common小组作文,9月6日,layfolk

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9月7日

agree or disagree ：advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy

    I don't agree with the idea that advertisements is a waste of a company's money.

    Firstly,although consumers have known what they want to buy,their choices are very

crucial in several aspects.One of the key aspect, I consider, is the choices of consumers are beneficial to enhance their life quality,as consumers' choices are a great director to the company's products supplying as well as the product sorts,quantity,etc.In the process of

the formation of choices, the advertisments help consummers  determine to buy the proper products.As a result,the choices as a director inspire the managers to decide which

kind of product they should reduce and what the tastes of the consumers are,and so on.Then through the producing process,the provide the good commodities.

     Secondly,the advertisements are also very significant to the company in the absorbing the consumers's interests and tastes,which is very crucial to the company's development.

It is very reasonable that in order to make the consumers know of the quality,the visual

effect and some other attributes of the merchandise,the company invest in the

advertisements.For example,selling a good quantity of dresses is the main goal of a

company,but if the consumers can't know the visiual effect,the dresses' material or some

other basic characteristics,they will possibly buy a few of them,even none of them.

      To sum up,the advertisement is very significant  both to the consumers and the

companies.It is a very necessary step to enhance the consumers' life quality in the process of choosing the better goods through the advertisements.And it is also a crucial for the

company to make their decision about the proudcts which they should provide through

the information coming from the choices of the consumers,and one of the very

importance step is firstly make the consumers know what they can supply by the way of

advertisements.

[ 本帖最后由 layfolk 于 2008-9-7 11:44 编辑 ]

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不好意思我昨天新来的不知道改作文的规矩……
我来了>_<
agree or disagree ：advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy

    I don't agree with the idea that advertisements is a waste of a company's money.
    Firstly,although consumers have known what they want to buy,their choices are very
crucial in several aspects.One of the key aspects, I consider, is the choices of consumers are beneficial to enhance their life quality,as consumers' choices are a great director to the company's products supplying as well as the product sorts,quantity,etc.In the process of
the formation of choices, the advertisments help consummers  determine to buy the proper products.As a result,the choices as a director inspire the managers to decide which
kind of product they should reduce and what the tastes of the consumers are,and so on.Then through the producing process,the provide the good commodities.（？）
个人认为，主题句可以更明晰一点。开门见山直接说，有利于消费者做出更好的选择，然后陈述。
     Secondly,the advertisements are also very significant to the company in the absorbing the consumers's interests and tastes,which is very crucial to the company's development.
It is very reasonable that in order to make the consumers know of the quality,the visual
effect and some other attributes of the merchandise,the company invest in the
advertisements.For example,selling a good quantity of dresses is the main goal of a
company,but if the consumers can't know the visiual effect,the dresses' material or some
other basic characteristics,they will possibly buy a(去掉) few of them,even none of them.
      To sum up,the advertisement is very significant  both to the consumers and the
companies.It is a very necessary （可以改成essential）step to enhance the consumers' life quality in the process of choosing the better goods through the advertisements.And it is also a（删去） crucial for the
company to make their decision about the proudcts which they should provide through
the information coming from the choices of the consumers,and one of the very
importance step is firstly make the consumers know what they can supply by the way of
advertisements.
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