issue172 G06.Sally小组作文贴

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G06.Sally小组作文贴

172"Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time."


1.真理大多数都是改革社会,或对旧事物进行改革,不可避免的对权威思想进行了挑战.
2.如果我们每个人去对每个权威的思想进行挑战，社会岂不乱套了。
3.但是我们要勇于挑战这样才会让社会发展进步.


As the society development, we can't avoid the new theoretic was put up. Once the important truths was accept by the public, society will stride a great step. Whereas, it is pity that for the new concept were so proceed, which can't accept immediately by majority. And even the scientists contribute his life for insisting his or her truths. In my opinion, the scientists are hero, they have a great contribution for the development of human being.


As the common sense, we know it should have a great revolution to the society when a new truth was brought forward. It is unavoidable to challenge the old ideas. The old theoretic is merging the wisdom of previous wise scientist. We should inspire those person who have a great contribution to the humans and comprehend their thoughts to develop new thesis. As time flies, some of the previous truths seemingly have some flaws, which were found by the temporal scientists. What should you do if you found the knowledge which you have learned for many years? Many great scientists have showed us perfect models. Copernicus is a more convincing example, as a great astronomer, he was well known to the world wide. One of his great work is the <<De revolutionibus orbium coelestium>>, and influence offspring greatly. Nevertheless, he can't wait the theory of the book was acceptable by the most of his contemporaries. And as the book was published, his book established a great, but have more challenge to the wisdom of the time, and punished by the church immediately. We know truth will not hamper by the history wheel, after he died several years, truth was acknowledged by the public. I can conclude from the example when a new concept was signed up, it perhaps struggle against the formal truths and wisdom of the time. Finally, the truth must win and accept by the public and give offspring a great overlook.


In my opinion, the point which previous wise person spend much time on to work out is much more invaluable fortune to us and we can't turn trough it easily. In addition, those knowledgeable procedures have do sufficient experiment to support their evidence and used and threshed for many years. Therefore, in fact we could digest the classical concept first, we should not approve the theory whether right or not, then we could have much time to do more research on new ideas. Such as what is Newton said "If I have seen father than Descartes, it is because I have stood on the shoulders of giants. "From the famous scientist words, we could conclude how bookish the famous man is. Time is limited, we should spend time efficiently, or it will not only waste one's life, also is waste to the society.


Have your own idea is more important for your development and even struggle against to the old ideas. Whit the controversy one by one, our society will have a great development potentially. Without challenge to the old thesis our society won't have any progress and innovation. For insist thesis, Bruno, who is too young, contribute to his life. Christian Huygens, famous in physics, suspect there have some fatal flaws in the greatest scientist physician Newton's theory. And even dispute for thousands years. We can see the importance of the challenge to the old theory.


In sum, the development of society need innovate from every aspect, and the innovation need to challenge to the old system. With the healthy development of society, we not only need absorb classical theories, also have suspicious perspectives to the old ideas.
终于在紧张中完成了，每次都错误多多，学习中...谢谢大家了
大家如果写的郁闷了，就来看我的文章，一定会让你信心倍增。:)总算找到一点用处了:L

[ Last edited by 11yaoyao on 2005-12-8 at 10:31 ]

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提醒yangxing记住下次交作业的时候要把连接发到小组贴里面哦，要不然大家有可能看不到哦

sallyxinduUID：2131253

172"Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time."


1.真理大多数都是改革社会,或对旧事物进行改革,不可避免的对权威思想进行了挑战.
2.如果我们每个人去对每个权威的思想进行挑战，社会岂不乱套了。
3.但是我们要勇于挑战这样才会让社会发展进步.
2和3不要放在一篇文章里面写，是矛盾的啊，你要找到一个突击点然后沿着这个突击点有目的得发展，要不然自相矛盾不是在扇自己耳光吗？

As the society development 注意as 的用法，这里该改为develops, we can't avoid the new theoretic was put 去查avoid 的用法,改为 new theory's being put up. 这里最好转折一下Once the important truths was accept by the public, society will去掉这个词， stride a great step. Whereas, it is a pity that for the new concept were so proceed,检查，我没弄懂你的意思 which can't accept immediately by majority注意被动的用法. And even even表甚至，即使应该是even if the scientists contribute his单数还是复数？？ life for insisting his or her truths. In my opinion, the scientists are hero, they have a great contribution for the development of human being.
逻辑比较清楚了，但还是一些基本语法在犯错误，抽空进来看了下，剩下的由你的搭档修改拉

As the common sense, we know it should have a great revolution to the society when a new truth was brought forward. It is unavoidable to challenge the old ideas. The old theoretic is merging the wisdom of previous wise scientist. We should inspire those person who have a great contribution to the humans and comprehend their thoughts to develop new thesis. As time flies, some of the previous truths seemingly have some flaws, which were found by the temporal scientists. What should you do if you found the knowledge which you have learned for many years? Many great scientists have showed us perfect models. Copernicus is a more convincing example, as a great astronomer, he was well known to the world wide. One of his great work is the <<De revolutionibus orbium coelestium>>, and influence offspring greatly. Nevertheless, he can't wait the theory of the book was acceptable by the most of his contemporaries. And as the book was published, his book established a great, but have more challenge to the wisdom of the time, and punished by the church immediately. We know truth will not hamper by the history wheel, after he died several years, truth was acknowledged by the public. I can conclude from the example when a new concept was signed up, it perhaps struggle against the formal truths and wisdom of the time. Finally, the truth must win and accept by the public and give offspring a great overlook.


In my opinion, the point which previous wise person spend much time on to work out is much more invaluable fortune to us and we can't turn trough it easily. In addition, those knowledgeable procedures have do sufficient experiment to support their evidence and used and threshed for many years. Therefore, in fact we could digest the classical concept first, we should not approve the theory whether right or not, then we could have much time to do more research on new ideas. Such as what is Newton said "If I have seen father than Descartes, it is because I have stood on the shoulders of giants. "From the famous scientist words, we could conclude how bookish the famous man is. Time is limited, we should spend time efficiently, or it will not only waste one's life, also is waste to the society.


Have your own idea is more important for your development and even struggle against to the old ideas. Whit the controversy one by one, our society will have a great development potentially. Without challenge to the old thesis our society won't have any progress and innovation. For insist thesis, Bruno, who is too young, contribute to his life. Christian Huygens, famous in physics, suspect there have some fatal flaws in the greatest scientist physician Newton's theory. And even dispute for thousands years. We can see the importance of the challenge to the old theory.


In sum, the development of society need innovate from every aspect, and the innovation need to challenge to the old system. With the healthy development of society, we not only need absorb classical theories, also have suspicious perspectives to the old ideas.

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谢组长了，第一点赞成，第二点反对，第三点再赞成。这样写不可以吗？主要写思路了，其它都没有管，还是句子太烂了...学习中.....

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我还不会如何在帖子中用不同的颜色和字体，干脆就传修改的word档给你吧，
水平有限，呵呵，有问题大家讨论，今天有事，回来晚了，马上改argument,稍等，

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As the society development,(用名词结构的话，With the development of...可能更好一点) we can't avoid the new theoretic was put up.(查一下aviod的用法~) Once the important truths was accept(accepted) by the public, society will stride a great step. Whereas, it is a pity that for the new concept were so proceed, which can't accept immediately by majority. And even(?) the scientists contribute his(their) life for insisting his or her truths.(contribute ... to 注意搭配~) In my opinion, the scientists are hero(注意单复数的问题哦~~), they have a great contribution for the development of human being.


As the common sense, we know it should have a great revolution to the society when a new truth was(is) brought forward. It is unavoidable to challenge the old ideas. The old theoretic(应该用名词形式吧？) is merging the wisdom of previous wise scientists. We should inspire those person who have(have段首刚用过，可以换成build之类，丰富语言) a great contribution to the humans and comprehend their thoughts to develop new thesises. As time flies, some of the previous truths seemingly have some flaws, which were found by the temporal scientists. What should you do if you found the knowledge which you have learned for many years? Many great scientists have showed us perfect models. Copernicus is a more convincing example, as a great astronomer, he was well known to the world wide. One of his great work is the <<De revolutionibus orbium coelestium>>,英文中不用书名号的，印刷体中用斜体，我们直接写就可以了啦~~ and influence offspring greatly. Nevertheless, he can't wait the theory of the book was acceptable by the most of his contemporaries.从句要加引导词的吧？~ And as the book was published, his book established a great, but have more challenge to the wisdom of the time, and punished by the church immediately.这几句话看着有点冗长，可精炼一下 We know truth will not hamper by the history wheel, after he died several years, truth was acknowledged by the public. I(用第一人称可能会显得有点主观~) can conclude from the example when a new concept was signed up, it perhaps struggle against the formal truths and wisdom of the time. Finally, the truth must win and accept(应用被动) by the public and give offspring a great(这段中great出现的频率有点高，可以用其他词代替，如significant, important等等~) overlook.


In my opinion, the point which previous wise person spend much time on to work out is much more invaluable fortune to us and we can't turn trough it easily. In addition, those knowledgeable procedures have do sufficient experiment to support their evidence and used and threshed for many years. Therefore, in fact we could digest the classical concept first, we should not approve the theory whether right or not, then we could have much time to do more research on new ideas. Such as what is Newton said "If I have seen father than Descartes, it is because I have stood on the shoulders of giants. "From the famous scientist words, we could conclude how bookish the famous man is. Time is limited, we should spend time efficiently, or it will not only waste one's life, also is waste to the society.


Have your own idea is more important for your development and even struggle against to the old ideas. Whit the controversy one by one, our society will have a great development potentially. Without challenge to the old thesis our society won't have any progress and innovation. For insist thesis, Bruno, who is too young, contribute to his life. Christian Huygens, famous in physics, suspect there have some fatal flaws in the greatest scientist physician Newton's theory. And even dispute for thousands years. We can see the importance of the challenge to the old theory.


In sum, the development of society need innovate from every aspect, and the innovation need to challenge to the old system. With the healthy development of society, we not only need absorb classical theories, but also have suspicious perspectives to the old ideas.

个人感觉从文章结构来看，一、三段都反对论题，可以放在一起；第二段作为让步可放于第一段前获第三段后，这样文章更有逻辑。~~~