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The stability of a society depends on how it responds to the extremes of human behavior.
life is just like a game. The problem is that it's not how you play the game, it's how the game plays you.
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发表于 2002-12-19 01:52:46 |只看该作者
can not agree.

1. it is necessary for the government to repond in time to the extremes of human behevior so as to avoid catastrophes but this is not the main role of the govenment.

2. No matter how outrageous some people may be, their extreme behaviors are rare. It is not wise to put too much concern on these behaviors. In addition, it is difficult to define the frontier of "extreme behavior"

3. What the government should do to mentain the stability is to decrease day-to-day friction.
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我说人生哪,如果赏过一回痛哭淋漓的风景,写一篇杜鹃啼血的文章,与一个赏心悦目的人错肩,也就够了。不要收藏美、钤印美,让美随风而逝。生命最清醉的时候,是将万里长江视为一匹白绢,裂帛。(简桢)

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发表于 2002-12-19 22:13:03 |只看该作者
disagree

1. admittedly, in order to keep stability, a soicety should know how to responds to the extremes of human behavoir.

2. however, the stability of a society depends on more basic factors than merely the way to respond to the extremes of human behavior, say, education, welfare pragram etc.

3. in addition, we should notice that it is more significant for a soicety to prevent the extremes of human behavoir in advance than to respond to them afterwards
life is just like a game. The problem is that it's not how you play the game, it's how the game plays you.

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发表于 2002-12-20 05:11:50 |只看该作者
AGAINST:

1. if a society could provide a relatively free atmosphere to its citizens reflets the maturality of its government. but we could not say that the stability of a society is based on the response of its government to such behaviors. it depends on  many aspects, such as education, social issue,social welfare, etc.

2. the main concern of a government should be the welfare of its citizens, not how to response to those rare behaviors.

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斑竹的新造型。。。

COOL!哈哈,我喜欢
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发表于 2003-8-18 13:21:11 |只看该作者

大家帮忙看看跑题嘛? 社会类

大家帮忙看看这篇提纲跑题嘛?
然后我再贴上来文章。谢谢了~~~

05. The stability of a society depends on how it responds to the extremes of human behavior.[/size=5]

同意:这种反应对于一个社会得稳定来说确实很重要,但是一个社会得稳定与否还涉及到其他得很多方面,世界上其他国家得侵犯(政治上得),经济得发展如果通货膨胀(经济上得),怎么也不会安定得。但是把一个社会孤立起来讲,对过激行为得反应在维护(protect)社会得安定方面是很重要得(crucial)。

1)定义 the extremely behavior of human: 对待事物采取过激得态度和解决得方法(resolve),或者采取残忍得(insane)非道德得行径(immoral) 会给社会造成不良(ill)得影响,以至破坏(wreck)社会得稳定。有些人采用(resort to)极端得手段,希望以此为代价或者要挟(intimidation),达到期望得目的。而这种行为不仅伤害了别人,也伤害了自己。例如,自杀性爆炸,自焚。如果这样的行为没有得到应有得结果,则别人一定就会效仿(imitate),这样对我们稳定社会得法律都是一种威胁。

2)同时,有些the extremes of human behavior 可以说明很多得问题(当然要排除一些心里上有问题得)。首先要分析产生这种行为得原因。也许是人们对当前某些制度不满意,而又找不到正当得法律途径来解决,比如一个农民冤案因为官僚主义得腐败而得不到翻案,以至于对社会失去了信心,用农药毒死全家然后自己自杀)
The responds of society is tantamount to the responds from the public.  

3)In conclusion,个别的极端行为通常并不可怕(terrible),但是一旦社会中的绝大多数人都赞赏并且采取这样的行为,这样的社会将是动荡不安的 。只有人们对其采取坚决地(unshaken)抵制态度,并在政府的保证和支持下,社会才会安定,人们才能安居乐业。
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发表于 2003-8-18 13:34:20 |只看该作者
感觉你的态度不是太明确。

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发表于 2003-8-18 13:49:31 |只看该作者
没跑题,好象一直在谈the extremes of human behavior.,,应该可以的!比我的有深度!不错!
昨天刚写过,也铁了!but no respond!
当时的position: partially agree
我把extreme behavor 和radical words ,分开了,社会的stability 需要对两者都要作出respond!
自己心理也没底,这样分你感觉可以吗?好象behave include words?或者安全期间,like you  , 来个definition of behavior.

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发表于 2003-8-18 14:18:53 |只看该作者
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[B]感觉你的态度不是太明确。 [/B]



不明确?是不是如果作为同意得立场,说服力度不够?
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发表于 2003-8-18 14:20:44 |只看该作者
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[B]没跑题,好象一直在谈the extremes of human behavior.,,应该可以的!比我的有深度!不错!
昨天刚写过,也铁了!but no respond!
当时的position: partially agree
我?.

以下省略...... [/B]



我不太明白你得提纲
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发表于 2003-8-18 14:31:56 |只看该作者

这是我的文章

As is well known to all , an eloquent person is to be more easily preeminent among the masses and become the focus of the crowd, in fact , which is contributed to the charm of words and phrases. Perceivablely,how greatly a person's words have an impact on the practices or ways of thinking, if so, there is no reasons for us to show blindness to the role that the words play in maitaining the stability of a society.
In reality, it is indeedly some of extremes of human behavior that affect the stability of our society negatively. If the pertinent section in our country acts in no respond to them, obviously , these behaviors will put our society into trouble. Just as in this summer when the SARS was pandemic in China , some quacks seized chance to blackmail some innocent people , and even counterfeit ed some medicines which had no guarantees for the patients at all. Consequently , in some area, the conducts of this kind stir up some trouble in stable and normal life and working of endemic people. Fortunately, the local government took some measures to prevent these bad behavior from spreading and occuring again as soon as possible, or else , no one can imagine what the result would be like. From the case in poin above , it has been enough for us to be aware of severity and perilousness of the extremes of human behavior , so that our society is supposed to repond to them .
However, much attention paid to the behavioral extremes does not mean that the dangerousness of radical words are too inconsiderable for our society to take some actions correspondingly. In 1989,so many intellectuals in China ,whether some college students or some teachers , all refused to have their lessons and went to Beijing for demonstration.As a result , not only did education system
confront the unprecedented challenge from these intellectuals , but the government also experienced the masses' discredit and discontent. What on earth should be responsible for the upheaval? One of the most important reasons was that the goverment did not do anything corresponding to stop some radical word s from being desseminated. Maybe this is also one of the reasons why censorship is established in the field of news media such as radios, television, and publishing and internet. Although it actually lessen the transparency of some parts of our society, censorship really plays a great role in stablizing our society.
Now, one can see that both radical words and extreme behavior might threaten the stability of our society severely. But once the two weapons are combined together by some rebellious gangs in an attempt to attack the stable society , the consequence is self-evident!
Thereby, the stability of a society depends on how it respond to the extremes of human behavior as well as on how it to the radical words, ignorant of one of which will bring a unstable society.

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发表于 2003-8-18 14:38:55 |只看该作者
但是一个社会得稳定与否还涉及到其他得很多方面,世界上其他国家得侵犯(政治上得),经济得发展如果通货膨胀(经济上得),怎么也不会安定得。


没有必要说!当然这样说也不是不可以,但是你的提纲和这些就没有关系了。

提纲1、2可以放在一段中写!
还是focus题眼society 是如何 responds?而你这已部分在3中写,好像是结论!
社会如何应处理极端行为呢?
对于肆意破坏如何处理,对于反映一定社会问题的如何处理,要把握好尺度。
呵呵,个人观点。

泥巴,你的头像真exin,also 个人观点
Never,never,never,never give up !!

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发表于 2003-8-18 21:54:19 |只看该作者
妮吧,今天在单位好好看了一下你的作文,还是昨晚的感觉,你没说到问题的关键地方。我的理解是先有极端行为,后有反应。通过反应来断定是否保持社会稳定,而你的分析却是极端行为的起因,种类,我觉得就是和题目不符,此外,极端行为在不同社会有不同的定义,武力解决问题也算一种极端吧,另外,越是先进的行为在落后的社会看来越是极端,有些极端行为恰恰是推动更先进社会的发展,有些是挡也挡不住的。你再想想,回头讨论。btw,我的msn又出问题了,你的作文改完了,看看明天传给你~~

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发表于 2003-8-18 22:18:31 |只看该作者
我认为这个Issue题主要阐述的是社会稳定和她对极端行为的反应方式之间的关系。
部分同意
以下是我的提纲:
(1)对一些极端行为,社会必须要及时采取一些措施,作出合适的反应,才能确保社会稳定,否则社会将处于动乱的状态
(2)社会的稳定并不只由社会对极端行为的反应所决定,还需要采取其他一些方法确保社会的发展。

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