issue150 [kito]

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【题目】Issue150（2005年2-9月总频47次）
“Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.
【翻译】由于电视和全球范围内的计算机网络，人们现在可以熟悉很多以前从未涉足过的地方，其结果就是使得旅游变得过时了。
【类别】科技类
【参考资料】
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ight=%2Bissue150%2B
【提纲】
Position: It is true that television and worldwide computer connections make people become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited, whereas tourism does not become obsolete as a result, in stead, it stimulated the development of tourism.
1、首先，电视和网络的确让人们了解了很多他们没有去过的地方。因为时间和金钱有限，大部分人不可能到很多地方旅游，网络和电视给他们提供了方便。人们可以不用出家门就可以看见埃及的金字塔，Hawaii beautiful scene。（同意前半句）
2、但是旅游是不能被替代的，旅游有很多好处。第一：看是一回事，亲身体验是另外一回事。第二：旅游能够让人从繁忙的工作中解放出来，这也是很多人旅游的原因，如在California 的beach，你可以享受阳光，呼吸新鲜空气，游泳，这些都是通过网络办不到的；第三：旅游也是锻炼身体，人们去旅游总要travel，要走路，进行各种各样的relax games，而这些也是在家办不到的；
3、而且，电视和网络不但不会使旅游业萧条，反而会促进旅游业的发展。应为人们以前了解旅游的途径很少，所以人们不大可能跑很远，比如出国去旅游。现在不一样了，在人们从电视上了解信息后，可能能帮助他们计划旅游。
4、总结
【正文】(401words)
Tourism, one of the best recreational ways of people, will never become obsolete with the development of television and worldwide computer connections which is called internet, in stead, it has been stimulated by them.

Confessedly, it is television and worldwide computer connections that broad the eyes of human being, letting people recognize places they have never been to.
Time and capital is limited, and it is impossible for most people traveling, no matter it is near or far, especially in the past. Nowadays, though traveling to everywhere is still a little impractical, however, people may see the scenery of traveling places through television and internet. For example, we can see the pyramid in Egypt indoors and appreciate the Hawaii beautiful scene, due to the television and worldwide computer connections. Therefore,

But, tourism could not be substituted consequently for it has many benefits that can’t be satisfied through watching television and using computers. To begin with feeling oneself turns to be quite different from just seeing. You can see the Hawaii scene, nevertheless, can you achieve the feeling that lying on the beach with gentle sunshine? That is the real discrimination; moreover, in the rapid society, traveling, to be a relax form keeping people away from busy work, can never be replaced of, with which people may throw away their annoyance temporarily. And television and internet cannot hold any advantage above; in addition, tourism is a kind of sports. When traveling, people need to walk and do various sports, and finally get benefits for their body. This is also unrealizable if they stay indoors with television and computers only.

Still, as the result, tourism will not become obsolete, on the contrary it proves to be flourishing in that people are now better knowing the places to travel and hold exact information about tourism which can also help them to chose and plan. For examples, there are some programs about traveling in TV telling the beautiful scenes in different places in order to guide people to travel. Also, there are some internet sites announcing the information about traveling places and related issues such as the best traveling line or the most suitable vehicle. With these help of television and worldwide computer connections, tourism becomes more reliable and less dangerous.

Thanks to the flying development of television and internet, tourism is greatly enhanced and stimulated and thus leads a bright future for its development.

[ 本帖最后由 kito9695 于 2006-1-25 13:07 编辑 ]

@amy@UID：209096

Tourism, one of the best recreational ways of people, will never become obsolete with the development of television and worldwide computer connections which is called internet, in stead, it has been stimulated by them.

Confessedly, it is television and worldwide computer connections that broad the eyes [我不确定这里用eyes是不是合适，是不是要用eyeshot？你确定了也告诉我一声哈:lol] of human being, letting people recognize [这里的recognize好像也不太合适，它是“认出、赏识”的意思] places they have never been to. Time and capital is limited, and it is impossible for most people traveling, no matter it[虽然我能明白it指代什么，可好象这样写还是有点指代不明，因为前面并没有提及] is near or far, especially in the past. Nowadays, though traveling to everywhere is still a little impractical, however, people may see the scenery of traveling places through television and internet. For example, we can see the pyramid in Egypt indoors and appreciate the Hawaii beautiful scene [前面的indoors移到这里比较好], due to the television and worldwide computer connections. Therefore, [这里没写完阿...]

But, tourism could not be substituted consequently for it has many benefits that can’t be satisfied through watching television and using computers. To begin with feeling oneself [word说这里有错，那把oneself换成personally吧] turns to be quite different from just seeing. You can see the Hawaii scene, nevertheless, can you achieve the feeling that lying on the beach with gentle sunshine? That is the real discrimination; moreover, in the rapid society, traveling, to be a relax form keeping people away from busy work, can never be replaced of, with which people may throw away their annoyance temporarily. And[这个and有点突兀] television and internet cannot hold any advantage above; in addition, tourism is a kind of sports. When traveling, people need to walk and do various sports, and finally get benefits for their body. This is also unrealizable if they stay indoors with television and computers only.

Still, as the result, tourism will not become obsolete, on the contrary it proves to be flourishing in that people are now better knowing the places to travel and hold exact information about tourism which can also help them to chose and plan. For examples, there are some programs about traveling in TV telling the beautiful scenes in different places in order to guide people to travel. Also, there are some internet sites announcing the information about traveling places and related issues such as the best traveling line or the most suitable vehicle. With these help [helps] of television and worldwide computer connections, tourism becomes more reliable and less dangerous.

Thanks to the flying development of television and internet, tourism is greatly enhanced and stimulated and thus leads a bright future for its development.

文中的 internet 要改为 Internet

你限时了吗？字数有点少哦，不过基本上都说清楚了，呵呵，继续努力吧~~

[ 本帖最后由 @amy@ 于 2006-1-25 22:39 编辑 ]

kito9695UID：209685

原帖由 @amy@ 于 2006-1-25 22:34 发表
Therefore, [这里没写完阿...]

汗...老犯这种错误，表在考场上也这样就好啦，哈哈哈哈~~