138 leader 同主题

cellophane05UID: 2135343

更新的内容请见4＃，大家互改，也就改4＃的吧，:victory:

第一次写，时间超了15分钟，:L:L:L，继续努力，大家共同提高了！

138. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Comparing to the leader of a group, requisites for a member of a group demands less. However, more responsibility of leaders gives rise to more benefits in the other angle.

First of all, a leader of a group should be sensitive to the advancement of relative fields. As a group leader, he or she has to be quite familiar with the trend of technology clearly. In the burgeoning technology revolution, any innovation will lead to the thorough change of industry. Take digital camera for example. With the emergence of digital camera, the traditional camera is at great challenge. Film industry, consequently, will suffer a dramatic decrease. If the leader of a film company failed to realized such trend and even expanded the scale of the production, the company will definitely face its music in the soon. Therefore, the leader should predict the prospect of the field by virtue of experience and constantly study. In the light of mastering a skill, it is worthwhile to be a leader.

Another requisite for a leader is much more responsibility. A group leader has the final decision to the critical proposal from other people. That is to say, a leader has more power to perform. For any ambitious person, the proper performance of giant power is the a pleasure in life. More right means more accountability. The elegant and determinative decision to deal with company’s crisis is the duty of a leader. When we reminisce the reform carried out by Gerstner in IBM, we admire the courage and insightful measures to reconstruct a new empire. That is the attraction of power to contribution to the prosperity of a group.

Other qualifications for a leader are credit, reliability, and popularity. A good leader should be welcomed and admired by his or her employees. Only that, the measures passed by the leader can be implemented completely, and employees are willing to reflect their own opinions to the group. Such qualities for a leader are treasure for any one. Perhaps, the popularity is the other factor for many people to pursue for a leader.

In conclusion, to be a leader of a group may require more than to be a member do. The qualities for a leader, such as prudence, responsibility, popularity, are attraction in the same time.

[ 本帖最后由 cellophane05 于 2006-7-29 19:04 编辑 ]

junewindUID: 2225038

看了一遍
一个疑问：这篇文章好像是在写作为一个领导者需要有什么样的素质了
是不是有一点偏题啊？

cellophane05UID: 2135343

原帖由 junewind 于 2006-7-28 20:09 发表
看了一遍
一个疑问：这篇文章好像是在写作为一个领导者需要有什么样的素质了
是不是有一点偏题啊？

确实有这种感觉:L，明天修改一下。

刚展开到twe，还不是很熟悉。

谢谢提出意见

cellophane05UID: 2135343

修改后，大家继续提意见啊。

A member and a leader have strikingly different roles to play in a group as their names indicate. To be a member, one will feel calm and stable in their work, receiving much more spare time with family. However, for ambitious people, it is more worthwhile to choose leaders in their career stage considering the following reasons.

First of all, a leader of a group is specially sensitive to the prospect of his or her realm. A leader can draw a comprehensive conclusion by virtue of deep investigation from different angles and focus on the frontier advancement. Not like a member, who is occupied by the detailed and routine work, a leader should pay great attention to the trend of new technology. Any insightful decision from a leader can determine the prospect of the company and whole members. With the burgeoning development of technology, more and more disruptive innovations are challenge the traditional techniques, such as biology, digital camera. A leader of pesticide factory may realize the impact from the rising biology, and makes a strategy transformation to avoid the latent bankruptcy.

Another attraction of leaders is their power to deal with obstacle. A leader has sufficient right to decide the response to the crisis. A proper action can rescue the rickety company, even make it prosperous. That is the amazing power a leader has.

Finally, a leader has his or her own unique personality to win the love of whole employees. A good leader can communicate with subordinates efficiently. The leader is welcomed by the employees, who are eager to express their opinions. Therefore, the leader gains the reflection from employees, and wins the adoration at the same time.

As Napoleon said, ‘a soldier, who does not incline to be a general, is not a good soldier’. For those ambitious and capable people, leaders are the best choice.

khakiguyUID: 2137157

A member and a leader have strikingly different roles to play in a group as their names indicate. To be a member, one will feel calm and stable啥意思 in their work, receiving much more spare time with family. However, for ambitious people, it is more worthwhile to choose leaders in their career stage considering the following reasons.

First of all, a leader of a group is specially sensitive to the prospect of his or her realm. A leader can draw a comprehensive conclusion by thevirtue of deep investigation from different angles and focus on the frontier advancement意思不重复吗. Not like a memberdifferent from a member, who is occupied by the detailed and routine work, a leader should pay great attention to the trend of new technology不一定是technology吧. Any insightful decision from a leader can determine the prospect of the company and whole members. With the burgeoning development of technology, more and more disruptive innovations are challengechallenging the traditional techniques,approaches such as biology, digital camera这两个放一起怪怪的. A leader of pesticide factory may realize the impact from the rising biology, and makes a strategy transformation to avoid the latentpotential比较好吧 bankruptcy.

Another attraction of leaders is their power to deal with obstacle. A leader has been providedsufficient right to decide the response to the crisis. A proper actiondecision can rescue the rickety?? company, even make it prosperous. That is the amazing power a leader has.

Finally, a leader has his or her own unique personality to win the love of whole employees. A good leader can communicate with subordinates efficiently. The leader is welcomed by the employees, who are eager to express their opinions. Therefore, the leader gains the reflection不懂 from employees, and wins the adoration at the same time


As Napoleon said, ‘a soldier, who does not incline to be a general, is not a good soldier’. For those ambitious and capable people, leaders are the best choice.

行文还是蛮流畅的，个别单词觉得怪怪的，不过还是有点写leader应该具备的素质那种意思，个人觉得member比较好写的说

stephen_shiUID: 153423

个人感觉末段还应在重述下上边的分论点,不然结尾略显仓促.