小妹写了11.8comeon小组作文 跪求狠批

dreamslinkUID: 2567006

11月23号就考了 作文就这水平了 大家帮我看看能得几分吧 感激涕零
We could get knowedge in our ages.Grenerally speaking,time that spent in the high school and college should be the most important stage in you learning lives since they privide us the most significant subjects to us which could be devide into two groups-the general subjets and the curriculum for our future job.The issue that high schools,colleges and universities  wether should spend less time teaching about general subjects and spend more time teaching about preparing for future career and jobs is a meaningful but contetious one not only because the respective background but also the alien understanding.  However,I think when we  experience different period,what we obtain should be distinctive. The reasons about my statement are explained as follows.
On one hand, we come into  high school with unsufficient knowledge even though we have little of them in the junior school or the primary school. Our mind should be deepen and our eyes should be widen.Therefore,we need the basic foundation for our knowledge building .Take a concrete example,if one is insterested in the astronmy,he must learn something about  the Earth and the venus ,the Mars the Jupitur and so on which would be taught in the physic class.So the cirriculum should be the basis of  developing your insterest and also be the prerequirisite for your futher study in college.
On the other hand,after obtaining enough general ideas about our world,it’s time to choose what we really want to do in the rest of our lives which is so called the major.When we make our first step into college ,we have already equiped with the sufficient ideas except the proffesional knowledge in the field which we have decide as a creer.Therefore,what the college should do is to give us a futher education in our major instead teaching us the general subjects.
In a nutshell,I think it is sagacious that the high school should pay more attetion to the general curriculum while the college should spend more time to teaching us the professional knowledge.

[ 本帖最后由 dreamslink 于 2008-11-8 09:28 编辑 ]

dreamslinkUID: 2567006

感谢各位大虾来批~~

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

今天作文很头疼，先来学习学习！

首先感觉……第一段太长了……