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As two great main media, movies and television have a significant influence on both individuals and the society. Their effects, of course, have both positive and negative sides. In my opinion, the two media change our behavior in these ways addressed below.
First, movies and television show the aspects of the society from all angles. News on television includes the latest events around the world. It combines sound, texts and pictures. These advantages give us a chance to know about outside immediately and accurately. Movies, however, often tell stories to teach people how to deal with the problems that may occur in the reality, or describe the feelings such as love, friendship and mercy to encourage us understanding our life. The made-up fictions reflect the truth of the society, which help us get close to today’s world.
Nevertheless, movies and television take up a large part of time, limiting the communication between relatives and friends and time consumed on other things. There are so-called “couch potatoes” who sit in front of the television all day. As more channels are founded, the programs come one after another consecutively. Everyone may find his/her favorite at any time. The same thing goes with the movies. New films are produced while old ones are being repeatedly shown. People gradually concentrate on them. They even become addicted and waste all their time. This also makes people lazy and to lose the interests in sports, study or other forms of amusement in our daily life.
Another side effect is brought by movies and television as well. When depicting the society, the bad behaviors or phenomena are demonstrated to warn people against them. Some people, on the contrary, imitate them as a sign of “cool”. For instance, a undergraduate student once “learned” a lot from the fight in the films, which made him violent and finally result in prison for he nearly killed his schoolmate. This trend of imitation among the youth is worth concerning. The media did something they don’t intend to unconsciously.
In conclusion, movies and television, which were once invented to benefit us, contribute to the development of the society as well as bring side effects. We should use these powerful media properly.

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