一些民众走上了过于极端的方式来解决问题。
   

Nowadays, with the development ofinformation-high-way and the swift speed of transportation, it becomes moreeasy for media to spread the news. The newspaper and the radio is not the onlyway for people to get information from every corner of the world. TV andinternet steped into our eye-sight several decades ago and have already becomea popular and convenient way for people to understand the world. Scandals,always exposed by media, have some kinds of influences which can affect thejudgment of civilian. In my view, it’s true that scandals can attract people’sattentions in a unexpected way that speakers and reformers cannot do becausethey have to take the responsibilities about what they said. However, thescandals also have its negative face that it may lead people go to extreme.Both the positive and negative faces of scandals should be seen by us.
   

In the first place, what we cannot ignoreis the effect of the media, which exist everywhere, with its function ofspreading a large scale range, so is the scandals which disperse through media.By the means of a special method, scandals, sometimes, attract more eyes of theworld than any other ways, such as speech, demonstrating and collection andhelp people through its positive effects. For instance, the sexual scandal ofthe former president of US, between Bill Clinton and Monica Lewinsky, caused ahuge influence in the American society and had a immense effect on thepolitical life of Bill Clinton which narrowly end his vocation of president. It’sso obvious for us to see the special and big ability of scandals. Another exampleis about the famous household Basketball Star---Michael Jordan. During a periodof Jordan’slife, media exposed the hobby in gamble of him for not only one time anduncovered the extramarital love affair which he concealed for long to his wife.From such two example, we realize that scandals surely have a great effect andsomehow can help people to examine their behaviors in private lives.
   

Nevertheless, negative effects exist in theinfluence of scandals as well. Sometimes, the vast influence of scandals maypuzzle us and mislead us excessively intensify the fault but forget thecontributions of the person concerned. Let me cite the recent news about theformer president’s wife---Hillary Rodham Clinton. Since Hillary have claimedthat she will certainly take part in the next election of president of US in2008, something negative become to appear during this time. New York Times reportedthat the first lover of Hillary published a article telling that Hillary got adrug addiction when she studied in Yale as a student of law. It’s similar inthe election of president in 2004, when the situation of election becameexcited, both the Republic Party and the Democratic Party came to createscandals to attack each other in order to win more voting paper. However,whether the scandals made by them were true or untrue is unknown. Therefore, whenyou look at the positive face of the scandals, have you ever thought about thedegree of reality and the negative aspect of scandals?
            

Finally, through a exact and cogent eyes tolook at the scandals is also indispensable for us. As it has two sides ofinfluence, we should think carefully and thoughtfully before we give out ourattitudes, when we are affected by scandals. Otherwise, it’s effect and ourwrong attitudes based on the fault understanding of scandals may lead us toextreme conditions. For example, there are some endemic officials lived bygovernment, sometimes receive bribery which are deprived from regional people. Then,this cause some excessive people do something illegal to stop the bribery. Fromsuch a example, we understand the importance of analyzing scandals. Thereby,considering the scandals comprehensively, reasoning it well, behaving yourselfcourteously are crucial for every of us so as to keep a stable balance andharmony in our society.
      

In summary, as I said above, to build akind and well-appropriate society, we cannot lose sight of the two sides ofscandals, and see its influence through a pair of insightful eyes. In this way,a harmonious society can be established.
              


[ 本帖最后由 iq28 于 2007-6-26 04:13 编辑 ]

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Issue185."Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could." 185． 丑闻，不管是政治、学术还是其他领域，可能是有用的。它们能吸引人们的注意力，而这点，是任何发言人和改革家都办不到的
        

Issue185提纲：观点：丑闻确实可以以一种改革者和演讲者作不到的方式聚焦问题，丑闻也有误导性，我们还必须警惕和思考丑闻的真实性而不是盲从。
论证段：
1/的确，丑闻使我们从另一种方式关注问题，从而了解一些不为人知的真相，因为改革者和演讲者需要对他们的言行负责而暴光丑闻的媒体并不需要，例子Bill Clinton and Monica Lewinsky, Michael Jordan 的赌博嗜好及婚外情。韩国的黄禺锡试验成果造假。
2/但是呢丑闻有时候却迷惑了我们，并且误导我们过渡关注事件主角的过失而不是功劳。比如Hillary Rodham Clinton, 自从宣布竞选总统出现了负面新闻。2004年大选的时候，美国的两党也相互制造丑闻为了赢得选票。
3/我们应该用正确的眼光看待丑闻，对于丑闻我们应该理智的分析而不是走向极端。比如，一些地方上的政府官员的贪污时间暴光导致一些民众走上了过于极端的方式来解决问题。
   

Nowadays, with the development of information-high-way and the swift speed of transportation, it becomes more easy (easier) for media to spread the news. The newspaper and the radio is not the only way for people to get information from every corner of the world. TV and internet steped (stepped) into our eye-sight (感觉用sight 就可可以了) several decades ago and have already become a popular and convenient way for people to understand the world. Scandals, always exposed by media, have some kinds of influences which can affect the judgment of civilian. In my view, it’s true that scandals can attract people’s attentions in a (an) unexpected way that speakers and reformers cannot do because they have to take the responsibilities about what they said. However, the scandals also have its negative face that it may lead people go to extreme. Both the positive and negative faces of scandals should be seen by us. 感觉开头写的太长了，尤其前半段对于论证没有帮助，和文章主题关系也不是很大。美国人写文章大多都是平铺直叙，开门见山，而不需要过多铺垫，你的字数已经很多了，可以考虑减少前半段。
   

In the first place, what we cannot ignore is the effect of the media, which exist everywhere, with its function of spreading a large scale range, so is the scandals which disperse through media. By the means of a special method, scandals, sometimes, attract more eyes of the world than any other ways, such as speech, demonstrating and collection and help people through its positive effects. For instance, the sexual scandal of the former president of US, between Bill Clinton and Monica Lewinsky, caused a huge influence in the American society and had a (an) immense effect on the political life of Bill Clinton which narrowly (narrowly 有勉强之意，这里可以使用nearly) end his vocation of president. It’s so obvious for us to see the special and big ability of scandals. Another example is about the famous household Basketball Star---Michael Jordan. During a period of Jordan’s life, media exposed the hobby in gamble of him for not only one time and uncovered the extramarital love affair which he concealed for long to his wife. From such two example (examples) , we realize that scandals surely have a great effect and somehow can help people to examine their behaviors in private lives.
   

Nevertheless, negative effects exist in the influence of scandals as well. Sometimes, the vast influence of scandals may puzzle us and mislead us excessively intensify the fault but forget the contributions of the person concerned. Let me cite the recent news about the former president’s wife---Hillary Rodham Clinton. Since Hillary have claimed that she will certainly take part in the next election of president of US in2008, something negative become to appear during this time. New York Times reported that the first lover of Hillary published a (an) article telling that Hillary got a drug addiction when she studied in Yale as a student of law. It’s similar in the election of president in 2004, when the situation of election became excited, both the Republic Party and the Democratic Party came to create scandals to attack each other in order to win more voting paper. 只是列举了例子但是并没有指明丑闻到底有什么负面影响，对于例子的说明不够。应指明有些人专门利用丑闻能吸引人们注意这一点来制造丑闻 However, whether the scandals made by them were true or untrue is unknown. Therefore, when you look at the positive face of the scandals, have you ever thought about the degree of reality and the negative aspect of scandals?
            

Finally, through a (an) exact and cogent eyes to look at the scandals is also indispensable for us. As it has two sides of influence, we should think carefully and thoughtfully before we give out our attitudes, when we are affected by scandals. Otherwise, it’s effect and our wrong attitudes based on the fault understanding of scandals may lead us to extreme conditions. 这句读不通。 For example, there are some endemic officials lived by government, sometimes receive bribery which are deprived from regional people. Then, this cause (causes) some excessive people do something illegal to stop the bribery. From such a example, we understand the importance of analyzing scandals. Thereby, considering the scandals comprehensively, reasoning it well, behaving yourself courteously are crucial for every of us so as to keep a stable balance and harmony in our society.
      

In summary, as I said above, to build a kind and well-appropriate society, we cannot lose sight of the two sides of scandals, and see its influence through a pair of insightful eyes. In this way, a harmonious society can be established.

语言很流畅，但是单复数形式还有一些小的地方需要注意

[ 本帖最后由 holding 于 2007-2-1 11:24 编辑 ]