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发表于 2006-3-1 14:28:23 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
TOPIC:ISSUE 123 - "It is possible to identify a person's politics within a very short time of meeting him or her. Everything about people-their clothes, their friends, the way they talk, what they eat-reflects their political beliefs."
WORDS:518          TIME:1:02:43          DATE:2006-3-1
提纲:在短期内通过相处了解一个人是非常困难的,有些人可以了解,有些人通过短期了解不了。
1 有些人很单纯也很真实,表里如一,这样就可以通过衣着,朋友,等方式了解。他们的衣服只穿自己喜欢的,朋友没有因为利益相处的,说话无拘束直言,吃的东西也是随性的,这样的人只要问问他的政治信仰是什么,那么就是什么。
2 但是有些人善于掩饰自己,甚至于善于欺骗别人,就很难通过这些方式了解,甚至通过这些方式正好被误导。一方面有人喜欢掩饰自己,她的衣服,朋友,说话的方式都是工作需要或用来展示的,也许信仰都不是她自己的想法,都是某种外界需要决定的。另一方面,欺骗别人更容易借助这些,例如间谍
3 总的来说还是应该通过长时间的考验来了解。事实胜于雄辩,在真实的表象也经不住时间的考验。例如政治家们,振奋人心的演讲和誓言都抵不过实际为民的行动。
结尾:虽然是可以通过简单的方式很短时间内了解人,但是这样容易让人了解的人太少了,因为人们都是或多或少的会受到外界环境的干扰,更重要的是主观因素包括善意的和欺骗性的掩饰。所以短时间往往不可取,要长时间考验。
To say that we can identify a person's politics within a very short time of meeting him or her makes sense to some extent, nevertheless, things about people's  clothes, their friends, the way they talk, what they eat can not easily reflect their politica beliefs all the time and even hardly could.

To begin with, as to some people who are honest and sincere may be the ones whose politics may be easily identified. They wear the confortable clothes that they like best and can not  bear the uniques, through which we have known their characteristics as well. And they make friends with the people they like from the bottom of their hearts despite that the kind of people who can do nothing to help them  when they  in trouble. The way they talk can also reflect their thoughts and willingness directly without any circus and underlying ideas. What they eat according to their belief may be a sign that give us the information of their religious and characteristics.

However, as to some other kind of people who are dishonest and be good at disguising themselves or even cheating others may be the ones whose politics may not be easily identified and what's worse, through the methods that seemingly can reflect their political beliefs, they can even cheat us. For one thing, there are a large quantity of people who would like to disguise themselves for the reason that they are not confident or because of their vanity. Take election for example, regardless of whether the nation election or the community election, the contestents may likely do their best to be seemed competed and powerful, they may take care of their way of talking, style of cloths, what they eat- as to the animal protector can not eat wild animal dinners , and even their friends who may not be their real friends but the "instant friends" that will do them a favor when they need. For another thing, the people who may take these ways as the method to cheat the public. There are some of the famous figures who often appear on the screen when they send lots of money to the poors and the children, yet at the same time recieve bribes for exchange of people's money. Another extreme but sound example is the spies who have to equip themselves with the mask and all the things about them can not be regarded as their real behavor.

Therefore, it is not easy work to identify people's real characterastic and political beliefs and what we have to do if we want to know them is through careful analyzing based on a long period of time. A saying goes" facts speak louder than words" may be the best reason for this. We should wait and see what these figures really give us but not the promise that they made in their sound speach.

In sum, the factors above admittedly can reflect something, however, in most times we should not regard them as ways to identify people's politics but to consider the other more important factor- the facts.
  
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发表于 2006-3-3 12:23:13 |只看该作者
To say that we can identify a person's politics within a very short time of meeting him or her makes sense to some extent, nevertheless, things about people's  clothes, their friends, the way they talk, what they eat can not easily reflect their politica beliefs all the time and even hardly could.

To begin with, as to some people who are honest and sincere may be the ones whose politics may be easily identified. They wear the confortable clothes that they like best and can not  bear the uniques, through which we have known their characteristics as well. And they make friends with the people they like from the bottom of their hearts despite that the kind of people who can do nothing to help them  when they are  in trouble. The way they talk can also reflect their thoughts and willingness directly without any circus(circuity?) and underlying ideas. What they eat according to their beliefs may be a sign that give us the information of their religious and characteristics.

However, as to some other kind of people who are dishonest and be去掉 good at disguising themselves or even cheating others may be the ones whose politics may not be easily identified and what's worse, through the methods that seemingly can reflect their political beliefs, they can even cheat us. For one thing, there are a large quantity of people who would like to disguise themselves for the reason that they are not confident or because of their vanity.(too vacuous) Take(taking) election for example, regardless of whether the nation election or the community election, the contestents may likely do their best to be seemed competed (competitive) and powerful, they may take care of their way of talking, style of cloths, what they eat- as to the animal protector can not eat wild animal dinners, and even their friends who may not be their real friends but the "instant friends" that will do them a favor when they need. For another thing, the people who may take these ways as the method to cheat the public. There are some of the famous figures who often appear on the screen when they send lots of money to the poors and the children, yet at the same time recieve bribes for exchange of people's money. Another extreme but sound example is the spies who have to equip themselves with the mask and all the things about them can not be regarded as their real behavors.

Therefore, it is not easy work to identify people's real characterastics and political beliefs and what we have to do if we want to know them is through careful analyzing based on a long period of time. A saying goes" facts speak louder than words" may be the best reason for this. We should wait and see what these figures really give us but not the promise that they made in their sound speachs.

In sum, the factors above admittedly can reflect something, however, in most times we should not regard them as ways to identify people's politics but to consider the other more important factor- the facts.

楼主的想法的确和我很不一样,是从人的善恶角度来说的。语言很朴实,但是要注意一些单复数的问题。有些句子我认为还是有些不地道的。
总体来说,提供了新的思路,短时间内写完,还是很好的

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发表于 2006-3-11 21:08:37 |只看该作者
To say that we can identify a person's politics within a very short time of meeting him or her makes sense to some extent, nevertheless, things about people's  clothes, their friends, the way they talk, what they eat can not easily reflect their politica[l] beliefs all the time and even hardly could. [赞,很简洁。]

To begin with, as to some people who are honest and sincere may be the ones whose politics may be easily identified. They wear the confortable[comfortable] clothes that they like best and can not  bear the uniques[uniforms], through which we have known their characteristics as well. And they make friends with the people they like from the bottom of their hearts despite that the kind of people who can do nothing to help them  when they[they有点多余吧?]  in trouble. The way they talk can also reflect their thoughts and willingness directly without any circus[?] and underlying ideas. What they eat according to their belief may be a sign that give us the information of their religious and characteristics.

However, as to some other kind of people who are dishonest and be good at disguising themselves or even cheating others may be the ones whose politics may not be easily identified and what's worse, through the methods that seemingly can reflect their political beliefs, they can even cheat us. For one thing, there are[is] a large quantity of people who would like to disguise themselves for the reason that they are not confident or because of their vanity. Take election for example, regardless of whether the nation election or the community election, the contestents may likely do their best to be seemed competed and powerful, they may take care of their way of talking, style of cloths, what they eat- as to the animal protector can not eat wild animal dinners , and even their friends who may not be their real friends but the "instant friends" that will do them a favor when they need. [感觉不是很有说服力的例子,是不是可以重新组织一下。]For another thing, the people who may take these ways as the method to cheat the public. There are some of the famous figures who often appear on the screen when they send lots of money to the poors[the poor形容词当名词用比较好吧] and the children, yet at the same time recieve[receive] bribes for exchange of people's money. Another extreme but sound example is the spies who have to equip themselves with the mask and all the things about them can not be regarded as their real behavor [behaviors].

Therefore, it is not easy work[不要work好一点吧?] to identify people's real characterastic [characteristics]and political beliefs and what we have to do if we want to know them is through careful analyzing based on a long period of time. A saying goes" facts speak louder than words" may be the best reason for this[这个句子是不是有点问题?]. We should wait and see what these figures really give us but not the promise that they made in their sound speach. [speech]

In sum, the factors above admittedly can reflect something, however, in most times we should not regard them as ways to identify people's politics but to consider the other more important factor- the facts.[结尾提升了一下感觉不错,又很简洁。赞!]


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