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lignumvitaeUID: 207532

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The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
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With the development of science and technology, we have various means to record daily lives and social change. Video camera is one of the new tools, which could provide a vivid and authentic record of events. But I do not think that written records are less important nowadays, since both of the two ways of record have each merits, which could make up the disadvantages from each other.

For one thing, the traditional written records supply lots of data and commentaries of historical events, which were difficult to be recorded by video camera. Data is considered to be abstract facts in people's daily lives. We could read the number written in books and magazines, but could not view the corresponding entities of the number. For example, from books of sociology, we could read that the population of China has been up to 1.3 billion. We could read the number "1.3 billion" but could not see every Chinese citizen by video. And it is not necessarily to do so. In another word, to record the china population by paper is a proper and effective way. Therefore, to record facts by paper is an indispensable way though this means is not perfect. It could be used according to the need of the noted facts.

For another, we could not ignore the merits of developed record tools, since they give us a new angle to view the truth and events. Just talking about video camera, an invention of contemporary digital technology, people could use the machine to record things easily and enjoy its vivid representation. Especially when we use the video camera to take photos, record songs and even make many videos of daily life, important events, educational materials etc. By the digital records of daily life, we would watch them after many years and would not be worried about whether it might be rotten or tore. Moreover, the pictures and dialogues recorded by video machines are more reliable and authentic than those recorded by paper to some extent. Because writers record the events after they witnessing and hearing the events, and further think about them in their angles determined by their social states, educational level, characters and so on. That is to say paper records might probably be written involved the authors' subjective opinions and could not reflect the facts thoroughly as the video camera does.

In sum, both of the video records and paper records are necessary to our and the social improvement. We need the two means to record history in different angles and present things by various ways. Maybe there will be lots of new tools and machines turn up companying with the development of innovation and technology. I should say that each means for recording has its advantages as well as disadvantages. So we should use them in proper and selective way.

硬柿子UID: 204138

------题目------
The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
------正文------
With the development of science and technology, we have various means to record daily lives and social change. Video camera is one of the new tools, which could provide a vivid and authentic record of events. But I do not think that written records are less important nowadays, since both of the two ways both 不就是代表two的意思了吗？直接both ways 你看如何？of record have each their ownmerits, which could make up the disadvantages from each other.

For one thing, the traditional written records supply lots of data and commentaries of historical events, which were difficult to be recorded by video camera. Data is considered to be abstract facts in people's daily lives. We could read the number written in books and magazines, but could not view the corresponding entities of the number. For example, from books of sociology, we could read that the population of China has been up to 1.3 billion. We could read the number "1.3 billion" but could not see every Chinese citizen by video. And it is not necessarily to do so. In another word, to record the china population by paper is a proper and effective way. Therefore, to record facts by paper is an indispensable way though this means is not perfect. It could be used according to the need of the noted facts.

For another, we could not ignore the merits of developed record tools, since they give us a new angle to view the truth and events. Just talking about video camera, an invention of contemporary digital technology, people could use the machine to record things easily and enjoy its vivid representation. Especially when we use the video camera to take photos, record songs and even make many videos of daily life, important events, educational materials etc. By the digital records of daily life, we would watch them after many years and would not be worried about whether it might be rotten or tore. Moreover, the pictures and dialogues recorded by video machines are more reliable and authentic than those recorded by paper to some extent. Because writers record the events after they witnessing and hearing the events, and further think about them in their angles determined by their social states, educational level, characters and so on. That is to say paper records might probably be written involved the authors' subjective opinions and could not reflect the facts thoroughly as the video camera does.

In sum, both of the video records and paper records are necessary to our and the social improvement. We need the two means to record history in different angles and present things by various ways. Maybe there will be lots of new tools and machines turn up companying with the development of innovation and technology. I should say that each means for recording has its advantages as well as disadvantages. So we should use them in proper and selective way.

有个问题和你探讨下：written record---是指传统的手写记录，
那么，现在储存下来的，例如 文章的扫描版本，是在written record的范畴内呢，还是video camero 范畴内，或者可以看成两种形式记录的有机结合?

那么，这个文章是不是又有了延伸的可写的东西………

lignumvitaeUID: 207532

谢谢楼上的战友看我的练习，你的思路很是开阔，我只是把written record理解成手写记录，如果有交叉怕是会写乱，如果考虑到这一点，到可以另写一段，谈谈取两者优点而改进：）