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While numerous people who claim that we are supposed to set aside a certain period of time things to handle up all the matters in hand at the same time, I stand on the view that we should accomplish the things in stages, that means complete them one by one


  There are many reasons to support my view, of which more efficiency can be acquired when you concentrate your mind on only one task at one time is the first one. For example, last term  I have so many assignments: the term paper, the lab report and you also need time to prepare for the English test that I was almost overwhelmed at first. Accepting the suggestions of my friends, I knew that the key to effective studying in a short amount time is prioritizing. I finish my paper first, and then report, and as a result I had enough time to review my lessons. I was so proud of fulfilling all my tasks efficiently.


   It will provide you a strong sense of accomplishment when you fulfill a single plan every time and as a result you are more willing to go on working with confidence, while you will be frustrated when a whole host of things still remain after a long time, for the reason that it is of great difficulty to accomplish all the work in one time without stop, and then you are reluctant to continue your work or even give up half way..


  The third reason is that if you always keep thinking that there are so many things have to be attended to, you will feel great psychological pressure every day. Why not prefer to make a plan for a single assignment everyday? Through this way, you can arrange your time more reasonably and refresh yourself into the next task.


  With all the aspects mentioned above, I definitely prefer to accomplish my tasks step by step for the privilege of being more efficient, confident and keeping active all the time.



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While numerous people who claim that we are supposed to set aside a certain period of time things to handle up all the matters in hand at the same time, I stand on the view that we should accomplish the things in stages, that means complete them one by one

  There are many reasons to support my view, of which more efficiency can be acquired when you concentrate your mind on only one task at one time is the first one. For example, last term  I have so many assignments: the term paper, the lab report and you also need time to prepare for the English test that I was almost overwhelmed at first.After Accepting the suggestions of my friends, I knew that the key to effective studying in a short amount time is prioritizing.So I finish my paper first, and then report, and as a result I had enough time to review my lessons. I was so proud of fulfilling all my tasks efficiently.

   It will provide you a strong sense of accomplishment when you fulfill a single plan every time and as a result you are more willing to go on working with confidence, while you will be frustrated when a whole host of things still remain after a long time, for the reason that it is of great difficulty to accomplish all the work in one time without stop, and then you are reluctant to continue your work or even give up half way../逻辑有些乱……建议加点连词

  The third reason is that if you always keep thinking that there are so many things have to be attended to, you will feel great psychological pressure every day. Why not prefer to make a plan for a single assignment everyday? Through this way, you can arrange your time more reasonably and refresh yourself into the next task.

  With all the aspects mentioned above, I definitely prefer to accomplish my tasks step by step for the privilege of being more efficient, confident and keeping active all the time.

个人觉得没必要短句子都连在一起,长句子读得很累,不如在句式上多点变化
内容很合理,连词用得少了点,所以显得逻辑性稍弱

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谢谢
很受用
自己努力再把它改好点

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