Issue43(7月高频), 欢迎拍砖 不胜感激!

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提纲: 有保留的反对.
高效领导不论政治或者经济方面, 的最大任务都是协调各方利益, 达到团队的最大利益.因此
1 其领导能力是至关重要的,包括智慧,远见,交流能力,
举例:GE的CEO JACK WELCH
chairperson of Federal reserve: Green Span
2 当然,高道德标准也很重要,但是 很多时候为了责任,个人道德得让步于集体利益.
比如关掉污染企业会造成税收降低, 企业高效会需要裁员 等等

Issue43 "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."

Judging a leader, in my view, should centers on the leadership such as insights and wisdom, instead of excessive attention to the moral or ethic standard. The speaker overexaggerates the moral factors; in fact, the core responsibility of leader requires oftentimes subordination to some moral codes. However, a higher pursuit of moral and ethic standards will undoubtedly add charm to the leaders.

It is well known that the highest goal of an effective leader is to gain the overall success of an organization, small or big, an enterprises or a country. To be more specific, during the tenure, the political leader should make great effort to ensure the well-being of his or her fellow citizens and the prosperity of the region being led. While the businesses leader, say, chief executive official, should take account of the profit of the company. It is by no means an easy task to achieve the goal after balancing different interests and conquering tremendous difficulties.

On the one hand, the leadership consisting of insights, wisdom, effective communication thus, should be greatly underscored. Consider, for example, it is the very vision and wisdom of Alan Greenspan, the most effective chairman of federal reserve in American history, that contribute to the legend of economy in the United States-- a long-term high pace of economic development vis-à-vis low rate of unemployment. The same is true with Jack Welch, who led the General Electric from a once bloated company to a dynamic modern one with high efficiency. He, through his wisdom, rather than simply adhering to moral codes, created the Six Sigma, which intends to greatly increase the overall efficiency of the corporate. No one would deny their outstanding leadership by whether or not they personally donated to charities. Thus, the abilities involved in the tenure counts most, among all other factors, to judge an effective leader.

On the other, we should concede that the high moral standards also contribute to the effective leaders.  In fact, a leader, especially those with high exposure, if possessing great personalities and social responsibities, then would gains charms both from its subordinated and the public. The loyalty of the subordinate, together with the respect of the public to him lays, oftentimes  the solid foundation for his effective leadership. However, the personal moral and ethic codes do not always parallel, even clash with their core responsibility. The truth is, a real effective leader will, in many cases subordinate personal morality to the overall objective. Consider, for example, a great state governor, after weighing all the factors, decide to close some profitable yet highly polluted company. It is quite possible that they will be taken to task in that the action causes a decline in both the tax revenue and pace of economic development. Another case comes from Jack Welch. He decide to lay off a great number of employees when GE suffer the downturn, in order to keep the high efficiency, yet he is by means a not effective leader in this regard. Moreover, a effective leader, more often than not, sacrifice the leisure time with their family to contribute to the well-being of the company, which seemingly contradicted the highest moral standards yet never undermine their image as a leader.

To sum up, despite the importance of rigorous moral and ethic codes, the effective leader instead should pay more attention to their leadership, which contributes most to the core responsibility.

[ 本帖最后由 清新氧气 于 2006-7-26 13:45 编辑 ]

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Issue43 "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."

Judging a leader, in my view, should centers on the leadership such as insights and wisdom, instead of excessive attention to the moral or ethic standard. The speaker overexaggerates the moral factors; in fact, the core responsibility of leader requires oftentimes subordination to some moral codes. However, a higher pursuit of moral and ethic standards will undoubtedly add charm to the leaders.

It is well known that the highest goal of an effective leader is to gain the overall success of an organization, small or big, an enterprises or a country. To be more specific更有效的，用的好~, during the tenure, thea political leader should make great effort to ensure the well-being of his or her fellow citizens and the prosperity of the region being led. While thea businesses leader, say, chief executive official, should take account of the profit of the company. It is by no means an easy task to achieve the goal after balancing different interests and conquering tremendous difficulties.

On the one hand, the leadership consisting of insights, wisdom, effective communication thus, should be greatly underscored. Consider, for example, it is the very vision and wisdom of Alan Greenspan, the most effective chairman of federal reserve in American history, that contribute to the legend of economy in the United States-- a long-term high pace of economic development vis-à-vis 这个词很彪悍！！low rate of unemployment. The same is true with Jack Welch, who led the General Electric from a once bloated company to a dynamic modern one with high efficiency. He, through his wisdom, rather than simply adhering to moral codes, created the Six Sigma, which intends to greatly increase the overall efficiency of the corporate.介词前置用倒装，是不是更牛？ No one would deny their outstanding leadership by whether or not they personally donated to charities. Thus, the abilities involved in the tenure counts most, among all other factors, to judge an effective leader.
这段挺好

On the other, we should concede that the high moral standards also contribute to the effective leaders.  In fact, a leader, especially those with high exposure, if possessing great personalities and social responsibities, then would gainsgain charms both from its？ subordinated and the public.gain charms from没这么说话的吧。GOOGLE一下先 The loyalty of the subordinate, together with the respect of the public to him laid, oftentimes古代用法的屡次，I服了YOU！ lays the solid foundation for his effective leadership. 这句话表达的意思是他们因为有效的领导才能而忠诚吗？感觉这句话可以跟上句合并成一句更好。However, the personal moral and ethic codes do not always parallel, even clash with their core responsibility. The truth is, a real effective leader will, in many cases subordinate做个变换吧，comply with怎么样？ personal morality to the overall objective. 这个总起句和下面的例子好象相反。见下面评论。Consider, for example, a great state governor, after weighing all the factors, decide这个DECIDE在这里是怎么个用法？为什么可有两个动词，而它却不是单三形式 to close some profitable yet highly polluted company. It is quite possible that they will be taken to task in that the action causes a decline in both the tax revenue and pace of economic development. 此处对上个例子做个总结吧。不过觉得这个例子不太恰当，因为一个领导如果有道德，他才会把那些高利润但是对人健康有伤害的公司关门。而一个没有道德的人才会追求最高经济利益。这样的话，就跟你证明的观点相反了。Another case comes from Jack Welch. He decide to lay off a great number of employees when GE suffer the downturn, in order to keep the high efficiency, yet he is by means a not effective leader in this regard. 韦尔奇的例子想说明什么？应该交代一下吧Moreover, a effective leader, more often than not, sacrifice the leisure time with their family to contribute to the well-being of the company, which seemingly contradicted the highest moral standards yet never undermine their image as a leader.
全段在总结一句可能更好。

To sum up, despite the importance of rigorous moral and ethic codes, the effective leader instead should pay more attention to their leadership, which contributes most to the core responsibility.

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However, the personal moral and ethic codes which vary from person to person always do not parallel, but clash with their core responsibility. The truth is, a real effective leader will, in many cases subordinate some moral codes to the overall objective. Consider, for example,  it is quite possible that a great governor might be take to task for his delaying the colsure of some profitable yet highly-polluted factories, or that a eminent chief executive decides to lay off a great number of employees which might contradict some moral codes yet contribute to high efficiency during the downturn. Moreover, effective leaders, more often than not, sacrifice the leisure time with their family to the boom of the responsible corporate, which also seemingly contradict the highest moral standards yet never undermines their public images. Therefore, it is by no means reasonable to consider the highest moral and ethic standards as the prerequisite of an effective leader.

想了很久 觉得自己的逻辑还是非常欠缺的, 加油加油!

[ 本帖最后由 清新氧气 于 2006-7-26 14:59 编辑 ]

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