我先晕一下，字数好多~
At the mercy of ever-accerlated updating of science and technoledge,a strive for the territory of the globe should used by human beings life or endanger animals habit become a hot issue soaring by the day.When facing with this delima,peoples idea are not cut from the same cloth.Most of experts from institutes argue that without protect territory of endanger animal would break the balance of ecosystem 语法貌似有问题,they base their arugement on the ground that species of animals exert an obvious decline with lost their habits due to human beings devlopment,establish factory,explore mines and petroleum .Yet other people from society react to the problem and holds that human beings need more domain to explore science and create immeasurable achievement for globe history.After take every facet into deliberation,definitely speaking,i choose to stand by the point that provide terrian to human beings produce huge advantages far more than disadvantages.In the following,I will try to clinch my position clear.
太强大了，楼主肯定是考过G的，其实T没必要这么复杂……
感觉这段可以写在最后 To begin with,one point should mention is that although some research indicate the association with endanger animal niche is reduced by human beings sprawl in the last century.I firmly claim that with the terrian being used for science and tecnoledge discovery,humanbeings may purnish better ecosystem to the endanger animals.For instance,goverment establish ecological protection area and national park to improve the cruel and foul enviroment for the endanger animal.Thus,the disadvantage of afford terrian to mankinds is minor to endanger animals as intense respect from goverment and society even whole humanbeings.
Admittedly,another consideration should be insist , no one can deny that the engry in terrian play a crucial part role in the develpment of humanbeings no matter history,current or even futrue.For example,after find the efficiency of engry-electric,petroleum,coal,mathane,etc,our live caliber giant leap than aborignal. With electricity,electric light supply your home even the whole city bright all the day,air condition furnish a warm area in your house when you feel chilly in the winter.With gasoline,taffic machine engender the convinent of motivation and saving perosnal time forthright.With coal gas,you may cooking palatable cuisine in the hourse everytime when you are hungry. So can you image one day that all these device stop function due to the lack of engry? With out these faclity,I firmly deem that no one would enjoy the life like an aboringnal!Thus,humanbeings survive need engry,share the tract with endanger animal may hinder the expolre of engry and endanger our mankinds immediately. 这一段的engry-electric,petroleum,coal,mathane和land有什么联系？感觉最好说明一下。
Anybesides,one of the disadvantages is that when people bands over backward to supply the terrian to endanger animals may take other disadvantage-inflation prize.Its widely acknowledge that people reclaim filed to sow the seeds and harvest fruits,vegetable or grain in the next year,ranch the plantation to gain milk and egg,meat and wool.Then,the population of the world evaluate and the demand of civilan grown.Therefore,if we slow the efficiency of assart filed,the inflation of price may occure with unflourished harvest and rare efficiency for ranch setting up.
Although i agree that there may be some minor disadvantages to lend territory for human beings but not endanger animals ,the advantage is more obvious.With mankinds advanced in every aspects,endanger animals may receive more solicitudes and survive in greater atomsphere - ecological protection area and national park.But shackle the asstart for terrian may hinder humanbings own survive in the world,such as poor harvest and skimpy cover of ranch setting up. 人类需要 > 动物需要，很难写！ 楼主词汇很好很强大，不过有点拼写错误，呵呵 结构方面个人觉得还可以调整下 | 
发表于 2008-11-14 18:51:52
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