生如夏花小组-第三次作业

sunflowerchenziUID: 2328335

作文:

What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

Hardly can we deny a company would lose its competitive ability if it has an unsuccessful supervisor. A company will be developed in every aspect because of an excellent leader. From my point of view, a perfect boss should possess affluent experience of administration, respect the subordinates and get a full understanding of the business of the company.

Management is one of the most essential parts of the leader’s job. A boss who has lots of experience of it may be able to harmonize every department of the organization so that they will fulfill their useful functions. What is more, that kind of leader tends to put business being in perfect order in his/her mind in order to handle them more efficiently.

What is also a key to be a successful leader is to respect his/her subordinates instead of shouting to them. I used to have an internship in ORACLE Company in Shanghai. The supervisor is Mr. Wang who is strict to the stuff, but never abuses them. For example, He once pointed out a mistake I made with rational and clear words. As a reward, he wins the respect of the stuff.

Last but not least, the leader should be familiar with the business. If the boss is not acquainted with the commercial activities of the company, how can he/she assure the stuff that the company will make profit? If he/she can’t make sure of it, the stuff may lose their confidence in him/her and the company. If this situation happens, the stability development of the company will be broken.

In a word, full management experience, showing respect to subordinates and being acquainted with the business are the important qualities of a good supervisor. Without one of them, the company would face to the problems which would spend large manpower and time to solve it.

口语:
do you prefer to live with roommates or you prefer to live by youself

For this question, I would rather prefer living with roommates to living alone based on the following explanations. For one thing, we can help each other when meeting some difficulties. For example, if my roommate has a problem with her english, i would like to give a hand to her.For another thing, we can accompany with each other.We would not feel lonely by sharing our happiness and sadness.Therefore, living with roommates will be my choice.

china122UID: 2315735

Depending on personal experiences , whether a supervisor is qulified or not lies in whether he or she has some important qualities . Management , decision-making and durability are the most significant factor the boss should have.

A good boss should be good at management . There are usually a lot of people under the charge of single supervior , therefore ,the boss should be capable of having the ability of management in order to make the company run smoothly .This requires a good master of management . A well know example that is very persuasive that Bill Gates who is the most prominant manager in  the world , he usually focus on the issue how to make his company well organise and operate systematically espaciously how to manage the whole company without any tiny mistake.

Also , a perfect manager should be good at decision-making, a quick and accurat decision will contribute to the company achieve the final success ,whereas , a poor and delayed decision will eventually destroyed the whole company . Of course, this requires enormous working experiences .

The most successful people in the world have one thing in common that they often do the things which they may virtually do not enjoy doing .This is  the quality of durability .They often undertake the extreme working stress and how to relieve this stress become the key fact . Here I would say , durability is indispensable for individual success .

In conclusion , as a prove says , everything has two sides .I must admit that there are a lot of important aspects the good supervior might have , but these three characteristics are the most significant facts in my mind . Its added convenience and satisfaction offered by these characters can not be ignored .Such experiences of learning the qualities the celebrity have will definitelly be helpful in one's later life.

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生如夏花小组-第三次作业


作文:

What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

Hardly can we deny a company would lose its competitive ability if it had an unsuccessful supervisor. A company will be developed in every aspect greatly [这样是不是更客观？欢迎讨论]because of an excellent leader. From my point of view, a perfect boss should possess affluent experience of administration, respect the subordinates and get a full understanding of the business of the company.

Management is one of the most essential parts of the leader’s job. A boss who has lots of experience [of it] may be able to harmonize every department of the organization so that they will fulfill their useful functions. What is more, this kind of leader tends to put business [being] in perfect order in his/her mind in order to handle them more efficiently.[这段感觉怪怪的，首句是说management的，但是第二句没强调management有多重要啊？第三句也是，我觉得应该是原因吧，为什么m重要，你的这个第三句是结果吧；欢迎讨论。。]

What is also a key to be a successful leader is to respect his/her subordinates instead of shouting at them. I used to have an internship in ORACLE Company in Shanghai. The supervisor is Mr. Wang who is strict to the stuff, but never abuses them. For example, he once pointed out a mistake I made with rational and clear words. As a reward, he wins the respect of the stuff. [这段用事实举例，不错]

Last but not least, the leader should be familiar with the business. If the boss is not acquainted with the commercial activities of the company, how can he/she assure the stuff that the company will make profit? If he/she can’t make sure of it, the stuff may lose their confidence in him/her and the company. If this situation happens, the stability development of the company will be broken.

In a word, full management experience, showing respect to subordinates and being acquainted with the business are the important qualities of a good supervisor. Without one of them, the company would face to the problems which would spend large manpower and time to solve it.


总的说来，我觉得你的这篇作文写得不错。三个body的后2个的detail都很好；
长短句结合，这是我要学习的地方，总感觉自己的短句子挺多的。




口语:
do you prefer to live with roommates or you prefer to live by youself

For this question, I would rather prefer living with roommates to living alone based on the following explanations. For one thing, we can help each other when meeting some difficulties. For example, if my roommate has a problem with her english, i would like to give a hand to her.For another thing, we can accompany with each other.We would not feel lonely by sharing our happiness and sadness.Therefore, living with roommates will be my choice.
嗯，不错。理由很鲜明。:)

sunflowerchenziUID: 2328335

可能是我指代用得不清楚吧，所以会让人感觉偏了题

Management is one of the most essential parts of the leader’s job. A boss who has lots of experience [of it](这里的it我是用来指代managerment的) may be able to harmonize every department of the organization so that they will fulfill their useful functions. What is more, this kind of leader （是指代一些管理经验丰富的领导）tends to put business [being] in perfect order in his/her mind in order to handle them more efficiently.