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History, a去掉或者改成the record of the past which reminds us about both the wax and wane of human process将both the wax and wane改成both the wax and the wane，否则wax and wane是一个整体；或者both the wax of human process and the wane of it, arousearouses much debate and concern nowadays. Why do we study the history? What is the purpose for us to study history? Is it that the study of history has value only when it is relevant to our daily lives, as the statement suggests? However, in my view, I concede that it seems has 改成seems to have more value when history is related with our daily lives, while 改成even though更明确it is not the whole merits of history.

On a personal lever 应该是level吗；lever是杠杆的意思？, learning history is the basic requirement for a would-be succeed successful person. On the one hand, as a human being, one have 改成having no idea about the past of his country would unlikely be a 改成an indeed successful man. He ,与整个从句后面的逗号对应 who does not know how his country was formed and what is 将is调到从句末尾 the origin of its human culture, may also does not care 前面改成may also do not care或者may also care nothing然后去掉about后的any about any development of exist 改成existing stuff for everything has its own history, not only the progress of human or a country. We should first study the history of such main points, and then apply the method to other subjects. On the other hand, reading books which fulfill the wisdom of ancestors, 去掉逗号 is a process that 去掉that或者将后面的cultivating改成cultivates cultivating our spirit. In contemporary world, the knowledge is the basic capital for us to stand in a complex society successfully. As the saying goes, “reading history makes one sagacious, a man with erudite knowledge of history can easily identify his position in society and make the proper plan for his life according to the position now“. It is the cultivation of brain, to some extent this cannot be involved with daily lives.

Admittedly, we are always familiar with the value we obtained in our daily life. For example, when we make the decision make decision就可以了 we always refer to some previous similar cases, and what should we not do and do 改成and what we should do and should not do is under the reference of history which provides good advice. Sometimes, we cogitate matters unconsciously based on the familiar consequence 改成复数 of history 将unconsciously改到这里. However 改成Still可能读起来过渡顺畅一点也避免重复用词, we cannot say that history is only useful in the trifles of our daily life.

Let us come to the societal 是social吗 level in which the study of history may have more weight. For a country, the requirement of its people to learn history is one way that form 改成forms coherence for a country which is the power for people get-together. With 改成Owning或其他的一个现在分词，更适合排比 the same background, sharing the same land, fighting for the same goal--making one’s country more prosperous, the coherence appears. Just the same faith in all the people makes the stability and unity in one country possible. Additionally, the 不需要the history is a basic subject that records the information of the past without any objective 改成subjective opinion. Professors in such realm, take it as a philosophy to recognize the world, the assuming God. On this level, if we restrict the filed filed是什么？field？ of history, we would bent 改成原形bend the reality of history and also the history itself would become meaningless.

In summary 改成in sum或者as a summary, history is the accurate objective record of the past written in sequence. The study of history is the obligation for human beings as the symbol of the progress of us of过多，改成as the symbol of our progress, no matter whether it is relevant to our daily lives or not. Form 改成from history, not only can we avoid some mistakes the superior had committed, but also render us a way to be more sagacious后半句主语和前半句不一致造成语法错误. Besides these, nowadays, increasing disciplines derives 改成derive from history, such as historic-philosophy.

总评：练习之后没有修改打字、谓语形式等错误，如果用word修改，应该很多都可以发现

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好感动啊!!我才看到不好意思啊!
我来研究下

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啊
真是没想到有这么多小毛病啊
你改的好仔细啊,好谢谢!!!!!:)
我这还是在word 里改了的;在看这文章时,我还特地又把word打开看怎么会有这么语法都没有改到呢,可真的是word说语法错误已检查完....
另外问问:not only.. but also 句子前后是非要主语一致么?