Issue74 V6 8.5

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正好写过，来看看：）

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74"The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."

Which is the most effective way to communicate our idea or value to large groups of people, through language or images? While I concede that images could make people's ideas and values clearer to the audiences or even indispensable sometimes, it is often through language that truly effective communications generated.

Admittedly, images could be very effective and even indispensable sometimes for an effective communication with large groups of people. It could be difficult to imagine（ geography teachers） without a map in their classes and（ chemists） without sketches of chemical structures when giving a lecture. Images are superior because they could express facts more directly and vividly than language. When （a business leade）r goes to great length to explain his future strategy, a processing diagram could help people to understand the outline of his ideas. When （an engineer） tries to show his design of a new car, the CAD graph rather than a pile of descriptions is always a better choice. Images are really powerful tools for us in communication with others especially large groups of people.（例子的领域想的很广啊，我觉得这样选例子分析最好了，赞）

However, images should be combined with language to be effective. Everybody could observe the facts shown in images, but hardly anyone could really understand the speaker if they are not informed of what the speaker really want to express. With the help of language, the speaker could give descriptions to these images thus make the communication more effective. That is why our ancestors invented language after they had learned to communicate with each other by images and gestures. Language is really a more effective tool. Without language, not only could it be difficult to understand the images, but also the time spent on communication should be largely expanded. （分析得挺到位的）

Moreover, when it comes to some abstract ideas, images could often be futile. Images are inferior to language because while images could not express everything around us, language can. Just think about some abstract ideas and values from our inner world. It is language that helps Martin Luther King to express his eagle dream of equality in his famous "I have a dream" speech; it is language that helps Einstein to make his abstract theory of relativity clear to the public; it is also language that helps the politicians to ensure the authority of laws. Even the greatest painters who express their ideas mainly through images could make their work more accessible to common people when adding descriptions of their thoughts and ideas to their paintings. （结尾最好再总结一下，和body1一样，例子分领域，而且简洁，我很欣赏这样的举例方式）

In sum, although when combined with language, images could help to make more effective communications, language is always the cornerstone of any kind of communication.

今天随便抽了一道Issue 来练的，和Issue 7有点类似，不过也不记得了，得回去好好看看了。才写了433个字。最后余了7分钟，改了些句子，拼写错误还是无法避免
（快考了吧？哈哈，随便抽就抽到高频题。我觉得你现在的实力对付ets足够啦。对于这篇文章，最大的优点是举例方式和覆盖面。存在的问题是，我认为body2 and body3可以换一下，这样从逻辑上更加合理。还有，结尾段再长一点就更好了，加油~~~）

xiaowenzi118UID：202887

抽题也不是随便抽的,是看机经里还有什么高频以前没写,就拿来练的.这样可能有效一点吧

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Which is the most effective way to communicate our idea or value to large groups of people, through language or images? While I concede that images could make people's ideas and values clearer to the audiences or even indispensable sometimes, it is often through language that truly effective communications generated.

Admittedly, images could be very effective and even indispensable sometimes for an effective communication with large groups of people. It could be difficult to imagine geography teachers without a map in their classes and chemists without sketches of chemical structures when giving a lecture. Images are superior because they could express facts more directly and vividly than language. When a business leader goes to great length to explain his future strategy, a processing diagram could help people to understand the outline of his ideas. When an engineer tries to show his design of a new car, the CAD graph rather than a pile of descriptions is always a better choice. Images are really powerful tools for us in communication with others especially large groups of people.

However, images should be combined with language to be effective. Everybody could observe the facts shown in images, but hardly anyone could really understand the speaker if they are not informed of what the speaker really want to express. With the help of language, the speaker could give descriptions to these images thus make the communication more effective. That is why our ancestors invented language after they had learned to communicate with each other by images and gestures. Language is really a more effective tool. Without language, not only could it be difficult to understand the images, but also the time spent on communication should be largely expanded.第二段有一点儿空对空的感觉

Moreover, when it comes to some abstract ideas, images could often be futile. Images are inferior to language because while images could not express everything around us, language can. Just think about some abstract ideas and values from our inner world. It is language that helps Martin Luther King to express his eagle dream不知道这个说法对不对 of equality in his famous "I have a dream" speech; it is language that helps Einstein to make his abstract theory of relativity clear to the public; it is also language that helps the politicians to ensure the authority of laws. Even the greatest painters who express their ideas mainly through images could make their work more accessible to common people when adding descriptions of their thoughts and ideas to their paintings.

In sum, although when combined with language, images could help to make more effective communications, language is always the cornerstone of any kind of communication.结尾简洁有力

但读完之后，再看一下题目，综观全文觉得有两个地方是有问题的，一者，large group of people只是在第一段提了一下，二者，cornerstone 跟 more effective好像还不能划等号，当然这一点在现时作文之中也没法再细究了，总体来说还是很好，应付考试嘛，保证够用就好了，用不着盲目高要求啊:lol

xiaowenzi118UID：202887

是拼错了,eager